Well, OK, so I got thinking about this story a few weeks ago and finally got the courage to upload. I've got a few chapters already written so if I get reviews, I'll update quite often.
I love this idea, even if that is a little big headed, and I think it could be pretty good, so please review and tell me what you think!
OK, well, enough blabbering from me, please, read and enjoy! xxx
P.S. Other chapters are longer, I promise, lol xxx
CHAPTER ONE:
It's changed!
It was cold on the other side, and the land that stretched out in front of her was white with snow. Flakes twinkled down from the grey sky. Jenny pulled her coat around her shoulders, shivering, and glanced around for Helen, who she had followed through.
She could literally not put into words how much she hated that woman! She had murdered the man Jenny had been starting to love with her entire being. With every fibre of her soul. Jenny wanted to hurt Helen. And the bitch knew it. That was why she was running into the distance now. Even as Jenny watched, the distant figure that was Helen was pulling something out of her bag. She pointed it in front of her and a moment later, a shimmering anomaly appeared.
Before Helen stepped through, she turned back to Jenny and did what was obviously meant to be a salute. Jenny hissed in disgust and turned back to her own anomaly. She had been chasing Helen through the Ice Age for what had to have been an hour, if that, and wondered whether the Anomaly would even still be there.
She was surprised to find that she didn't even care, as she took a slow walk through the towers of Ice and mountains of Snow that rose around her. She sighed and looked up to see that the Anomaly was there, glittering. She stopped and twitched her head to one side, studying it.
It looked incredible and almost twice the size that she knew it was, because of it's shards reflecting on all sides. It took a minute for Jenny to realise that the Anomaly was pulsing and imploding in on itself. Suddenly desperate to return to her own time, to the warmth of the 21st Century in July, she legged it.
She bailed towards the Anomaly, jumping the last few feet. She felt her feet hit solid ground and a wave of heat overcame her so quickly that she gasped. She fell to the floor and felt someone wrap a blanket around her.
"Fine! I'm fine…" She heard herself gasp, but she made no attempt to push away the blanket. She felt someone press a hand to forehead and opened her eyes to see Connor's face focus in her vision.
"Connor…" She said, blinking swiftly and attempting to get to her feet. She felt someone help her, grasping her arms and pushing her to her feet. Behind Connor, she could see Sarah.
"Are you OK?" She heard Sarah ask and she nodded.
"That's the last time you ever go through by yourself! Hear me?" She heard the person who had wrapped her in the blanket, felt her forehead and helped her to her feet, ask. And she froze.
Dun dun dun!
Well, what do you think? Please, Please, Please review
Thanks,
E xxxx
