Sapphire Toxin
Hello there everyone, well this is my first ever fan fiction submission. Round of applause I finally took the plunge and joined because this site is so awesome!!!
Anyhow, as I say this is my first time so be gentle when you review kay? This is a Sakura and Eriol fic that came to me as I was listening to the song Poison. I can't decide whether or not this should be a one-shot, so review my work and give me your opinion if you feel inclined to. Thanks and on with the story!!
P.S sorry if it's spaced out weird I don't really get how it works lol
Prologue
She'd never realised how appropriate the lyrics of Alice Cooper's song Poison until she met him.
Your cruel device, your blood like ice
That was him alright. Cruel, and he did act as though it were liquid ice flowing through his veins and not warm blood.
One look could kill, my pain your thrill
That was all it took. One look from his sapphire eyes and she was once more tangled in his restricting web. He thrived on her fear and pain, he seemed to get some kind of sadistic enjoyment out of her suffering. Probably because it was his little mind games that provoked these emotions from her. He was the only one who could reduce her to a submissive wreck with a few well chosen words.
I hear you calling and its needles and pins, I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name
This was also true. Whenever he said her name the same pinpricks of fear and expectancy danced along her spine. She hated it, it made her realise just how weak she was when it came to him. She did not like loosing control; she did not like being considered weak. One day she was determined to make him suffer the same torture he put her through, she would make him say her name with the same painful desire.
Don't wanna touch you but you're under my skin, I wanna taste you but your lips are venomous poison
He was under her skin; he had worked his way into her system and she was powerless to get him out. She was afraid of his kisses, afraid of how much she craved them. This was a dangerous craving indeed. His commanding lips were the strongest way for him to work his toxin deeper into her veins and again, there was nothing she could do to fight it.
You're poison running through my veins
He was indeed the poison running through her veins: only there was no known cure for this particular brand. The aptly named 'Sapphire Toxin'.
Well there you go, my first fic. Tell me what you think in a review, like should I leave it like this or develop it? Thanks very much for reading!
MoonlightShadowHostess (A.K.A Jay)