Hiya guys, just like I promised this is the sequel to Goten Runs away, its
called, of course, Goten falls in love! I hope this is a good fic cause
it's my first real romance one. I'm also gonna try and write a lemon, but
I'm not really good with those so I just might ask someone else to write
one for me and tell you guys who wrote it. ::Sigh:: what to do, what to do?
Anyway, here goes, I have this already written up now all I gotta do is
type it ::Evil smile:: poor Goten's tail.
Goten-What about my tail?
Tabi-chan-You'll see!
Goten-::Worried look:: What do you mean, I'll see?
Tabi-chan-::Evil laugh::
Goten-::looks to Bra:: whats going on here?"
Bra-::evil laugh:: nothing, just read and review,
I DON'T OWN DBZ SO YOU CAN'T SUE, THAT GOES FOR EVERY OTHER FIC I OWN DBZ AND SAILORMOON WISE!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The story goes that a saiya-jin with a white tail will have the energy to rule over all the saiya-jin and evidentially the universe. A man name Shinshi put this old wives tail to the test...
Goten was working on an invention or another for Shin when he felt the strange Ki presence in his room, so he got up and went into his room, looking around. Suddenly agony ripped through his body, it hurt so much he let out a silent scream. He couldn't move, it didn't matter how much pain he was in he just could move or make a sound. Memories from the past were starting to leave his head, he fought as hard as he could, his energy and Ki rising to that of SSJ3 so quickly that it shocked the Z-senshi around him. His mother came into the room but was knocked out. The others flew as fast as they could too reach him in time, but it would be too late. Goten fought against the tide of emotions and pain but it was no use, they were being ripped from his mind. His power level went higher, shocking everyone into more speed as they flew quickly toward the power source. Wave after wave of agony washed through him until finally, he was able to let out such a horrible scream that it was heard half way around the world; it was a scream of pain, emotional and physical. Someone rushed into the room, he couldn't remember who it was, but it was someone he knew. Names, places, things that he'd done faded from his mind. His scream soon turned to a weak groan, and then a slight moan of agony. It was the worse sound anyone could hear. As the last of his memories faded, his body went slack and some unknown forces kept his body levitated a few feet off the floor. "LEAVE HIM ALONE!" a voice roared, a man with bluish hair appeared. IT was the last thing Goten saw before his eyes rolled into the back of his head and he passed out... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ohh, I hate cliffhangers but they're so much fun to write! I know its short and there's no Bra yet but there will be soon, as a matter of face in the next chapter she comes in with a very pissed off Vegeta. Right now it sounds a bit rushed seeing as I already have it written up, so its gonna take me a little while to type it up. There are a few boring scenes that I don't wanna do but there essential to the story so I gotta type them. Please tell me what you think of this story! Remember it's the sequel to Goten Runs Away. There aren't enough Goten and Bra stories out there with action in um, so I'm doing this my way! Tabi-chan
Goten-What about my tail?
Tabi-chan-You'll see!
Goten-::Worried look:: What do you mean, I'll see?
Tabi-chan-::Evil laugh::
Goten-::looks to Bra:: whats going on here?"
Bra-::evil laugh:: nothing, just read and review,
I DON'T OWN DBZ SO YOU CAN'T SUE, THAT GOES FOR EVERY OTHER FIC I OWN DBZ AND SAILORMOON WISE!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The story goes that a saiya-jin with a white tail will have the energy to rule over all the saiya-jin and evidentially the universe. A man name Shinshi put this old wives tail to the test...
Goten was working on an invention or another for Shin when he felt the strange Ki presence in his room, so he got up and went into his room, looking around. Suddenly agony ripped through his body, it hurt so much he let out a silent scream. He couldn't move, it didn't matter how much pain he was in he just could move or make a sound. Memories from the past were starting to leave his head, he fought as hard as he could, his energy and Ki rising to that of SSJ3 so quickly that it shocked the Z-senshi around him. His mother came into the room but was knocked out. The others flew as fast as they could too reach him in time, but it would be too late. Goten fought against the tide of emotions and pain but it was no use, they were being ripped from his mind. His power level went higher, shocking everyone into more speed as they flew quickly toward the power source. Wave after wave of agony washed through him until finally, he was able to let out such a horrible scream that it was heard half way around the world; it was a scream of pain, emotional and physical. Someone rushed into the room, he couldn't remember who it was, but it was someone he knew. Names, places, things that he'd done faded from his mind. His scream soon turned to a weak groan, and then a slight moan of agony. It was the worse sound anyone could hear. As the last of his memories faded, his body went slack and some unknown forces kept his body levitated a few feet off the floor. "LEAVE HIM ALONE!" a voice roared, a man with bluish hair appeared. IT was the last thing Goten saw before his eyes rolled into the back of his head and he passed out... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ohh, I hate cliffhangers but they're so much fun to write! I know its short and there's no Bra yet but there will be soon, as a matter of face in the next chapter she comes in with a very pissed off Vegeta. Right now it sounds a bit rushed seeing as I already have it written up, so its gonna take me a little while to type it up. There are a few boring scenes that I don't wanna do but there essential to the story so I gotta type them. Please tell me what you think of this story! Remember it's the sequel to Goten Runs Away. There aren't enough Goten and Bra stories out there with action in um, so I'm doing this my way! Tabi-chan