Hannah's Neighbours ~ Lee Sisters
Hey there everyone, well this is my very first Fan Fiction Story. I would really like to know what you think of it, even if it criticisms. I know there might be some grammar mistakes, if you could help spot them and tell me that would be great! I would really like to post another chapter for this, but I won't until I know that I'm doing ok! Please help me by giving me feedbacks.
Thanks,
JeniiBAR
I DO NOT OWN "NEIGHBOURS"! I only own this story's plot and the character Hannah Lee!
Chapter 1: Meet Hannah
~On Ramsay Street~
Ringo and Zeke appeared at the corner of Ramsay Street. They have just come back from an afternoon jogged and were sweating and panting. They stopped in front number 28 to stretch their muscles.
"You're improving Zeke, usually you pass out at the lake," said Ringo. Zeke was breathing heavily so didn't reply. As they stretched in silent, a cab pulled up in the middle of the street. The back door swung open, and out stepped an Asian girl wearing a red v-shaped scarf, a white shirt with denim-shorts, black leathered boots, shades and earphones.
"Wow, who's that?" asked Ringo. Both Ringo and Zeke stopped stretching and were looking at Ramsay Street's new arrival. "She's hot!"
"Wait till I tell Donna you were checking out a girl," Zeke teased. Ringo gave him a friendly shove and both continue to watch the girl. The cab driver helped her with her luggage and drove away. The girl looked around the street, however missing Zeke and Ringo. She left her luggage where it was, and started walking backward admiring her surroundings. Without realising she was near the gutter, she turned around to walk forward but tripped and fell flat on her face. Ringo and Zeke tried to hold in their laughter, and went to help her up.
"아파!" Shouted the girl as she rubbed her sore knees, she dusted her palms and started to talk in Korean. [~In Korean~] "What rotten luck! Stupid delayed flight, stubborn taxi driver and now this. I shouldn't have come." As she dusted her arms and leg, Ringo came over and offered his hand. The girl grabbed it and pulled herself up. She nodded her head in thanks and looked around like she was looking for something.
"Um…are you lost? Do you need any help?" asked Zeke. The girl starred at him, and then looked behind her to check if he was talking to someone else.
[~In Korean~] "Is he talking to me? Ah…I don't understand what he's saying," she said. The girl just gave a friendly smile and walked back to her luggage.
"I don't think she speaks English," said Ringo.
"I wonder what language she speaks then. Sounded like Korean or Japanese," said Zeke. They both watched the girl as she pulled her luggage around the street, still searching for something.
[~In Korean~] "Why are they starring at me? Ah…I think I'm lost." She looked around, trying to find the house where the person she's visiting was living at. Then she had an idea and walked toward Ringo and Zeke. She took out a piece of paper and showed it to them.
"28 Ramsay Street Erinsborough Melbourne Australia." Zeke read the note. He then looked at Ringo. They both starred at the girl, who gave them both a puzzle look.
"Are you here to see Sunny Lee?" asked Ringo
Recognising the familiar Korean name, the girl nodded and said "그래, 난 써니의 친구입니다!" Both the guys exchanged a look. The girl stood there just as puzzled as they were.
~Kennedy's House~
Ringo walked in with the girl's suitcase, followed by Zeke and the girl. She started turning her head, looking at the place. Susan and Karl were in the kitchen making sandwiches when they noticed a new face.
"Who's this?" asked Susan.
"안녱하세요!" The girl gave a polite bow to Susan and Karl.
"Sunny's friend, I think," replied Zeke. "She doesn't speak English so we couldn't ask what sort of relationship she has with Sunny."
"So you don't know who she is or what her name is, but you brought her into the house?" asked Karl, he seem quite angry about this issue.
"Well, when we mention the name Sunny she reacted to it. So we're guessing that they know each other," Ringo explained. "I guess the only way to find out is to let her talk to Sunny." So Zeke went to call Sunny.
~Meanwhile, At Harold's~
Donna and Sunny were working on their English assignments, when Sunny's phone rang.
"Hey Zeke...What!...No, I haven't heard from anyone…No, I'll be home straight away." Sunny hung up the phone and started to pack her bag. Donna looked at her confused but started to pack up as well.
"What's wrong?" she asked when they walked out of Harold's.
"Zeke said one of my Korean friends came over, and is at home right now. Apparently she can't speak English so they don't know her name." she answered. "It's weird because none of my so-call friends kept contact with me after I came to Australia."
~Kennedy's House~
The mystery girl, who claims to be Sunny's friend, was walking around the living room looking at all the books and photos on the shelf. She walked by the window and saw Sunny coming from the corner of the street. She took of her V-shaped scarf and left it on the couch along with her shades and approached the others who were sitting at the dining table.
"터렛?" [Pronounced "to-ret", which sounds similar to toilet. Not an official Korean word] she asked. Understanding what she meant, Susan showed her to the toilet. Just as they disappeared behind the door, Sunny and Donna came in through the front door. Sunny looked around to see her mystery guest but only saw Ringo, Zeke and Karl was there.
"Where is this guest of mine?" she asked Zeke who came over to give me a hug. Anxious to find out who her guest was, she gentle brushed Zeke away.
"Bathroom," Zeke replied.
Sunny walked over to sit on the couch but notice the scarf and shades. She picked it up to inspect it closely. Her eyes widen with shocked. Anger was boiling inside of her as she looked at the items in her hand.
"Is this hers?" she asked suddenly. Frighten by the sudden outburst, Zeke and Ringo only nodded weakly at her. Sunny threw the items on the couch and stomped to the bathroom just when Susan exited. Everyone was surprise and confuse as to why Sunny was so angry. Then they heard banging and shouting coming from the bathroom.
"GET OUT HERE! I KNOW YOU ARE IN THERE!
The door opened and Sunny was pulling the girl to the living room. Everyone stood still, wondering what was going on.
"What are you doing here?" she asked angrily. The girl didn't answer she just stared at Sunny with the same angry look.
"She doesn't understand English," said Susan trying to calm the atmosphere down.
"Really…? Amazing I wonder why I didn't know that!" she said to the girl. "What the hell are you doing here?" The atmosphere in the house was currently very uncomfortable. There was dead silent as the two girls stared at each other. The others didn't dare to speak or even moved, scared that they might make things worse. Finally the girl broke the smile with a sigh.
"Is this how you greet people in Australia? Geez, this place has a bad influence on you. We haven't seen each other in years and this is how you greet me. No "hi, how are you?" or "long time no see". I'm offended," she said calmly.
Everyone stared at the girl who they thought couldn't speak English, but now was speaking eloquent English. Karl broke the silent this time.
"What is going on here?" he asked the girl.
"Sorry, forgive me for my rudeness. My name is Hannah. Hannah Lee, I'm Sunny's little Sister."
*End of Chapter 1*
Korean Glossary (according to Google translation):
아파: Ouch
그래, 난 써니의 친구입니다: Yes, I am Sunny's friend
안녱하세요: Hello/ How are you?
Chapter 2 will be out next week! (25/01/10)