THIS IS MY FIRST EVER HARRY POTTER STORY! Feedback please?!?
Harry Potter sat down next to Ron at the banquet table, next to Ron, his best friend, and across from Hermoine, Ron's girl friend. Summar had been some what adequate as summers go. Dudley had him had sex which was strange but when Dudley had finally come out and admitted that all the tension between them was really a result of romantic tension, well that had been that, it was best to deal with that attraction up front and right away. So they had had sex, lots and lots of sex. … Then Mr. Dursley had found out and shipped Ron off to live with the Weasley's because he felt that Harry Potter was dirty and making his son dirty by making him into a homosexual and showing him that wizaardy was okay. Mr. Dursley couldn't stand that. So Harry had gone to live with the Weasley's.
But the term had started again which led to Harry Potter sitting at the banquet table, watching with much avid and astute interest as the first years stood before with looks of radience and fear as they made the next leap in their lives, facing something that would ultimately shape their destiny: being sorted by the grumpy old Sorting hat which could read your mind. Then he spotted HER, the her being a new first year student of stupendous beauty. She was gorgeous. She had eyes the color of the purple of the Compaq Presario computer case that Ron had gotten as Christmas gift. She had hair the colour of Julia Robert's lovely locks. It was beautiful. Harry turned to Ron with a look of lust filled stupor to ask if Ron knew who this beautiful vixen was, the one that caused a slight bulge in the front of his pants. Ron's face cracked with a grin as the cute little first year sat down to be sorted. "That Maria," Ron positively beamed. "She's Bill adopted daughter. Her parents died in a freak accident involving a dragon that Bill had gone to catch in America. I heard about her but I thought she'd be going to an American Wizarding School."
Hermoine elbowed Ron. She wasn't happy that he was so excited by the prospect of this new student. He should be focused on her, not this new nubile young student. Ron shoved her back. "Ew! That's sick Moine! She's like my sister."
Harry had no such brother/unclery compulsions and started to fantasize. He could help her with her studies and maybe she could help him over come his fear of girls so he would finally have the verve to ask the sweet Cho Chang out…
CHAPTER TWO COMING SOON!!!!!!!