Hello peeps. This is my first fanfiction so its gonna suck but anyway here it is.
I woke up with my hand under my face i know there is going to be a mark. I hear my phone ring.
When the days are cold
And the cards all fold
And the saints we see are all made of go-
I cut it off by answering the call
"Yes?" I ask slightly annoyed
"Tris?" My brother asks in a voice so i know he needs a favor
"Caleb what do you want?"
"Um can you come pick me up at Zeke's?"
"What did you guys do this time?"
"Oh Zeke and Uriah are wasted -of course im not- and they picked me up so i have no car."
"Ugh ill be there in a minute."
"Thank yo-" i hang up i get up off my bed and go to my walk in closet. I pick out a big poncho style black shirt with galaxy printed leggings and of course my combat boots. I change into them and add a touch of gold eyeliner to make my eyes pop, some mascara and little bit of tinted lip balm. I throw my hair up in a messy bun and get my purse and my car keys.
I go out into the garage and get into my black SUV. I type in Zeke's address inti the gps and drive to his house. When i get there Caleb is sitting on the porch laughing his ass off. Not wasted huh? I see Four and blush, he is shirtless and laughing with Caleb. Four was my tutor. When Caleb sees me with my arms folded across my chest he immediately staggars over to me.
"Thank you Tris."
"Yeah okay get into the car." I say rolling my eyes.
"Oh yeah we have to take Four too."
"And why is that?"
"Because."
"FOUR GET YOUR ASS INTO THE CAR!" I yell to him getting into the drivers seat. He wobbles over to the back seat and sits down. He whispers
"You look good Tris." I blush when he was my tutor i was as ugly as butts. I start to drive home.
Well how was it? I know it probably sucked but still. I kinda want to have Tris end up with someone else not Tobias. So please review if you think i should and if so then who you think it should be. Thank you!
-PaintedRose101