Hello! First Fanfiction ever created by mypa. It is about Divergent set right after Al died. I suggest not reading before finishing Divergent. I'm just kind of hoping that this doesn't totally fail and I don't get like bad ratings for it. Please review by telling me how I can make it better, just please be as nice as possible and NO FOUL LANGUAGE please. Thanks! :D
Tris`s POV
I feel terrible. Even though I kinda still hate Al for what he did to me and for betraying me, I think I understand why he did it and I almost know that if I had just forgiven him he probably wouldn't have jumped. I hate Eric right now so bad too, because the way he makes Al seem like hero 'cause he jumped makes me think that more people are going to jump to their deaths so that they can at least be remembered. I'm still curled into a ball on my bed when Tobias walks in to the dormitory. I look up at him, knowing he probably came here for me… and that my eyes are probably red and puffy from tears. He looks a bit shocked when he sees me, but quickly tries to hide it with a look of sympathy. "Hey," he says softly, "it's okay, Tris, it's okay." He sits down on my bed next to me, I move so that I am leaning my head on him with my arms around his waist, and he puts an arm around my shoulders and holds my left hand with his free hand. I look up at him and say "It's all my fault" with tears welling in my eyes. His face resembles shock again, but this time he doesn't hide it. "How can you even think that, Tris? He's the one who hurt you and helped Peter and Drew try to kill you!" I try to respond "But I could have forgiven him but I didn't and he…" "No, Tris" He says firmly "He can't have expected you to forgive him for something so bad, never. If you had done that to someone, and afterwards you regretted it, would you have actually expected them to forgive you?" "Well no, but…" I start, but he interrupts me by sighing heavily and pressing his lips to mine. "Tris," he says softly again "One reason I love you so much is because of this." He says, squeezing my hand a bit. "You always try to make others seem better than they really are, always try to put the blame on yourself even though it's not your fault." I open my mouth to say something back, but close it when nothing comes. I feel a tear running down my cheek, and he uses his finger to wipe it off, holds my face in his hands, and kisses me. When we stop for air, I mutter to him "I love you, Tobias" "I love you too, Tris" he says back. Right when we lean in for another kiss, Christina and Will walk in. When they see us, they give us small, sad smiles and walk to their beds. Me and Tobias look at each other, our face centimeters apart, and then he whispers into my ear "If you want, you can come to my apartment for tonight" with a small, crooked smile, he walks out of the dormitory. Christina gets up and takes his place on my bed. "You okay?" I smile at her. "Yah, wanna go, like do something?" I say cheerfully to show I just need to move and forget it. She gives me a sly smile. "Like… go shopping!" I roll my eyes. "Fine." "Yes! Will, we're going shopping!" She exclaims, jumping up and pulling me. I smile and wave with my free hand to Will before being dragged all the way out.
Thanks for reading! I know it's kinda short, and I wrote it all in one section. I think I'm always going to write in one section instead of paragraphs, sorry. Please review!