Hey everyone as you know from my profile that this is my first attempt at a massive writing project. This first real one that I've ever attempted. I got the inspiration for this story after watching Elfen Lied some time ago. I liked the series but I didn't like how short it had to be so I created this crossover between Naruto and Elfen Lied. This will be my first attempt at writing something like this and hopefully it will be the best thing that I ever came up with. Oh for those of you who don't know A new Hope is discontinued and The Legend of Narukomi has been deleted due to me having not liked it myself. Sometime in the future I may continue A new Hope and possibly make it better.
Some of you know me as Saneup I've changed my profile name to Ashikage but it won't show up on any search engine with that specific name it will only show up as Saneup. Now for the Disclaimer
Disclaimer: I don't own Elfen Lied or Naruto. If I did I would continue Elfen Lied and "edit" Naruto.
Hope yall enjoy my first big writing project, this is Saneup aka Ashikage signing off.
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Wrath of the Diclonius Queen
Chapter One: Escape, Encounter and Genin Exam
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Naru Uzumaki was just an ordinary girl who wanted acknowledgement from the village population. She had a bright personality and a bright future ahead of her. She didn't realize, though, that she had a genjutsu placed on her to cover those hornlike protrusions coming out of her head. Those horns were no ordinary horns. They were part of a genetic mutation that had been going on for a thousand years. They had a name for people like her; Diclonius. She was only three when the villagers beat her to within an inch of her life to unlock her genetic mutational abilities. Thirty hands had appeared and tore apart the villagers in cold blood. The scene that the Hokage and Anbu had found her in was to say the least alien. Body parts and blood were everywhere and it made even the most seasoned shinobi hurl out their stomach's contents. The Fourth Hokage knew this type of carnage anywhere; it was the Wrath of the Diclonius Queen.
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14 Years later
An Island a hundred miles away from Fire Country
Shinitsu Diclonius Research Institution
Alarms were blaring all throughout the research facility. The guards were desperately trying to stop a crimson haired girl with unknown powers. It was a desperate feud to take down the girl but she just kept advancing on them. Her maximum effective lethality range was 15 meters and though they did their best to stay out of that range they were evidently cut down. It was a desperate feud in order to take down the nude girl but in the time they took to stop her advance countless had died within the facility already at the hands of the girl. She was commonly referred to as "Hells Angel" since she literally caused carnage that made even the most seasoned of men of war vomit at the sight of the blood and body parts lying around her. It was simply absolute carnage in its greatest form. She was literally a living "Hell" because of the amount of dead around her and an "Angel" because she looked like a vixen in disguise but as they say looks can be deceiving considering what she was capable of.
Currently we find our Hells Angel walking through the facility looking for a way out. She wore a restraining helmet that didn't do much good to stop her knee length crimson colored hair from falling to the ground. It was hard to recognize this girl, who stood at 5'8", as our protagonist hero. Her jiji had abandoned her to this retched facility for their "research for the safety of humanity" ten years agobut lately she had come to realize that wasn't the case when someone wearing a Dog Anbu mask came to her and revealed to her the one true reason about why the Hokage had "abandoned" her. She would've killed him if it weren't for the sense of familiarity from the Dog masked Anbu she knew from a very young age.
Naru spotted another group of guards coming her way. They weren't within her 15m effective range but that doesn't mean she had other things at her arsenal. A pen lifted up from a dead officer's body and flew towards the approaching guards. The pen went straight through the officer on the right like tissue paper killing him instantaneously. They pointed their weapons and shot at her. The bullets deflected off her shield that she had created with her mind. Some were caught in the process and thrown back at them with enough force to kill an elephant. They screamed out in pain as their own bullets ripped through their own bodies like a hot knife through butter. She continued to approach them and her vectors shot out at them and began ripping them apart causing blood and guts to fly everywhere. Heads were ripped off and their bodies seemed to implode.
'Typical… just typical… they're afraid of their own deaths.' Thought Naru as she heard them scream out to let them live. 'I didn't like the way they treated me… so I'll treat them the same way they treated me… a thousand times over.' Their bodies were then lacerated with deep cuts and their throats were slashed and their balls cut off. More blood came from them. Once she was done with them she continued her advance towards the large metal door that was sealed shut. 'That won't stop me…not now.' She used her vectors to rip the door open and in turn revealed a much brighter hallway with a lot of guards in it. Naru found herself sensing multiple weapons pointed at her from multiple sides all around her. She smirked under the restraining helmet.
