Riding in Cars with Hunters
My first not serious fic. The title was taken from the movie "Riding in Cars with Boys" wonder if you've watch that but the story is totally different!
I must admit! I really suck at writing this fic but have the time to read it okay! This is my second fic by the way! Please give me comments and suggestions on how to improve my fics!! Flames on me are welcome okay!
Ran: Wonder if who will I go with. I would really like to have company when I visit relatives. Hey, how about Gon? He's respectful and.. Hmmmm...
* * * *
-While driving-
Gon: You know what, I'm really lucky for having my aunt Mito! She's like a mother to Me! You know, my aunt, she cooks, she swims and peels potatoes!
Ran: Our Hero. yeah right!
Gon: And she cooks my favorite dishes and wash my clothes and hang them and iron Them and.....
Ran: .. Continue...
Gon: and she do the house chores like cleaning the house, washing the dishes, taking care Of the bar and..
After 1 hr...
Gon: and she is friendly and she plants and did I mentioned that she cooks good food. She cooks my favorite dishes and wash my clothes and..
Ran: Okay, okay, I know! Enough all ready! * * * *
Ran: okay, so I think Gon isn't a good idea. Hey, how about Killua?
* * * * -While driving-
Killua: did you know that in our house, we have 200 workers and 20 more to come This year!
Ran: oh! That's many, ne? you always bring you skate board. You really like it do You?
Killua: oh, my skate board.. I have lots of them at home! My skate boards has Different qualities and brands so watch out for it
Ran: thanks for the advice!
Killua: and you know, each brand has it's own quality like this skate board, this is my Favorite brand and skate board and..
Ran: Really!
Killua: Having one is quite expensive cuz you have to buy it's parts like the wheels and And others and you really have to take care of it!
Ran: .... *Yawn*
Killua: And the proper way to take good care of it is...
After 1 hr and 10 min....
Killua: And I have 40 of them at home still usable and I have about 30 in the stock room And I'm getting 5 new this summer and....
Ran: Why did I brought up that topic!!
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Ran: okay, Killua may not work but Maybe Kurapika! I may have luck!
* * * *
-while driving-
Kurapika: so where do you want to go?
Ran: umm. to my cousins! Umm. don't get mad if I asked you this but you may not Reply if you don't want to! Do you still hate the spiders? Specifically the ryodan?
Kurapika: *turned into red eyes* I really hate them with all my life and soul and if I Ever see them again, I'll gonna....
Ran: yes, continue...
Kurapika: and that Dancho of them, Kuroro, He'll gonna pay, I'll going to kick his Sorry ass that he'll kiss the moon! And then I'll tie him using my chain And lock him and...
Ran: *******yawn****
Kurapika: and that Pakunoda. I'll going to stretch her nose as long as Pinocchio's And that Caltopi, I'll gonna punch him so hard that he can't be able to Photo copy anyone and that...
Ran: *sound asleep*
After and hour and 30 mins....
Kurapika: and that Franklin, I'll gonna cut his fingers and..
Ran: all right, enough, I get you!
* * * * *
Ran: * sigh* not a good idea either! Hey, how bout Leoreo!
* * * * *
Leoreo: Wish I have money....
Ran: for what?
Leoreo: SO that I would become a doctor... I still remember this incident...
Ran: not again...
Leoreo: I have this friend of mine, he's my bestfriend back then and he got sick and.
Ran: uh oh! This will be a long day!
Leoreo: I wanted to cure him, see, I know the antidote but I don't have the money to Buy him the ingredients and so.
Ran: for the 15th time...
Leoreo: and the antidote was you have to mix bell flower with.....
Ran: oh no.. no, no.... not an hour again! * * *
Ran: okay, so Leoreo isn't good either. hey, think of Hisoka. he's quite serious.
***** ********* **********
-while driving-
Hisoka: so, what card game do you know?
Ran: many but I don't know any gambling card games so don't count on me!
Hisoka: oh, okay! * holding a card in his hands* so, did you know that you can make A tall pyramid out of card! If you know how to..
Ran: I've tried that but.. I turned out to be only a 5 leveled pyramid
Hisoka: mine turned out to be a 4 ft pyramid and I'm making a 5 ft pyramid later
Ran: Okay so.
Hisoka: and you know, I have around 100 sets of cards and 10 sets of Tarot Cards! A collectors item! You know where to buy good cards? You can go to a...
Ran: Will this take us long?
Hisoka: why? You have a problem with that? * stares at Ran with evil eyes, preparing To throw her card on her*
Ran: uh oh! Enough.... I had enougn!!!!
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Ran: that was so close! Remind me not to insult Hisoka okay! Can't take it anymore! Why are they so.. talkative these days? I know who to go with! I'll just go by myself! Without anyone annoying me with all those an hour topics!
Okay.. So, chapter 2 is coming soon.
Pleae r&r! I need to know how am I doing! Flames on me are. well, okay, accepted. If my fic is really that bad, you can throw flames at me but. do go easy on me okay!
