Glad everyone that reviewed liked the OC I created, heres the first chapter hope you all enjoy.
Chapter 1:
It was night already and at the park was a young man named Takeru Yamato. He had white-Silver hair, blue eyes and was wearing a suit. He was taking a stroll, holding a boutique of Sakura blossoms and a bottle of Saki. On his way he stopped by at a cemetery, he went to two gravestones with the names "Saito Yamato" "Hisako Yamato". He then placed the sakura blossoms on their graves.
"You're lucky I managed to get this" he said holding the bottle of Saki at the grave belonging to his father "it took me a long time to convince the owner to let me buy this brand . I say dad you and your debts are killing me" joked the young man
"Well here's to you and mom" he said pouring the saki at the graves "don't worry mom I gave dad only alittle of alcohol " he said the grave of his mother.
After a time of paying his respects to the very parents that adopted him
"Well I should go now it's already late, Ill come back again next time" he said as he leaves.
He was now back at his house. "Great I smell like alcohol stupid saki loving parents" he said, heading to the shower. He then took of his shirt and removed the long black sleeve glove covering his entire right arm. His right arm was completely red with some blue markings under the forearm connecting to the top of his and, along with blue finger like claws, and a curved spike near his elbow.
"Well God thanks for changing my arm but can you at least just half of my arm instead completely transforming it" he said to himself as he gets into the shower. After 20 mins of relaxation, he was now out of the shower, wearing a black tank top and dark blue sweatpants, with his arm exposed since no else was here. "tch now I have to finish doing my homework, might as well do it" he said now doing his homework. Twenty mins later "ugh finally done" he said putting the homework in his school bag. he got off his chair, went to brush his teeth, and go to sleep.
The next day
Takeru woke up and did his regular routine. He changed into his school uniform, got his bag with his shirasaya disguised as a bokken inside, along with his school bag and lastly he wore a fake sling and a cast around his demonic arm so no one could see. Then he headed off to school.
~Kuoh Academy~
At the gate he could see the perverted trio near outside the Girls Kendo Club clubhouse.
"When will they learn" he sighed as he picked up a pebble and threw it at the clubhouse, causing the noise to alert the girls that someone was outside. as they opened the door to see what made the noise, they saw the three perverts running for their lives. The girls then knew it was those three peeping at them again and then they chased them this time each of them were dual wielding shinais.
"Well I had my amusement for now" he said, as he walked away.
On his way to class he saw to 2 girls being followed by what seemed to be their groupies. The first girl was about 2 cm shorter to Takeru, had red hair and bluish green eyes, while the other girl was about the same height as the other, had black hair and violet eyes. They were Rias Gremory and Akeno Himejima, the Two Great Ladies of Kuoh and to Takeru they were "who the fuck gives a crap at all they're just girls". He walked away ignoring until someone than ran into him causing him to fall on his butt.
"Allright whoever did that is so gonna die" he said in his head. He then looked to see who crashed into him, and it was one of the Hentai Trio Iseei Hyoudou who seemed to be the lone survivor of the Girl's Kendo Club wrath. Issei then realized who he crashed into, and fear then consumed him.
"Im really sorry sempai !" he said panically. Takeru then got up with the help of his shirasaya as support, he then grabbed a hold of Issei by the collar and threw him at the charging Kendo girls leaving him to his torturous beat up.
"Meh" he said as he leaved.
On his way to class he still saw the "who the fuck gives a crap at all they're just girls" again with their groupees. As he walked by his slinged arm accidentally bumped into Rias's arm. One of the groupees noticed this
"Hey you aren't you gonna apologize" one of the groupees yelled"
"…Shouldn't you kids be going to class soon…" he said with a glare causing the the younger students to shiver in fear, as he enters the classroom.
"Who was that" Rias asked
"That's Takeru Yamato isn't he in the same class as you sempai ? "
"No I didn't, did you seem him in class Akeno "
" No it seems he can hide his presence Buchou " Akeno said jokingly
"Is there a reason for his attitude" Rias asked
"I heard his parents died of murder when he was only 11. Since then I heard he stayed with a relative of his and later he moved out to live on his own."explained one of the groupees
"That's nothing Misa, I heard that he started taking kendo became a 3rd dan at the age of 13 and he only used one arm. "One arm? Wait how long did he had that injury on his arm?" asked Rias
"Rumors say that when he saw the murderer of his parents, the guy used a pipe and practically broke his arm. Also I heard his arm had been burn too. Since then he's been wearing that cast for a long time now. There was this one time I saw him and it looked like he was carrying a bokken. I followed to see what was he doing, there I saw him surrounded by what looked to be gang members and there were twenty of them. They immediately attacked. But in a flash they were all beaten into a pile and he didn't have a single scratch on him. His bokken was covered in blood and he had an emotionless face. "
The bell then rang alerting the groupees to say bye to their sempai and went to class.