"C'mon Naru you can't get through. The whole facility is sealed shut and not even your vectors could rip them open. Give up." Said a man wearing a dull blue business suit with white stripes. 'Just like Kiramo to say what I can and can't do.' "We'll see about that Kiramo-san." She said in a voice that meant pain. It made the men around her flinch as she let out a significant amount of killing intent. "Take her down!" Kiramo shouted confidently though inside he was frightened. The officers fired their weapons and the automated turrets from on the ceiling and the walls in turn fired as well. She let out a massive shockwave of power as her vectors shot out and ripped apart the men limb from limb and took the automated turrets from the walls and then threw them at the guards trying to stop her from escaping. They collided with the officers and it made sickening crunching noises. They continued to roll about until they either hit a wall or just stopped by running over more of the assembled guards.
She let out another shockwave which seemed to knock them off their feet. The bullets from their weapons were easily blown back with enough force to rip open one of the metal doors in the Institution. "You won't stop me this time Kiramo." She stressed the man's name which caused him to flinch. 'I've never seen her act like this before. She would usually give up after the first wave. She's never shown this much carnage in one place even before she got here.' He looked over at the girl from the behind the metal crate. He ducked as several bullets went passed him.
"Damn to close." He cursed. 'I need a way to stop her but how. There's nothing I can think of. My mind is blank.' A crate flew passed him along with several guards. There were screams of pain all around him. There was nothing he could do but to run. 'But where to?' He surveyed the hall and found a door on the left side of it. 'My only chance of escape.' He looked over the crate and ducked just in time to see another group of dismembered officers flying over him with a ripped off turret. 'I need to get over there without her detecting me.' Indeed he needed to. So he got up and ran for the exit but sadly lady luck wasn't on his side as Naru had sent one of her vectors at him. "You're not getting away this time you bastard!" She yelled and her vector tore through his chest and evidently his heart killing him. She dropped the man and sent out one last shockwave powerful enough to destroy the entire island and send its parts sinking to the bottom of the ocean. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" She screamed out as the shockwave ripped through the facility taking anything in its path with it.
From outside, the facility could be seen blowing up from the inside as windows were blown open by the force of the explosions taking place within it. The island was literally blowing up from the inside. There was a flash and then a loud explosion typically from a hydrogen bomb. From far away Fire Country could see the flash and heard the explosion and the rising mushroom shaped cloud rising up in the island's place. It was reported to the authorities that in turn told the Daimyo who in turn told the Hokage of the Village Hidden in the Leaves or Konohagakure no Sato. The hokage sent out his most trusted shinobi on a possible Suicide Mission that was considered to be a SSS-Class mission. They had been gone for a week before they showed up with a girl with knee length crimson hair, red eyes and covered with a blanket.
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The Hokage had lived for a long time and was at the ripe old age of 76 and had seen many weird and dangerous things in his life but not something this weird and possibly dangerous. He was currently sitting behind his desk and rubbing his temples as he felt a headache coming on which was typical for situations like these. The situation, however, involved one crimson haired, red eyed girl sleeping on the couch. The Anbu had told him there story. The story involved the girl washing up on the shore of Fire Country right outside Kasasaku, a town known for their abundance of fish and how they prepared it.
She was found by a Police Officer doing his daily rounds around the area the beach she washed up on was in. He quickly requested an ambulance when he saw the blood on her form. When the paramedics came and got her they didn't find any wounds on her body and it made them curious as to why she didn't have wounds but had blood on her body. The officer heard from them that there were no wounds but there was blood he had them to take samples of the blood on the girl. The results were horrifying to say the least as the blood was from what they counted to be above a thousand men and possibly women.
She was put in a padded holding cell where she awoke a few days later. It appeared that she wasn't at the least happy with it and almost would've wrecked the room if it hadn't been for a certain anbu to show up inside the room with the cop beside him. When they had entered, however, she went into a fit of rage at the sight of the cop who had an attire similar to that of the Institution officers and guards, but when she caught sight of the anbu she immediately calmed down. The Dog Anbu had seen her eyes and they held murderous things behind the deep depths of red. He barely noticed it. The Anbu told the cop that they would take her back to the Leaf Village and it caused a reaction from the cop. He had told the anbu that he was basically signing his own death warrant just for taking her with him. The anbu in turn had told him he knew her a while back and that he could possibly take her without her harming anyone along the way. Needless to say the cop tried to reason with him about taking the girl with him but the anbu had convinced him and they let her go. The girl was then wrapped up in a blanket and brought back to the village. Thus they were here in the Sandaime's office reporting their mission.
