I hope u like my first fanfic!!
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BAD INFLUENCE
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Chapter1~Embarrassing Encounter
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Draco Malfoy turned to his father, "I want to get a FIREBOLT!!!!!"
Lucius Malfoy looked at his whining son and sternly griped, "You know how much money I need to save for our debts."
"Shssssssss! Keep it down!," Malfoy swiftly turned around making sure nobody heard the embarrassing truth.
Ever since It came back, Lucius Malfoy had been pressured by Voldermort, asking to do things he didn't want to do. He got drunk one day and bet on quidditch matches and lost 10 000 galleons. Since then, Draco had been getting old clothes and was never allowed to get anything new, including the broomstick that Harry Potter got.
"A FIREBOLT, FATHER!!"
"SHUT UP!" Lucius grabbed Draco's arm and pulled him towards the counter and with one swift movement, took out his wand. He pointed it menacingly at Draco. "ONE.MORE.WORD..OUT.OF.YOU."
Lucius was interrupted by a small, "Uhhhh" and a light thud. He turned around and loosened the grip on Draco's arm.
Hermione stood up and picked up her new books, blushing. As she looked up and met Draco's eyes. Fear and weakness. He took one look at her dark brown eyes and ran off, heat forming inside of him.
Lucius straightened up and cleared his throat. "Ahem. Miss Granger, would you care to mind with your clumsy steps? Me and Draco here..." Lucius turned around to see a counter, with no blonde-haired, grey-eyed and foolish boy.
Hermione quietly giggled and power walked over to a column of red books. She took one out, and introduced it to her other books.
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Is it good? Tell me how I should improve on my writing, first time and all. R&R and I will read your stories and give you nice reviews!!! Thanks.
~AngelBabe~
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BAD INFLUENCE
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Chapter1~Embarrassing Encounter
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Draco Malfoy turned to his father, "I want to get a FIREBOLT!!!!!"
Lucius Malfoy looked at his whining son and sternly griped, "You know how much money I need to save for our debts."
"Shssssssss! Keep it down!," Malfoy swiftly turned around making sure nobody heard the embarrassing truth.
Ever since It came back, Lucius Malfoy had been pressured by Voldermort, asking to do things he didn't want to do. He got drunk one day and bet on quidditch matches and lost 10 000 galleons. Since then, Draco had been getting old clothes and was never allowed to get anything new, including the broomstick that Harry Potter got.
"A FIREBOLT, FATHER!!"
"SHUT UP!" Lucius grabbed Draco's arm and pulled him towards the counter and with one swift movement, took out his wand. He pointed it menacingly at Draco. "ONE.MORE.WORD..OUT.OF.YOU."
Lucius was interrupted by a small, "Uhhhh" and a light thud. He turned around and loosened the grip on Draco's arm.
Hermione stood up and picked up her new books, blushing. As she looked up and met Draco's eyes. Fear and weakness. He took one look at her dark brown eyes and ran off, heat forming inside of him.
Lucius straightened up and cleared his throat. "Ahem. Miss Granger, would you care to mind with your clumsy steps? Me and Draco here..." Lucius turned around to see a counter, with no blonde-haired, grey-eyed and foolish boy.
Hermione quietly giggled and power walked over to a column of red books. She took one out, and introduced it to her other books.
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Is it good? Tell me how I should improve on my writing, first time and all. R&R and I will read your stories and give you nice reviews!!! Thanks.
~AngelBabe~