This is not part of the story. ATTENTION! To all who are following this story: It is being discontinued. I no longer have the will to keep writing it, and the story has pretty much disappeared from my head. I would have done this sooner, but I do have people who follow this story.

To the anonymous reviewer: I highly doubt that you'll be able to see this. As you stated before, you stopped reading in disgust after about 7 chapters. To answer your previous questions, even though you won't be able to see the answers unless you followed, which I know you didn't, (you probably don't even have an account here), read below:

"Ugh, I don't see how people can call this fanfiction. " Well, it is called Fanfiction because A) it is fictional and B) it takes place in a world not my own and uses characters from a different story. If you want to know why it is specified as Fanfiction, please take the time to read the Fanfiction guidelines.

"I believe stories that focus solely on an OC don't deserve to be called Fanfiction. It's just a story with a bunch of characters from an already established universe. I mean, really. Who's this character? She already drives me away from the story, mainly due to the fact that she has the "tragic incident" trait.""

Okay, first off, what you believe is YOUR opinion, and though you are entitled to spread it around as much as you like, people do NOT have to take your word at it's root. They don't have to listen to you, and you should learn this now. Second, if you paid attention, the story explains who the OC is. I don't care about your views on her.

"Seriously shows signs of sue-ness. Actually, she basically is a "Mary Sue". She's very important and the way she enters the temple in, by all means, a "Mary Sue" manner. And the fact that she'll get with Raimundo is another giveaway of her sue traits."

Another thing I feel I need to note: the dates of which this story was originally written. People and stories change over a period of time. For instance, I originally started writing this when I was 12 and had different views on how it should be written. I only started posting this stuff forever ago, with very minimal editing. And I haven't updated this story in a very long time, which I'm sure makes the people following this mad as all Hell, especially with the cruel cliff-hangers on practically ever chapter. As for the Raimundo thing: I was in love with Raimundo as a little girl watching the show. I was also sort of in love with Jack Spicer. Since Melody was supposed to represent a new improved better and awesome version of me, it would only make sense that I paired her up with Raimundo "from the beginning", so you can understand why that it is how it is.

"She get's with him when she just appears, even though Kimiko's been around since the show. "

Kimiko never really had him in the first place. Also, I can tell you are a fan of what is called "Canon", which I have no qualms about, but of which you should understand that if you are reading an AU and OC fic, you cannot go around and criticize another person's work based on your own biased views. Also, Kimiko is part of the show, of course she's been around since the show!

"I've read as far as seven chapters and I just couldn't go any further. How does this deserve to be called "fanfiction" in the first place? Just skip this and write an original story that will most likely get published. "

I had already planned to. I've just been thinking about changing a few names and places, altering the order of things, and messing with a few personalities and story lines. As I have stated before, if you want to know how this classifies as Fanfiction, then read the guidelines. Unlike most people, I actually did, and found that, yes, my fiction actually does classify as Fanfiction. I read the guidelines before I posted this a couple years ago. And for your information, I appreciate your review, even if it is seen as negative to most people. However, I would appreciate it if you actually tried your hand at actually fic-writing before you go around criticizing my work. I find that people become much more appreciative of the efforts other people make if they have experience with what the other people are doing.

"One last thing. Why does every author in the Xiaolin Showdown fandom have to use a girl OC? Ticks me off because some random little girl appears and turns out to be super important and/or is very powerful that villains take an interest in them. Especially Chase Young, even though the man has been watching Omi. What's the fascination with OC'S anyway?"

Ah, the most important question yet. Most Fanfictioners are in fact female, and they base their OC's on either themselves, people they know, or how they themselves would like to be. People like to feel important, therefore they give "themselves" the biggest parts. Having the villains take interest in them only adds the the story, as possible conflicts could occur because of the interest in the importance and power of the OC. And as for Chase Young, everyone loves him as the most bad-assed villain, so it only makes sense that emphasis would be put on him. And for the record, he has NOT been watching Omi the for the entirety of the show. He wants the strongest apprentice, and Omi is the likeliest candidate for the position. The reason he would suddenly be more interested in the OC would be because the OC is suddenly the likeliest candidate.

Furthermore, THIS IS FANFICTION! The purpose of which is to CHANGE the original story, or add to it. OC's do an impressively good job, as the biggest change to a story would be a new, never before seen character. Fanfiction has no rules in this regard. We can add whoever the hell we want, do whatever the hell we want, and everything else however the hell we want. As long as we are not writing the exact show (e.i. a narrative of the original show, what is said and done), we can go as crazy as we want with this. That doesn't mean you have to read it.

You have officially lost The Game.

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(Anonymous has been TROLLED)