Hi guys im a very bad writer if you see my first chater of magical time of chater 1 im gonna re-write it to make it EVEN BETTER So here it is :D.

Hello people this is a story of a girl named may that is a new girl in school. she found her best friend there named dawn. But she has a new rivel to hmmm who do u think it will be HA u should get this right lol, oh srry im talking to much on with the story :).


may:16

Drew:17

Misty:17

Dawn:16

Paul:17


May:"Wow im gonna be the new girl today i hope no one makes fun of me." May got up from the bed to the mirror, "wow my hair is a mess".

Caroline:"WAKE UP MAY TIME FOR SCHOOL" Coraline shouted.

May:"I AM AWAKE". May ran downstairs and tripped and fell. "OWWW"

Caroline:*glares at may*" go now the buss is already leaving without you."

May:FUCK *may runs out of the door and runs after the bus then she makes it to the school*. may sighed she heard a yell that said her name she looked up to see oh my god she could'nt belive her eyes it was ..."DAWN"!!(A/C wow u thought it was drew didnt you oh well drew is coming soon hehe)

At School


Dawn:"MAY LIKEOMGIMISSEDYOU" dawn huged may

May:"i missed you too" may hugged her back

dawn:OMG WHAT HAPPEND TO YOU, YOU LOOK MESSED UP!

may:ya i had a bad day today

dawn:awwww come here i have a brush and extra cloths

may:wtf why did u bring cloths and brush?

dawn:just in case :D.

may:weirdo .

dawn:ok follow me to the bathroom before the bell rings but you have to go to the office ok?

may:ok. may followed dawn dawn:here ya go may:thanks. may put on the cloths she wore a black skirt with a white tank top and white and black flip flops oh the skirt is up to her thigh and she wore black tights.

dawn:SEXY GIRL LOL, ok lets fix ur hair ;D! (A/C i made dawn a little crazy so get used to it XD)

May:ok Dawn:puts mays hair down and brushes her hair gently her hair was done it was soo soft dawn put some spray that smelles like roses, dawn put mays hair up in a high pony tail.

May:awww this looks cute.

Dawn:no it doesnt it looks..............SEXY AS HELL!

May:Oh my god have you drank beer T.T.

Dawn:i wish i did it would make more sense.

may:OMG YOU MADE SENSE OMG OMG OMG LETS MAKE A PARTY.

Dawn:ok ok go to the office i gtg to class see ya sexy woman.

after she left the bell rang.


may went to the office and went by the princaple.(A/C i think thats how you spell it)

May:Hi im the new student

Princaple:Oh yes here are ur locker number and your classes

May:thank you may walked to her locker and put her stuff in it she went to her first class which was social studies. May knocked on the door and waited for the teacher to answer

Teacher:Oh hello Miss Maple please come in.

may walks in

Teacher:ok class this is are new student May Rose Maple

May:Hello

Teacher:Ok you will sit next to....... Andrew Hayden, Andrew please raise your hand please

Drew:drew puts his hand up .
May walks to him and the boys were checking her out.

May:Hey can i sit by the window please.

Drew:Ummmmm i dont think soo

May:Why not

Drew:Becuase i said so.

May:Fine. may sat down and looked at the teacher

drew:drew smirked at her and looked back at the teacher.


DUUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUN Hoped you enjoy it heres the sneak peak:

May:AHHHHHHH HELP ME PLEASE

Drew:IM COMING MAY

May:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Drew:MAYYY

Hehehe :D please review