The hokage sighed and muttered something along the lines of 'I'm getting to old for this shit.' He looked up at the anbu and said "You may go now. Kakashi… Yugao" The respective anbu looked back at him before he continued, "I need you to stay after for a bit. I feel like there are some things you both need to know about her." He gestured to the sleeping girl on the couch. They nodded and said "Hai Hokage-sama." Sarutobi let the rest of the anbu team leave his office before he performed some seals and muttered something. He looked up at the anbu and said, "Take off your masks. I sealed this room so nobody can get in or out nor be able to see into or hear from the outside." The anbu hesitated. Taking off their masks was like dishonoring their parents. But nevertheless they complied.
The hokage sighed again. "I assume you've heard of this girl." He said gesturing to her again and they nodded in return. He sighed again before saying "I'll be straight forward. She's no ordinary human as I'm sure you've noticed. The horns on top of her head give it away." He said pointing to the protrusions on top of her head. "Hokage-sama why are you implying about her not being normal?" said the raven haired girl known as Yugao. The hokage sighed before replying "What I'm implying is that Naru has a disease that many from her clan are born with. I'm sure you've heard about the mysterious abilities the Uzumaki clan wields," They nodded. "well that's part of the disease. She's what you would call a pure blooded Diclonius." "A Diclonius?" pondered Kakashi. The hokage muttered something before saying "Diclonius are a race of genetically "improved" human beings." He said with his fingers gesturing quotes for the word improved. He saw Kakashi's blank look but in his eyes he understood some of it. He sighed saying, "They have these abilities that allow them to do things normal humans can't do. They are able to lift things with their minds and block anything coming their way with a powerful mental barrier called a Vectorial Barrier. What most people who have heard about what they can do, haven't heard of how they could do it. They have something called Vectors which can be used to block the things thrown in their path. They only appear when they are vibrating so fast that you can see them, but that only happens when they are mad. Naru is rumored to have at least thirty of these vectors and she has caused numerous deaths with those powers of hers."
Yugao decided to voice a question that had been running through her mind for the past several minutes. "What are asking of us Hokage-sama?" "I'm asking you to take care of Naru. She has seen things and done things that would cause even the most mentally stable people to commit suicide. She needs a family to love and take care of her and further more she needs someone to teach her the ways of the ninja though in the past she did have some ninja training. She needs to be taught how to live again." They were shocked by his words and both were thinking the same thing 'What happened to her.' Needless to say they agreed immediately. The hokage had them sign the adoption forms and had Naru clothed in a suitable shinobi outfit which consisted of black shinobi pants, black shinobi sandals, and a white kimono with red roses going from her left shoulder down to her right hip. A kunai pouch was on her left hip and a shuriken pouch was on her right one. Her hair was neatly brushed and went down to her knees. She had taken a shower before all of this could happen and needless to say she had felt great.
She was then told that she would possibly be put on a team with people she barely knew. The meetings would be a week from tomorrow after she took the Genin exam. After they had left the Hokage sighed and thought, 'How would your son react to know that he had a sister the whole time, huh Minato.' He sighed before pulling out a piece of paper and wrote down a letter to Iruka Umino, the teacher to the current graduating class of village shinobi. After he wrote he called in an anbu and told him to take to Iruka. Then the hokage went back to his prized orange book.
After a good night's rest we find Naru walking to the Ninja Academy. She had on a serious look on her face and in the depths of her eyes they held murderous acts that she had committed in the past. She was walking alone and following the directions she had been given by the Hokage who had visited the family at their new home earlier this morning. He had made some small talk with them about how they were doing, how they would take care of Naru and stuff along the those lines.
After about twenty minutes of walking she'd found the academy and was somewhat amazed by it architecture. The gardens around it as well as the fountains truly gave it a serene look. Not only that but the solid marble walls and the wood bordering made it stand out but in a good way. 'So this is the place huh. I wonder what it's like. I hope I don't have to kill anyone senselessly.' She started thinking about what happened in the past. It was about her finding a place to live and having to murder the families that lived in them. She kept thinking more about the past and how she could do something about it but sadly there was nothing that she could do.
She looked around the academy grounds and noticed students entering the building. Some were somewhat close to her age but others looked real young to be in the academy. The older students appeared to be at least 13 or 14 while she was 17. The younger ones appeared to be somewhere around 4 to 5 to 6. Apparently she was considered an 'elder' among these hopeful genin. She didn't mind, she didn't mind at all. She could probably teach them the life of a ninja but with her experiences with that life they would probably be throwing up their own guts as she told her own story about her supposed adventures.
