Hello everyone this is my first time writing fanfic so I'm sorry if this is crap and my punctuation is terrible so tell me If you find a flooring random comma somewhere in my story and um what else oh yeah! I also love the Richard and camille Paring I seem to yell at my tv "just kiss already!" But I dont have the power to do that...evils.. So here it is.
"Jon hurry up! I know you hate tour buses but I love 'em" a impatient black haired girl called up to her boyfriend of two years who was balancing on a tall rock trying to tie his laces together but failing. "Jesus give me a second Mel the bus won't leave until everyone's on it so stop bouncing around like a bloody bunny" Jon glared down at his caffine filled Mel she laughed lightly but ignored his words and kept poking and probing him till he had his laces tied "seriously a toddler can tie laces better than you" Mel said linking her arms through his resting her small head on his shoulders "hey! that hurts you know" he grinned pulling her in tighter placing his lips on hers gently while she giggled into his lips, her eyes widened "oh crap the bus how long have we been" Mell panicked and basically hopped around the corner running to the bus while Jon jogging behind Her chuckling to himself "my crazy bunny" he muttered to himself and went to catch up with Mel.
Mel smiled to herself this is the best holiday she had since her mother died she was still recovering from it now it's quite hard to forget someone passing away in a restaurant in front of you but she was only 7 at the time so she rembered it as clear as day but since she met Jon she finally smiled again. Glanced over at Jon who sat in the leather seat next to her talking to another tourist sitting in front of him, wearing a scaraly bright Hawaiin shirt with dark blonde hair which hanged over his eyes which had a terrifying glare imprinted in them that made Mel sink back into her chair. Why was he glaring at Jon? She thought to herself but shook the thought off and glanced back to Jon she tugged on his hair lightly "Ow! oh sorry Mel what is it?" Jon rubbed his short brown curly hair whcocos cowling at Mel jokingly "wimp I was just wondering if you have the plane tickets?" Mel said questionably cocking her head slightly to the side. "Yeah I do here and FYI I'm not a wimp" Jon said while pursing his lips together throwing her the tickets like a diva she laughed and slipped the passports and tickets into her pocket and than rested her head on the window smiling at he partner and nodded of.
She was only asleep for a few minutes until she herd a gut renching scream she woke up suddenly and saw all the passengers stare at her in shock "what?" She said until she saw what they were staring at Jon with a knife percing straight into his heart dark red blood trailed down to her seat her mouth opened in horror she set out her loudest screech which Startled the bus driver to stop. Mel skidded into the asile of the bus and yelled "someone please call the hospital and the police my boyfriend is dead!" Mel looked through new tears forming in her eyes everyone saw what happened wouldn't they know what happened? Mel just looked up and glad that someone whipped their phone out and called but she glanced back at Jon the memories flooded back all at once which made her sink to the floor why did everyone she loved die in front of her? was it just a bad coincidence or does she have bad Karma?
Ta da! I hope you like it whoever is reading please review and you get invisible bubble gum and coco :) I will bwriting more soon so please read it means the world to me thanks so much your awesome! This is bubblegumlikescoco signing off :D