Ummm…..hello!!! This is my first fic and I thought of this while eating…ramen actually…This fic is pre-Kyuubi attack.
Well anywho….Please give some advice and review!!!! I would love some feeding back! R&R
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto.
Serenity
By: theloverofanime
1:00 am 8 ½ months into pregnancy
"Minato?" I whispered softly. I rolled over so I could face him. His blonde hair was in his face and his bangs moved up and down with each breath he took. Of course, Minato didn't seem to hear me. So just stared at him for a couple of moments, wondering how I ended up with someone so perfect.
He looks so…peaceful…Why did I say his name again?
Grrr….That's why. The baby kicked, demanding food.
Why are you always hungry kid?! Waking me in the middle of the night just because your hungry! Good thing I won't have to get up get food. An evil smirk graced my expression. I looked once again at Minato. While I had been arguing with my stomach he had rolled over, facing away from me.
I sat up on my elbows, Goodness kid, your making me so fat I can barely sit up by myself, and tried to look over at his face. I stretched my neck as far as it would go, getting more frustrated by the second. GRRRRR…..I know your hungry!!!!
"Minato." I stated a little louder, getting even more pissed off. The least he could do is wake up enough to help me sit up before our kid kicks a hole in my ribcage.
Yet again Minato didn't hear me. He groaned and moved the blanket up to his shoulders. Fine, your in for it Minato. Your damn kid is hungry…so your going to feed him!
"MINATO!!" I screamed. The scream was so loud it rung in my own ears. He jumped and fell onto the floor. He immediately popping right back up with a look of anxiety and concern on his face, all sleepiness gone.
"What's wrong Kushina?! Is the baby coming?!!" Minato asked with shaky breaths, looking more anxious with each breath.
"Minato I-"
"Do we need to get Tsunade?! I'll get the pack!!" He ran into the other room. I, still sitting up on my elbows, was getting even angrier. This was the 4th time in the last 2 weeks this has happened and Minato did the same thing every time. At first it was hilarious, but now it was annoying and frustrating. He continued running around mumbling things and sweat poured down his face. He didn't even spare a glance at me, too caught up in running around like a headless chicken to notice the deadly glare that was forming on my face.
I was propped up there for about 15 minutes, my face getting redder and redder every time Minato walked into the room. GGGGGRRRRRRR!!!!!!! My son aimed a kick straight into my ribcage, just as his father ran out of the room muttering loudly about getting to see his child soon. I heard a few scraps and bangs from the other room. I tried desperately to reign in my anger, which rivaled now Tsunade's. Even my son seemed to getting angrier, as his kicks within my stomach grew stronger and started to get painful. Of course, my stomach is literally roaring now.
Suddenly Minato ran out the door talking extremely loud of how he was going to meet his son and I at the hospital. I stared at the doorway in complete and utter shock, my jaw on the floor. He's completely lost his mind…What will the villagers think when they find out their Hokage just left me here pregnant and hungry, while having a mental breakdown thinking I'm in labor. Then it dawned on me. He went to the hospital to meet his son…WHEN HE'S RIGHT HERE!!!!!!!!!
My rage went well past the boiling point.
"AAAAAHHHHH!!!!" I started screaming in pure rage. Smoke could probably be seen coming out of my ears to anyone that was looking. When I get up out of this bed someone is gonna get it! I swear to Kami if someone doesn't find me soon…UGH!
I HATE being pregnant! (remember she's still screaming out her rage)
I couldn't sit up without any help! My feet were so swollen I couldn't even wear shoes anymore! My stomach roared with hunger! My moods change every second of every freakin day! And above that my unborn child's father, the fucking HOKAGE, just ran out the door having some sort of mental breakdown!!
Suddenly pain shot through my stomach. Silencing my screams of fury. Worry flooded through me. What did I do? Am I going to lose him?! The pain continued steadily increasing, but unlike contractions, the pain didn't seem to stop. I was to exhausted to hold myself on my elbows and just laid back onto the bed.
Wrapping an arm around where my unborn child was located, I started to cry from the pain and worry. Then it just hit me, and the tears flowed. Sobs racked through to my core, it was like I couldn't stop crying, and the harder I cried the more it hurt. I took deep breaths trying to calm down.
Oh Kami…I'm just as bad as Minato…reign in your emotions Kushina…
20 minutes later…
Just as I got even a scrap of control over my emotions the sound of breaking glass echoed throughout the house. I tried desperately to left myself onto my elbows, but the pain shooting up my stomach was to much. I wrapped both arms around my unborn child and cried out with a hoarse voice as 2 people burst into the room. I could barely make them out one ran towards her. I couldn't focus on anything but the pain. After several moments I felt a gentle pressure on my forehead. Then everything went black
(3rd POV)
Jiraiya, with an unconscious Minato on his back, and Tsunade stood there with looks of complete horror on their faces. Jiraiya froze, barely breathing at all, shocked at what was happening. Tsunade, upon seeing Kushina in such pain, ran to her side. Kushina's face was distorted pain with eyes shut, tears rolling down her face, and sweat beading around her hairline. Tsunade placed a hand on Kushina's forehead, knocking her unconscious.
She placed her other hand on her swollen stomach, glowing with green chakra. Tsunade's eyes looked like they were going to pop out of their sockets.
"The stress is effecting the baby. We need to get to the hospital NOW!" she yelled.
Tsunade's yell knocked Jiraiya out of his frozen trance. He dumped Minato on the floor and sprinted to Kushina. He lifted her up and ran out the front door as fast as his legs could carry him.
Tsunade started after him, but then knelt by the unconscious Minato.
"Of all the times to be unconscious Minato…" She quickly sprinted out the door towards the hospital.
A/N:
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