Naru sighed before she entered the academy. Once inside she passed students entering their respective classes. They were looking at her curiously and wondered why she had horns on her head like an oxen. She chose to ignore the muttered questions and continued looking for her class. 'Room one o five if I remember correctly.' After walking and getting some directions along the way she had found the room on the other side of the academy. 'Here it is.' She thought haphazardly. 'Time to get it over with. I wonder how they would see me as.' She thought. She held up her hand and knocked on the door.
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Inside the Classroom
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From inside the classroom Iruka heard a knocking sound on the door from outside the room. He looked up from his desk and turned towards the door while thinking, 'This must be the new student, I wonder what my impression of her would be.' "Come in." He said and the door slid open and revealed a stunningly gorgeous looking girl with crimson hair that cascaded down to her knees. She wore black shinobi pants, black shinobi sandals and a white kimono with red roses going down from her left shoulder and to her right hip. She had a kunai pouch on her left hip and a shuriken pouch on her right hip. Her breasts were a sizeable DD-cup that seemed to fit her frame well.
Iruka noticed that she was too old to be the new student the Sandaime could be talking about but none the less he welcomed her. "Ah you must be the new student?" She looked at him curiously. Iruka mentally shivered when he saw her crimson eyes look over him. They held things nobody like her could have seen let alone done. The depths of those eyes held numerous mysteries that intrigued and frightened him at the same time. 'Nobody should have those eyes let alone a new student.' He thought quietly. She finally looked him straight in the eye. "Indeed I am. You must be Iruka Umino?" She questioned. "Yes, that's me. May I ask your name?" "My name is Naru Uzumaki." Suddenly a yell rang out from a certain loud mouthed, orange jumpsuit wearing kid with blond hair. "WHAT?" Yelled the boy. This got the classes attention. Iruka rubbed his ears while Naru didn't do anything to show that her ears were straining from the screech. "Naruto no need to be so loud." He looked up at the entire class and noticed that they were tuned into it as well.
Iruka sighed before saying, "Everyone we're having a new student today. Could you introduce yourself Naru? Tell us your name, likes, dislikes, hobbies, and dreams for the future." She nodded and said, "My name is Naru Uzumaki. My likes are being there for hurting people, training and my family. My dislikes are the things done to me when I was in that retched institution for most of my life. My hobbies include training with my made family helping homeless people. My dream is…" She paused as the tension in the room seemed to be affecting the people in the room. "My dream is to stop killing people for no reason and to not let my bloodline not get the best of me." She somewhat hesitantly. This caused numerous gasps in the room including the instructors. 'What could she have possibly been through that could be worse than my brother killing my clan?' 'What did she mean by Institution?' 'She's hot. Don't get a boner, don't get a boner. Damnit Akumaru.' 'Munch munch.' 'Troublesome red head. And I thought my mom was confusing by what she said. Yawn zzzzzz.' 'I do have a family after all. And Sasuke said I was a clan less loser.' Those were the thoughts of some of those in the room. Iruka stood up from his seat, cleared his throat and said, "Now that that is out of the way we will now begin the exam. Naru could you sit next to Sasuke please, Sasuke raise your hand." The student in turn raised his hand and Naru went over to sit next to the brooding boy. "You have forty minutes to complete the written portion of the exam. After the written test is done we'll do the taijutsu portion and then finally the Ninjutsu portion of the exam. You may begin as soon as you get the test." Said Iruka as he walked up and down the aisles of desks handing them their tests.
Naru looked at her own test and noticed how the questions were written. She smirked and sent out her vectors to probe the minds of the examinees and examiners. Several of the students had felt something inside their mind but it was gone within the same amount of time it took to get in. Naru's thirty vectors had collected the answers and within seconds she had finished her test. She went further in for some of the people in the room and found some useful information like jutsus and taijutsu styles. Within seconds she decided that the styles that they used were of some use but didn't fit her body type so she tweaked them and put them together to form a new mixed style of taijutsu. Her mind processed the moves and immediately committed them to muscle memory.
Seeing no one else had finished their tests Naru raised her hand and called Iruka over to come and collect her test. This caused some looks to be thrown at her; even Shikamaru looked in her direction. He smiled,' Looks like I'm not the only smart one around here.' He thought. Within forty minutes students began turning in there tests. The results between Naru, Shikamaru and Sasuke were interesting to say the least. Naru scored the highest, Shikamaru scored second and finally Sasuke scored third. After the written exam came the taijutsu portion of the exam. The students were taken out to the sparring grounds just outside the academy. There they would pair up with someone to spar and would move up in some sort of mini-tournament.
