Ok. This is my first fanfic so please write your honest opinions.
Fabian's POV
"Sorry." she said and ran off. "Who's the American?" Patricia asked. I shrugged my shoulders. They started walking forward, but I hung back for a moment. I watched the girl run after the taxi driver. She was beautiful. I watched the way the sun made her amazing brown hair look golden. She was absolutley beautiful. I didn't realize right away, but I was breathing heavily. I had no idea what would happen this day. This couldn't be real. I didn't even know this girl and yet I was in love with her. What am I talking about? I can't love someone I've never even met! Oy! I must be going crazy. But, what if this is love at first sight? Wait. I don't believe in love at first sight. Well, at least I didn't. But that's the past. This is now. I was sure this was love at first sight. I knew I loved this girl, whoever she was. "Fabian? Fabian, come on!" Joy said as she pulled on my arm. I snapped back into reality. I couldn't wait until the the end of school. I really wanted to meet this girl. I really really do.
What did you think? Yeah this chapter is really short, but I need to know if I should make this a one-shot or write more.