"Akeno did you sensed anything coming from his arm" asked Rias
"Yes Buchouu I did, what are we gonna do with him" asked Akeno
"Im not sure but something tells me he's special, we should keep an eye on him. Akeno nodded and they went inside to class.
During class Rias was surprised that Takeru was in the same class as her as well, guessing that he didn't stand out too much she barely noticed him and what was also surprising was he was the only male 3rd year in school since it started to become a coed school. She noticed his bored emotionless expression as if he no longer cares. Later during lunch Takeru was on his way to the roof until he noticed a girl younger than him, she had white hair, hazel eyes and a cute neko clip on her hair. She was known as the school's mascot: Koneko Toujou, and to Takeru she was just a regular girl. They both walked past each other. Without Takeru noticing Koneko then turned her head back to see Takeru as he walks away. At the roof Takeru was just sitting there taking a nap.
(flashback)
It was a dark night. an 11 year old Takeru years old was waiting in the car for is parents to get back from the store. Takeru was just reading his manga with a book light attached. After 20 mins he noticed his parents coming out, but then they went somewhere else for some reason. Takeru was curious so he deceided to where they were going. He followed them to a dark alley way, then he heard loud noises. So he decided to see what was going on. He then saw people fighting, the people were all using weapons that looked like lightsaber but in white. It was two against one and it seemed the two were losing while the other was winning. After getting a good look at the two, he realized they were his parents. "
MOM DAD !" Takeru yelled.
"TAKERU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?" yelled Takeru's father. Takeru's mother then came to Takeru"Mommy what's going on why are you fighting "Takeru paniced" "Takeru listen to mommy just get a way from here and don't look back " Takeru's Mother said "but wait what about you guys I can't be alone…." Takeru said, in an instant he saw his father stabbed throw the chest by the man's sword. "Daddy!?" Takeru yelled in shocked. Takeru's Mother immediately pushed Takeru away and went to fight the man, but sadly her effort wasn't enough she was killed also. "Mom !"Takeru yelled in rage. Now getting a closer look at the man he was around his thirties wearing an all-white robe.
"Well it seems I found the demon child" taunted the man
"You!" growled Takeru in rage
"Oh please they were never your real parents to begin with" said the man
"What?" said Takeru shocked.
"Basically since you're the son of devils and those two adopted you and they didn't tell us. We warned them to give you to us so we can kill you, but they said no and they send me kill them" explained the man.
Takeru was full of despair and rage, suddenly he felt a pulse in his right arm as if something was coming.
"Well now I have to kill you" said the man pointing the sword at Takeru. In an instant Takeru managed to get behind the man in an instant and kicked him from behind. "Ouch that hurt you little son of a… "said the man getting up as he see Takeru's eyes turned red and his arm was glowing blue
"Oh this is gonna be interesting c'mon bring it devil boy" the man said excitedly as he charged at him. Takeru than raised his glowing arm and a transparent hand came out launching at the man but he doged it "ho ho nice try kid" said the man as he kicked Takeru who luvkily managed to gurad against the attack knocking him to the wall "heh that all you got kid" Takeru by instinct immediately went to his father body and took his holy sword "wow a devil weild a holy sword this is getting fun "
Takeru ignited the sword and immediately started atacking him in a two hand stlye, his attack were parried by the exorcist "heh looks like you had some training" he said as he pushed Takeru back. Takeru then grabed his mother's sword and started twirling the two swords around(Like the way Roxas wields oblivion and oath keeper)
"Hoh Hoh, two huh? interesting, I'll do the same " He said as he took out a gun and started shooting, before the bullets can even touch him they were destroyed in an instant
"What the how did you... " Takeru then charged , he attacked in a more aggressive style he abandoned his defense and just kept on attacking like a berserker
"Damn kid you're strong" said the excorist now on the defense blocking his attacks only to try used his free guun hand to shoot him only for his arm to get cut off
"ARGGGH YOU SHIT GAHH" he screamed as blood was spurting out of his wound
" That's it im gonna kill you!" he said as a magic circle appeared from his hand pointing at Takeru
"HA HA HA HA, EAT THIS KID" he said as a giant beam of energy fired. Takeru staring at the attack like it was nothing used both his swords and slashed it in an x shape dispersing the beam. The man was shocked the power he got from that Fallen angel that told him to kill this kid's parents it wasn't good enough to destroy a kid
"H hey kid look im sorry why don't we... " the man looked to see Takeru pointing his sword with the demonic arm, suddenly it glowed more and a spectral arm shout out holding the sword and stabed at the excorists chest piercing him completely has a geyser of blood erupted. With that Takeru fainted with his arm now looking demonic.
