Hey guys this is my frist story ever! ~im so happy i hope u like it! oh and this is an fma sorty
Ch.1-...(cant find a title)
"Ugh...how much more do we have to walk, it's like 10000 deggres out here!" graoned Ed. "...Al?" there twas -Lol silence. "ALPHONSE! WERE ARE YOU!" Ed was scared. "I'm right under you! help me get out of the sand!" Al said. Ed helped Al get out. "man you sacred me for like, the 5th time damn it!" "it's not my fault i'm in heavy metal!" yah..true thought ed
" Yay, were finally here!" Ed sterched his arms. "yah, that was prettty long!" Al added. "lets get a drink,i'm thristy!" Ed & Al walked to the outdoor dinking place. in thar was a dude with a crap and apron working for another coustermer. "hey we have tourists!" said that dude(imma call him mario cuz i dont now his name!) "IM NO FREAKEN TOURIST!" YELLED Ed. "You dont look like your from Liore.." Said Mario. " We're here to check out this place.." Al said. " you two, why are you going with your father and why bis his vioce like a 10 year old's and you are tiny...some family you got there!" "HEY YOU DUMB ASS I"M NOT HIS SON HE"S MY LITTLE BROTHER! AND I...I AM NOT TINY! IM 12 YEARS OLD! WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH YOU PEOPLE!" yelled ed.(Charaterists Time~ Ed is a rather oddball,but he is really smexy.) CA-" "hey i got the oranges, 8,978 to be exact! I've counted them twice just liek u asked! Said Rose. " Oh, Thank you rose!, oh and can you show these two wriedos around Liore, and meet father cornello?" "sure! frist i have too get somthing quick okay?" "yep!" Ed and Al were about to leave till Al bumped(i wouldent exactly say that) his head on this roof thingy. "children, say your prayer and stuff lik- KABLOOY! "Aww now look what you freaks done!" Said mario in an angery mood. "Here i'll fix it!" said Al. Al draw a transmution circlewith alchemy, and the radio from the 1920's was fixed! "wow, thanks! it look as good as if it were new! And you did it with alchemy? "yep im an alchemist!" al said(why am i always using said?) "So am i!, actully imma State Alchemist!" "thats preety cool" "I"M BACK!" said Rose (Charaterists Time~ Rose is a girl with RED-Violet bangs and brown hair. she is a religous nut.)
"So, what brings you here to Liore?" asked Rose. "well,something fishy(i hate fish) is going on..." "like what?" "Father Cornello is doing some pretty wried stuff..with alchemy.." al said, "And not only that, his using the philsophers stone!" Ed added. "umm.. no he's not. He saved us." "yah sure he did, he is just gonna make this place be like 2 years ag-" "NO HE IS NOT!" interrupeted Rose. Just Then Father Cornello(i hate his bastdrdly face) came into the hallyway. Rose ran to him. she kissed him(kidding) oh..is that the Fullmetal Alchemist!" Cornell said. fight fithg NOW COME THEE SERIOUS PART! "Hey rose, even if you do human transmutation",took of his jacket and showed his sexy auto-mail arm. "and espiclley like my brother al, show em' al! Al took of his head.(sounds very...odd) See this, thats my blood seal, it's bonds this amor with my soul." al saids. Rose's eyes widend "no way.." she ran away, she ran away tears streaming down her face. "now lokk what you've done,Get Out we will deal with this later!" Yelled Cornello
Ed & Al left.