Hi guys this is my first story do please review.
"Wake up!" said Chari, my brother, it's breakfast time.
"Mom, can I have breakfast in bed?" I asked.
"nice try, but no" said my mum.
"oooooh muum," I moaned. I, went downstairs to eat and saw a shiny, glowing, bright light. "Wow".
"What", said my brother, Chari and my mum.
"never mind" I said "What's for breakfast?" I asked.
"Bread with tea" said, my mom.
"Ok" I said, so did Chari, after we ate I felt bad for the football team.
I got picked for the football team I feel like it's a bad thing. It was after dinner time.
"Come on where going to be late," said, Chari. So off we went to the school bus. First Numeracy I still felt bad about the football team, "Play time" The teacher said. We were playing football outside but I still felt bad because we have to challenge the juniors from Pokémon best school, I got the ball and scored 2 nil. There now I feel better "I can do this I can do this," I was saying to myself and scored 3 nil.
The other team got the ball I tackled them I got the ball then they tackled me and scored 3 : 1.
"Play time over," said the teacher.
"Now literacy. "Dinner time,"
"HOORAY," Everyone shouted then I saw the glowing light again . …