(flashback end)
Takeru then woke up more mad "Dammit why did I have to remember that day" Takeru punching on the concret floor making a small crater. Rias who was spying from afar, who was now interested in Takeru Yamato and to find out what was he hiding in that arm and that demonic energy he had. Rias who was spying from afar, who was now interested in Takeru Asama and to find out what was he hiding in that arm anf that demonic energy he had.
~After school~
Takeru went to his usual Dojo, inside it was large, there were various rooms for certain training, Then a man walked up to him.
"Hey idiot brat " said the man. The man was his Grandfather "Hiko Sejuro" he claims to be his biological grandfather from his real father's side of the family, since his childhood he has been taking care of him until Takeru decided to move out. He had a muscular build, long black hair, he wore arm guards, black pants and boots, a blue Japanese shirt, and a cape.
"Whats it look like old man"
"Heh fine here's the key to the room" Hiko said tossing it to him. Takeru grabbed it and walked away.
Takeru was at the locker room removing sling and took off the cast and changed into his training out fit which consisted of a dark blue Keigoki (shirt worn in kendo) and black hakamama(pants worn in kendo) and he had his demon arm exposed since no one was around. He then went to his personal training room, only to find Hiko there waiting.
"What are you doing here" asked an irritated Takeru.
"Well I was thinking its been awhile since I trained you, so how about it." Hiko said as he unsheathes his shirsaya. "Fine and if managed to land one injury on you, you have to let me use the muramasa sword" said Takeru as he unsheathes his shirasaya also
"HAH you can't injure me, even if you even tried" said Hiko. As they got ready to fight and an instant they were clashing swords. Takeru was going one handed with his sword while Hiko used one handed as well. Hiko parried almost every attack Takeru launched
"C'mon boy is that all you got" taunted Hiko as he kicked him in the gut. The force of the attack launched Takeru to the back of the wall in the room causing a crater around his body.
"Is that all you got old man" Takeru said as he got up with a smirk
"Heh bring it" Hiko taunted beckoning his finger. In an instant Takeru disappeared.
"Oh looks like your speed has improved" Hiko commented. Hiko then moved left arm to the side of his head grabbing in incoming kick from Takeru, but Takeru disappeard before he could land the attack. Then using the afterimage he created as a distraction, Takeru tried to attack from above using Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu: Ryūtsuisen. When Takeru was about to land his attacked Hiko was in a battoujutsu stance. Takeru thought he was going to use Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu: Sōryūsen a battoujutsu technique that consists of the first strike with the sword then the second strike with the sheath. But instead he used sheath as the attack to block his sword, then he unsheathed his sword hitting him above knocking him down to the ground, that attack was Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu Sōryūsen Ikazuchi.
"So should we call it a day?" .
"Not even close"
Takeru got back up and slammed his sword to the ground sending the debri from the floor flying at Hiko. Hiko just simply blew away the debri from the slash of his sword, casuing the incoming debris to disperse
"Using Doryūsen as a distraction, impressive"
When the smoke from the debiri cleared Takeru then charged attacking him dual wielding his sword and sheath. Hiko then attacked with a flurry of slashes as well as Takeru. They were both using Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu : Ryūsōsen, an attack that consisted with a flurry of high speed slashes. Their attack were all parried by the other. They backed away when they finished the attack, they both noticed the scratches they had on their swords from that last attack, and Takeru's sheath shattered.
"I sayIt's about time to end this don't you agree" said Hiko preparing the final attack
"Might as well"
Hiko then charged , disappearing. Takeru then felt the surge of power approaching then used Ryūsōsen, as a defensive move hoping that can helped blocked Hiko's attack . But in an instant his sword and he felt his body was hit at it's nine points
"I thought i told you nothing can block the Kuzuryūsen" smirked Hiko who was behind him
"damn"
"Maybe if you didn't dual wield with you sheath, you could've tried using Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki"
"Whatever"
"I noticed you've haven't used the power of your arm at all or even your devil abilities" said Hiko
"I don't really need to use it" said Takeru heading out
"You know if you used that power of yours you've would've improved" suggested Hiko
"Not interestested" he said heading to the locker room. He changed back to his usal attire and wore the fake sling and cast. As he left something was thrown to him, Takeru caught it.
