Hey guys first story yea, any way this is the first chapter duh and in this it is sort of humany because the walk around on two legs and all ponies are skilled at karate and bow and arrow, dagger, hidden blade, throwing knifes and sword. If you like it I will add on to it. Let's go.
"The Last Eclipse"
Chapter 1:
The reveal of the Last Eclipse
"Mom" is all I heardcoming from my little brother's room, "hey you okay there Nova?" I asked my little bro, Nova My only member of my family left alive ever since the war (A/N this takes place after a war my OC was in) "No... No I am not okay, I hate living like this" Nova screamed at me. "Living like what?, Huh you think you have it hard huh, well For me being one of the high ranking officers in the NLR, I see men die almost everyday so I can get enough money to get you through school"! I yelled at him and almost immediately he started to cry.
"I just miss her" he told me with tears streaming down his face as he ran and hugged me, "I miss her so much, I just want to kill myself" as he said this I pulled him in closer to me, then I told him something "You are the only thing left in this world that I love. Don't ever forget that". We stayed there the rest of the night.
(A couple of days later)
"Were that little brat Nova, he should be home from school by now….." I thought to myself as I opened the Newspaper. "Nothing really interesting going on" I thought but then something caught my eye; a picture of the school Nova goes to. Then I read something I would never forget "Young Alicorn Named Nova Eclipse murdered. Nova was a normal Alicorn who lived with his older brother a commander of the NLR. Nova died as he was walking home when he saw three men beating a women, he stood up trying to defend her with his magic, when one of them came up from behind him and grabbed him. The rest is too horrible to be aloud onto the news. I give all my condolences to his only family member."
"No, No, Nova, he's gone…. I can't believe he is GONE NOOOO". From that day on I became Commander Prince Eclipse (A/N he always was but still) the last of the Eclipse's. "ARGHHHHHHHHHH NOVAAA" I yelledm
My eyes then went Black, "Black Hole what are you Do,ing" (A/N black hole is like nightmare moon but Eclipse can control it better) I yelled as I could feel myself turning into him as I changed so did my magic I shot a blast of magic into the air screaming "NOVA NOOO" then everything went black.
End
(A/N so what did you think of that pretty short I know but I just wanted to set the mood of the last eclipse, Eclipse is his last name, his real name is lunar. So he is the last of his family. Post the 2nd chapter up when I can.
Until next time the is Prince Eclipse saying, may the moon guide you with her wisdom and power, May the moon be with you, Stay frosty my friends).