Failed Stories Archive
Welcome to the first(of undoubtedly many) of my failed Story Ideas; this archive will contain some of the stories and story ideas that I already had typed out... BUT gave up on, some will be just the first chapters of said failures but others will be summarised plots, DON'T for a second think that this is a waste of time!; every single Story Idea or Plot Summary that I post here will be up for adoption to any and all who ask, some of them will be Yaoi while others won't be.
This was originally what Naruto's powers were supposed to be in my other story Skull Child but after going over everything and checking with what I had planned for Sasuke and Naruto in the romantic portion of the story... it just didn't fit, feel free to PM me if you want to adopt this idea.
Reviews: reviewing a story idea or plot does NOT mean you are adopting it, to adopt you must PM me with a request stating which story idea or plot that you want to adopt and what you will be doing with it... PLEASE review and tell me what you think about my ideas; I did go through the trouble of typing them out and reviewing DOES NOT mean you are adopting!
Warning!: This story will contain vulgar language, some blood, really cliché parts and some sexist views from some characters as well as some humor tossed in here and there.
"Naruto" is property of Masashi Kishimoto, and as such I do not own the Manga and/or the Anime.
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Naruto's Rinnegan
Naruto's original powers were meant to be this:
How Naruto controls his Six Paths of Pain:
Instead of controlling his Six Paths of Pain with chakra-rods (Receivers), Naruto uses the varying tattoos on each of the path's bodies as the chakra-receiving system with which he controls his paths, as well as not using chakra-rods to control the paths Naruto cannot form the rods at all; when in battle if needed Naruto will subdue an enemies chakra by placing a tattoo somewhere on his opponents body, this is done by Naruto channeling chakra into the hands of any of his Six Paths and converting said chakra into the same type of energy that he uses to make a corpse one of his paths; this energy is visible to the naked-eye and takes on the appearance of a dark-grey flame covering whichever hand Naruto is using, the chakra-suppression seal or tattoo then takes on the shape of a dot surrounded by four rings; the area inside of the ring closest to the dot also turns a slightly darker shade. (Basically a simple Rinnegan-shaped seal)
Differences between Nagato(Pein) and Naruto:
One of the significant differences between Nagato and Naruto is the fact that though Nagato uses the corpses of dead shinobi for his Six Paths of Pain he still retains a separate body of his own, this is not the case for Naruto as his original body was made into his Human Path; leaving Naruto without any Ninjutsu other than the Human Path's own special techniques, chakra enhanced Taijutsu and the ability to use the Basic academy Jutsu.
Another significant difference between Nagato and Naruto is their favored Paths; Nagato's favored Path is his Deva Path with which he shows great proficiency, such as having more variations and uses for the Shinra Tensei as well as being able to use Chibaku Tensei, Naruto's favored Path on the other hand is the one his very own body became; the Human Path, while Nagato has more skill and experience in controlling his own Deva Path which opened up variations and new techniques for that Path it also closed off a few techniques and abilities that his other Paths COULD have unlocked with enough experience, the same could be said for Naruto's Human Path; by having enough experience controlling the Human Path Naruto was successfully able to read a person's mind without tearing out their soul, however this didn't mean that the mind reading and the tearing out of a person's soul were forever separated after-wards; whenever Naruto took a person's soul with the Human Path he still received the victims mental information as well.
As mentioned previously; Nagato's other Paths suffered when he took preference of his Deva Path over the others, the same also aplies to Naruto taking preference of his Human Path, Naruto is not as skilled at using the Deva Path as Nagato but he is far superior to Nagato at using the Human Path, and Nagato is not as proficient at using the Human Path but is far more experienced than Naruto when using his Deva path.
What each Path's tattoo looks like and represents:
Naruto's Human Path: two thick, black tear-line tattoos on each cheek; represents Sadness, the sadness that only a human being can feel when it causes another person grief, pain and suffering.
Naruto's Animal Path: two black, filled circles tattooed around the eyes: represents Unrest, the unrest that even an animal will suffer when faced with the horror of it's own callous selfish actions.
Great Art: Weaving of the Six Paths:
(The First of Naruto's only two Original Jutsu) By releasing the Tattoos/Seals on all of his Path's Naruto absorbs and combines all of the individual Path's abilities and power inside his original body thereby returning the bodies previously used as his Paths back into corpses as he himself becomes a "Perfect Path", Nagato's and Naruto's "Normal Rinnegan" is of a purple shade but when Naruto uses this technique to become a "Perfect Path" his Rinnegan takes on a red color exactly like that of The Sage of The Six Path's original Rinnegan, this technique can only be used once by Naruto to become as powerful as The Sage of The Six Paths so that he can unlock and use his Great Art: Subjugation of the inner soul technique as it leaves the user's Rinnegan "Dead"; the once purple shaded sclera become permanently white while the rings surrounding the pupil and the darker shade of the area inside of the ring closest to the pupil remain, the user's normal human sight however remains intact.
Great Art: Subjugation of the inner soul:
(The Last of Naruto's only two Original Jutsu) As the name implies this technique forcibly uses the enemies soul against them, having become the Human Path Naruto was able to piece together and create this jutsu using his Human path abilities as a basis, by combining the abilities of all Six Paths Naruto zeros in on the soul of an enemy, restrains him/her using the lock that he has on their soul, converts their Spiritual chakra that makes up the human soul within him/her into pure chakra, then uses said chakra to summon a condense metaphysical Chibaku Tensei inside of them before reinforcing the area around the now primed enemy and releasing causing the enemy to implode in upon themselves; crushing them to the size of an atom in one thousandth of a second.
-This technique requires that the Great Art: Weaving of the Six Paths technique be active before use.
-This technique can only be used once, for once it is completed it automatically ends the Great Art: Weaving of the Six Paths.
This idea is up for adoption; you can do whatever you want with this, you DON'T have to put this in a SasuNaru/NaruSasu story if you don't want to and there is absolutely no need to keep Skull Child's plot... make up one of your own if you want to.
PM me if you want to adopt this, Asylum132.