"Whats this" asked Takeru holding the long black slim suit case.
"Your new weapon" said Hiko
"New weapon?"
"Just open it when you get home"
"Fine" he said as he leaves.
On his way home he found himself surrounded by a group of people in black surrounding him.
"If its some religion you guys are into, you can go to some one who gives a fuck." He said trying to leave. The group then took out a handle and a white blade came out them. This made Takeru irritated, one he hated exorcists because they killed his parents and two he just hated Jedis.
"Oh so its like that huh Bring it " said Takeru now ready to release his stress as he put the suit case down. The group then attacked, Takeru just casually dodged them and managed to grab one of them by the head and sadistically banged his head to the ground into a bloody pulp until and crushed his neck, after he killed one of the exorcist. He ran up and grabbed another by the neck and brutally slammed him to the ground, repeatedly punching his head into another bloody pulp until his skull cracked. The other exorcists were consumed in fear of the brutality Takeru brought upon their fellow stray exorcists. Takeru then had an evil sadistic smirk which whenever someone sees it they are pushing up daises already. His eyes then turned red and suddenly the excorists were kneeling on the ground because of the pressure of his demonic energy he was letting out.
"Aw, whats wrong can't handle it, don't worry it'll be over soon." Then Takeru pointed his hand at the group of struggling exorcists and a magic circle appeared under the group. Blue lightning consumed all of them. The screams can be heard everywhere but luckily Takeru placed a sound proof barrier already.
"That's right suffer!" Takeru said joyfully. Quickly some of the exorcists died and were zapped into ash
"Well looks like our first contestnants are gone lets see who will be left standing" he said in a evil game show host voice.
Quickly every exorcist was zapped to ash accepts one as the circle disappeared.
"Well looks like we have a winner " said Takeru with a grin as he approaches him. The excorist before him was covered in burns from his electrocution
"Please spare me please, I was only following orders !" begged the rotton exorcist before him
"Oh orders from who" asked Takeru
"Freed Sellzen!" said the wimpering exorcists .
"So that's his name huh"said Takeru. The exorcist sighed in relief
"I thank you for your info but.. You'll die anyway" said Takeru in an evil smirk as a blue aura engulfs him his eyes red eyes glowed.
As he moved his arm forward, a gaint blue specrtre like arm appeared behind him, belonging to a Blue translucent Demon covered in armor behind Takeru. As Takeru pointed his arm to the exorcist, the Guardian followed his action. He then closed his hand as if he was gripping on to something and the spectre arm closed it's hand around the exorcist. The exorcist was panicking while Takeru lifted his arm up, as the other arm lifted the exorcist in the air.
"And Now you die" Takeru said as he closed his and causing the arm of the Demon like Guardian to do the same as it crushes the exorcist into nothing but bloody guts and crush bones and guts as it drops to ground.
"Heh what a waste of time"Takeru said as he picked up his suit case and walked away.
From the top of a roof Akeno was watching what happened. She had a huge grin, blushing hard on her cheeks on her face, licking her lips, and a look of bliss. Seeing the brutality of how Takeru dealt with those exorcists, how he can also wield lighting just like her, that sadistic smile he had that made her melt, and she then thought of various S&M fantasies of her and Takeru and she was on the receiving end. But then there was his demonic aura which frightened her as well as his evil smirk he had which really turned her on. She then went back to Rias to give her report of what happened.
Well heres the first chapter, I wasn't sure how much words to add, hope its good enough for you guys. For Takeru's demonic arm its basically like Nero's Devil Bringer, from Devil May Cry 4 . I hope I did good on the fight scenes,still need to work on that, and described the Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu moves correctly. Since college is being a bitch, I might not be able to update this often,but I'll try my best to do so. So hope you all like this and please review, Thank you :)
Heres the progress for the harem I have so far:
Takeru: Akeno, Rias, Koneko, Raynare, Kalawarner, Rossweisse, Serafall, Ophis (WIP)
Issei: Asia, Ravel, Xenovia(WIP)
Not sure what other girls to add for Issei , I might add some girls from other anime. So give me any suggestions you have :)