My first not serious fic. The title was taken from the movie "Riding in Cars with Boys" wonder if you've watch that but the story is totally different!
I must admit! I really suck at writing this fic but have the time to read it okay! This is my second fic by the way! Please give me comments and suggestions on how to improve my fics!! Flames on me are welcome okay!
Ran: Wonder if who will I go with. I would really like to have company when I visit relatives. Hey, how about Gon? He's respectful and.. Hmmmm...
* * * *
-While driving-
Gon: You know what, I'm really lucky for having my aunt Mito! She's like a mother to Me! You know, my aunt, she cooks, she swims and peels potatoes!
Ran: Our Hero. yeah right!
Gon: And she cooks my favorite dishes and wash my clothes and hang them and iron Them and.....
Ran: .. Continue...
Gon: and she do the house chores like cleaning the house, washing the dishes, taking care Of the bar and..
After 1 hr...
Gon: and she is friendly and she plants and did I mentioned that she cooks good food. She cooks my favorite dishes and wash my clothes and..
Ran: Okay, okay, I know! Enough all ready! * * * *
Ran: okay, so I think Gon isn't a good idea. Hey, how about Killua?
* * * * -While driving-
Killua: did you know that in our house, we have 200 workers and 20 more to come This year!
Ran: oh! That's many, ne? you always bring you skate board. You really like it do You?
Killua: oh, my skate board.. I have lots of them at home! My skate boards has Different qualities and brands so watch out for it
Ran: thanks for the advice!
Killua: and you know, each brand has it's own quality like this skate board, this is my Favorite brand and skate board and..
Ran: Really!
Killua: Having one is quite expensive cuz you have to buy it's parts like the wheels and And others and you really have to take care of it!
Ran: .... *Yawn*
Killua: And the proper way to take good care of it is...
After 1 hr and 10 min....
Killua: And I have 40 of them at home still usable and I have about 30 in the stock room And I'm getting 5 new this summer and....
Ran: Why did I brought up that topic!!
* * * * * *
Ran: okay, Killua may not work but Maybe Kurapika! I may have luck!
* * * *
-while driving-
Kurapika: so where do you want to go?
Ran: umm. to my cousins! Umm. don't get mad if I asked you this but you may not Reply if you don't want to! Do you still hate the spiders? Specifically the ryodan?
Kurapika: *turned into red eyes* I really hate them with all my life and soul and if I Ever see them again, I'll gonna....
Ran: yes, continue...
Kurapika: and that Dancho of them, Kuroro, He'll gonna pay, I'll going to kick his Sorry ass that he'll kiss the moon! And then I'll tie him using my chain And lock him and...
Ran: *******yawn****
Kurapika: and that Pakunoda. I'll going to stretch her nose as long as Pinocchio's And that Caltopi, I'll gonna punch him so hard that he can't be able to Photo copy anyone and that...
Ran: *sound asleep*
After and hour and 30 mins....
Kurapika: and that Franklin, I'll gonna cut his fingers and..
Ran: all right, enough, I get you!
* * * * *
Ran: * sigh* not a good idea either! Hey, how bout Leoreo!
* * * * *
Leoreo: Wish I have money....
Ran: for what?
Leoreo: SO that I would become a doctor... I still remember this incident...
Ran: not again...
Leoreo: I have this friend of mine, he's my bestfriend back then and he got sick and.
Ran: uh oh! This will be a long day!
Leoreo: I wanted to cure him, see, I know the antidote but I don't have the money to Buy him the ingredients and so.
Ran: for the 15th time...
Leoreo: and the antidote was you have to mix bell flower with.....
Ran: oh no.. no, no.... not an hour again! * * *
Ran: okay, so Leoreo isn't good either. hey, think of Hisoka. he's quite serious.
***** ********* **********
-while driving-
Hisoka: so, what card game do you know?
Ran: many but I don't know any gambling card games so don't count on me!
Hisoka: oh, okay! * holding a card in his hands* so, did you know that you can make A tall pyramid out of card! If you know how to..
Ran: I've tried that but.. I turned out to be only a 5 leveled pyramid
Hisoka: mine turned out to be a 4 ft pyramid and I'm making a 5 ft pyramid later
Ran: Okay so.
Hisoka: and you know, I have around 100 sets of cards and 10 sets of Tarot Cards! A collectors item! You know where to buy good cards? You can go to a...
Ran: Will this take us long?
Hisoka: why? You have a problem with that? * stares at Ran with evil eyes, preparing To throw her card on her*
Ran: uh oh! Enough.... I had enougn!!!!
*** **** ****** *******
Ran: that was so close! Remind me not to insult Hisoka okay! Can't take it anymore! Why are they so.. talkative these days? I know who to go with! I'll just go by myself! Without anyone annoying me with all those an hour topics!
Okay.. So, chapter 2 is coming soon.
Pleae r&r! I need to know how am I doing! Flames on me are. well, okay, accepted. If my fic is really that bad, you can throw flames at me but. do go easy on me okay!