Iruka assigned each of the students to pair up and spar with each other. The winner would move up and take on the next person and so on so forth. After the spars and the winner being Naru, came the Ninjutsu portion. They were to go back inside to the Academy Exam Room where they would finish the exam and be given their Konoha headband which would symbolize them as shinobi of Konohagakure no Sato.
As they filed into the Exam Room the students couldn't help but feel nervous about whether they would pass or not. Even Naru was nervous and she had collected the information for the three basic jutsus which were the Henge, the Replacement Technique and the Clone jutsu. She had even collected the information from the chuunin's minds in order to do it correctly. In order to do the Clone jutsu she would need little chakra; which she had loads of it, possibly that of at least two kages; and the precise control over her chakra in order to perform the jutsu. She reviewed the technique more so then the Henge and the Replacement technique combined.
Iruka stood in front of the nervous students and prepared to say the usual thing he said to every graduating class of shinobi. "Alright. This last portion of the exam will be on the three academy techniques; the henge, the replacement jutsu and the clone jutsu." Naru noticed her long lost brother's facial expression which he was trying to hide. 'He can't do the bushin. He simply has too much chakra, like me." She sighed at her long lost brother's face scrunching up in frustration. She tuned back into what Iruka was saying. "This year we'll be allowing you to perform one of your personal jutsu to make up for one of the three academy jutsus that you can't perform. This will give you the points to make up for which jutsu you can't perform but it is only for one technique. That still means you may still fail this exam." Iruka looked at his students soon to be genin's facial expressions especially one of his favorites; the orange wearing jumpsuit boy with spiky blonde hair and bright personality. 'I really hope you can do it this year, I really do. Do your best Naruto.' "Now we'll call you up in alphabetical order by last name. You will then go into the room to the left of me and there your fate as a genin will be decided. Good luck to you all. First up is Shino Aburame…" Iruka walked into the other room followed by Shino. Shino was an interesting character to Naru; always quiet, didn't act out and always used logic in his words. 'Every Aburame does that but they do it an interesting way.' She tuned out what was going on around her and just thought about what might happen if she even graduated.
The rest of the exam went without much worry. Naru had decided to help out her long lost brother in his situation of having to perform the bushin. She sent one of her vectors towards the back of Naruto's head and implanted the information within his skull. He suddenly perked up when he felt something enter his head and the info on how to do the bushin just came to him. After the others went in and did their exams it time was for Naru and her long lost brother to do the exam. Naruto went in first and did his exam and to Iruka's and Mizuki's amazement he did the bushin flawlessly. That earned him the right to become a ninja. Now it was her turn to become a genin. Naru heard her name being called and she walked down the aisle and into the Exam Room where she saw Mizuki and Iruka sitting behind a desk. They both had a pen in their hands and a paper in front of them.
"Naru would please do the henge?" She nodded and did the correct hand seals and there was a poof. In the smoke stood the Sandaime. Iruka nodded and said, "Please perform the replacement jutsu." She did the correct seals and in her place was Mizuki. Iruka nodded and chuckled at Mizuki's facial expression. It was a mixture of anger, embarrassment and frustration. She redid the jutsu and they were in there respective places. "Now would you please perform the Bushin." Naru calmed herself before doing the jutsu while using the information she had gotten from the other students and instructors. There was a puff of smoke and around Naru were twenty bushin. Iruka nodded and wrote down her scores. "Congratulations Naru, you're now a genin of Konoha. Please come and get a headband of your choice." She walked over to the desk slightly relieved that she had passed like her long lost brother and picked up her chosen headband.
The day was long and somewhat eventful for Naru. She had finally found a family that she could love for the rest her life. She had also met her long lost brother whom she'd heard of only in small conversations with the guards outside of her containment chamber in the destroyed Institution. She was officially a genin like her brother and could be with her new family.
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Wow… just wow. I'm amazed with myself. I read the story myself and found out that it was great. I'm not sure how yall would think of it. That's the reason for reviews ya know. So this is the first chapter of Wrath of the Diclonius Queen and it looks great. Now I'm not going to have the jutsus spelt out how they would possibly look like. Too much of a hassle anyway. And you should know the meaning for those jutsus. Now this is my first big writing project that I'm hoping to finish sometime in the future and as you know from my profile that this is a review driven story. So Read and Review. This is Saneup aka Ashikage signing off.
