HELLO! welcome to my new story! not sure that the writings that good... but you guys can tell me if it is or not. i'm gonna be updating in a few days for chapter 2 so it shouldn't be a long wait. obviously nobody wants to hear me ramble so on with the story!

(ED)

I walked through the busy streets in Central hurriedly, frantically searching the crowd for the blonde, blue-eyed mechanic. She didn't say she would be visiting us at Central! But I'm positive that was her.

My eyes darted around, catching blonde streaks of hair flowing around a corner into an alley. Bingo.

(AL)

I walked into the dorm room me and Ed are sharing finding it surprisingly empty. I shut the door behind me and looked around "Ed, Are you here?" I called out. I walked to the bathroom door, which was shut and knocked on it "Brother?"

I asked, no reply. I knocked again "Ed! Are you in there?" again, no answer. I opened the door and peeked inside to find it empty too. That's weird Ed should have been back by now. I'll check with the colonel.

(ED)

The alley was empty. Nothing. "Winry, are you here?" I asked, my voice bouncing off the walls of the dark alley.

I walked slowly looking around and keeping my ears pricked for any sound. "Come on, Winry. Stop messing around." I said sternly, maybe I was just seeing stuff… I thought annoyed.

I went to turn around and forget about the whole situation when I suddenly heard a crashing sound. The sound came from inside that broken window that was presumably an abandoned house

I walked over to the Brocken window stepping over glass making a crunching sound under my feet; I peeked into the window finding the place empty other than all the broken furniture. I pushed myself up against the wall to get up to the window.

While sliding slowly through the window a sharp shard of glass cut through my pants causing them to rip and a sharp pain resulting into a warm liquid to run down my leg, blood. I eased myself into the house, landing feet first and looked around secretly and took a few steps forward to be suddenly hit in the head by something hard and round.

Everything went black.

(AL)

I ran through the halls of Central HQ towards the colonel's office pushing the door open causing everyone in the office to look up from the work they were busy with, looking surprised at my presence.

Riza Hawkeye stood up from her desk and walked over to me " Alphonse, is something wrong?" she asked with the slightest bit of worry tingeing her serious tone.

I shut the door behind me. "Is brother here?" I asked quickly becoming worried and Jean Havoc gave me a confused look "Chief? Hasn't he returned, yet? he left around about an hour ago Alphonse, sorry." He said and I looked over to the colonel's office door that was shut.

"are you sure he's not here?" I asked again to double check and they nodded. I walked back towards the door and opened it, "Alphonse-?" "Its alright." I cut Riza Hawkeye off, sounding calm. "Just tell Ed that I'm looking for him if you see him, ok?" I said and they nodded unsurely, agreeing.

I walked down the stairs that leaded up to Central HQ with a sinking feeling in my gut. Where are you Ed?

(ED)

I struggled opening my eyelids that drooped heavily and looked around finding everything hazy and blurry.

I looked around lazily wondering what was going on and I tried to move my arms and legs to find them tied down by something. Through my hazy vision I could make out the shape of a human, it turned towards a door leading into another room, calling out something coherent.

"W-where… am…I?" I asked weakly, surprised by my own raspy voice and the shadow looked my way and walked over to me and said something again which I still could not read.

I furrowed my brows in confusion, the shape leaned down to my face looking closely at me and I read its lips trying to read them. Subject number 4.02 the lips said, subject? Where am I!? "What are you planning to do with me?" I croaked out and the shadow moved away making hand gestures for someone to come.

Another shadow appeared in the door way and stood there for a second talking to the other shadow that had called it in, it walked near me kneeling down, I tried to move my head to what it was doing and saw a flashing red light and then I realized it had its hands planted on a transmutation circle.

I was in the middle of it. My heart suddenly started to beat erratically in my chest jerking my head to the side I screamed out "N-no! Stop! Somebody help me!" struggling against the restraints, the numbness finally starting to fade away.

The first shadow moved further away from the alchemical reaction, the other shadow that had activated it stood up, moving further away too, to join the shadow. I thrashed around screaming for them to untie me and stop this.

I kept screaming at the top of my lungs and the last thing I saw was the familiar blonde charge into the room angrily, pushing one of the shadows over and yelling at them while pointing in my direction, then red light crackled over 'Winry' which turned into Envy. Everything went black.

OKAAAAAY... that was my first chapter, i know it was short. GOSH IT WAS SOOO SHORT! *like Ed*

ED HEY!

WINRY OH SHUT UP.

And maybe my writing isn't the best, yet. but hey! i'm a newbie. please no flames and please review! i wanna get better at writing, and the only way thats gonna happen is if you guys review.

WINRY Tell the nice people to review Ed...

ED Why?!

WINRY Cause i told you to.

ED Fine... Review, nice people. there. ya happy?

WINRY Yep ;) BYE XX