hey this is the new story i said i put up...sorry for deleting crimson revolver,but i couldn't really write the right words so well enjoy another vampire pic!

Prologue.

'I can't...breathe' Sakura thought to herself as she fell deeper and deeper in the ocean,suffocating from the water filling her lungs. Sasuke and Naruto couldn't save her,they were busy protecting the man they were guiding to the land of stone. She was stuck in a whirlpool, It was gonna kill her.

She felt her back hit the bottom of the sea the water was still now, landing in between two boulders. She opened her eyes to see the ocean,the light reflecting from the sky shining through the water.

She turned her head, knowing this was gonna be the last time she would, she saw him...she saw everything she could she lifted her hand trying to give him some sign of where her location was. He turned his head, and looked her straight in the eye. She was going to be saved by the person most dear to her. That changed when he turned his head and swam away.

Sakura opened her eyes as much as she was going to leave her!Like she was just a piece of trash!Tears welled up in her closing eyes.

'Sasuke' Sakura thought turned from grief to raged 'You...won't get away...with this...'

Her eyes closed and she let the wet slumber take her away...

"Hey." A voice was repeating in her head,it was faint and low who's was it?

"Do you want to come back?" It was a simple question,but how could she still live? Her mind was very blank death would take over she still in the water?

"Do you?" the voice repeated, it was more concerned. Who was it, she assumed it was a guy's?

her mind decided...Come back...ment to live.

With every fill of might she had left she shook her head very slowly hoping they'd get the what she ment.

"Alright." It hesitated, releaf was obvious.

She felt herself being lifted up ever so gently, A hand on the back of her neck tilted it up. She felt breathing on it before a different guy's voice entered her mind.

"Welcome home."

She felt a swift pierce in her neck, it hurt but it was soothing. A cooling sensation insideher, but it was intoxicating. She was freezing in an instant, her body was so cold. Hairs standing on end and goosebumps took over her whole body. Her mind began to rase as her body felt the chilling presence, what was happening to her??! The last of her body heat she felt was in her chest, but in an instant it was gone, all the heat...was gone.

She felt exhausted, every part of her beings was numb. Her mind went blank, and her mind was now in rest. The man who bit her pulled his teeth out of her neck, some blood remaining on his canines. He licked it off,and the two stared at her.

The one who bit her picked up her limp form and stood up,like she weighed nothing."Come on," he began to the other male."We need to go before the sun comes up." He said serioulsy to the other. He nodded.

The first male closed his eyes and said mumbled something while a mist surrounded him. He hunched over with a silent scream. the mist faded and a wolf silhouette appeared walking toward them, He put the girl on the wolfs back. And in an instant they were bolting deeper and deeper in the forest with the dead on the wolf's back.

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so what do you think,shall i continue or let it rot?review please!

edit:I edited it abit, making spelling corrections and changing it a bit