This is my first fanfiction story im open to any advice you have. please tell me what you think so far
It all started that week. I was siting alone in the woods, watching the animals walk around. it was peaceful. it was my ecsape from the world. when i came here i could always counton it being still unlike the town that is always in motion. as i said i was sitting there alone trying to draw a deer that had stopped a few yards away from me, he was a big 12 point buck, when i heard a very loud noise and the buck dropped to the ground. i started panicing, what was that.. ive never heard that before. most people would have turned and ran in the oppiste direction, but me i went toward it. as i got closer i saw there was a large gaping hole where the leg should be. i heard something coming toward me and the buck so i hid. then came out the most handsome man i have every seen. he couldnt be more then 18 years old, he had hair that was color of gold. his skin was kissed by the sun. he wore black pants that needed mending a shirt that missed a button at the top. his black boots were very worn out. as he got closer he spoke "that was a nice shot wasnt it alec", the another man emerged from the tree line that looked about the same age but looked the complete opposite of the other boy. he had jet black hair, his skin looked as if it had never seen the sun, his cloths were very fancy and didnt belong in the woods. "come on Jace someone is going to see you" said the man, who i believed to be Alec, to the golden man i believe is called Jace. " oh come on, we cant just leave this buck here, it could feed a family for a month", Alec moaned "fine, but just leave it at a door" as jace started to gut the deer. i was confused at why the man Alec didnt want jace to be seen or talk to anyone. Jace picked up the buck and they left quickly. i walked over to where they were standing and noticed there was a knife left behind, it was a very fancy knife they probably used to gut the deer. i heard footsteps coming back so i hid again. "come on Jace you"re gonna be late" "i know, it has to be here somewhere" Jace said as he came out of the tree line back to where he gutted the deer. "Jace we dont have time for this, il buy you another one" explained Alec. jace started to leave mumbling as he walked away with out his knife, which i cluched in my hand.