A sekund, story by me, Screming MeeMe that I wrote. a:n; I hav fixed some of the grammir probllems.
A WALTZ WITH DARGONS
part of my "HOW Chrisotofper Paolini shuld have wroted eragon" siries
Tere was a time in Alagaysheuh when the dragons werent deaded and gone. And people rode them. The old Eragon was ride one and so was a girl name Fulusa and Todd the lejendar i Dragonridder. They was be friends togeter, and fought of the evil to be good. But...
A newd dragon was borne and it swa a black one and it was a talk to him it saiys "I am Blaggalon and my rdider is chosen to be me of full-chosen desteny. Fear me" But tehy fouggt him and he won, even that he was just borne! Todd the Dragonridder fell off his dragon and died but he cam bak a live and tred to fitght Blaggalon but he missed and died agan.
Blaggalon flew aways, to the windmill lands to become and train with the evils. He saw his dragonridder who was a girl. "My name is Day-na-rice." she was a had silve hair, but blue eyes. And she was a rider and fought with him to be help the become more evil. then, the gots un army of elvse to fite Eragon and tak over his farm.
"Fourwards! Elvse!" She said to their komander, Elvus the Elf.
Eragon ser the elvse and he cranked up hsi dragon to figthe them and she roared and oned. They spilled fire on elvse and saved tehe day! and their farm. Then a spears came from the sky and hurted his dragon badily. "No saphirea, you are alive you can't die now"! but she was not alive no mor. The spear had sppeared her life to gone.
Eragon was sad, so he went hom and aeted a veggie burger.