Edited in, so I hopefully don't bump this up to the top one last time.
Ok, I am very sorry to keep all of you waiting for nothing. Currently, I haven't got any inspiration for this. Also, from the reason I was gone (an english project, one major one too) I learned quite a few things that I did wrong, the biggest is the lack of detail. Secondly, I've learned NOT to just overview it only ONE DAY. I always find flaws and stuff. So I'm temperaroly cancelling this thing. At the VERY earlyest, I'd say I'll continue it the start of this summer, but there's not too much of a chance of that. Till then, I'll either be relaxing, thinking of more for the story, or writing the better versions of the chapters. Till then, thats it I guess. Thanks for reading, from this I atleast learned stuff for making these better.
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My first fan-fic! Yay!
Tidus: Hey, how long did you plan this out?
Me: Um… 12 seconds? 11?
Tidus: ...
Chapter 1:Look what I got!
We all sat there, Tidus leading us on recalling all those crazy events… I remember all of it, all of it staying, and my memory complete… I didn't tell Yuna what happens yet, hope she won't get ticked when I tell her after w- oh, sorry, I'm really jumping the gun here aren't I?
My name is Jack Nenazan. I thought this wouldn't happen, and this would be one heck of a fan-fic if I make it back… If is the keyword though... But what happened was that I was pulled into the game. Me, my best friend, and my childhood friend who just moved back in.
I'll start at the beginning. The day started fine, and was great. We just finished school, finally, 8th grade behind us, and an extended Summer cause High school is under construction! We decided to celebrate, Li- oh yeah, forgot to introduce my friends didn't I. My best friend, known him since first grade, was Mike Blake. My childhood was a girl named Lin Cincy. I didn't expect her to ever come back. She moved away just about when I met Mike, which was good cause I needed a friend.
Mike is crazy and outgoing. By crazy I mean he would zap himself with a bug zapper 30 times straight. I know cause well… he did this once. Outgoing as can be, he usually thinks about what he said about…. 10 days after, if he A) remembers, B) cares, and C)is using any logic. He never does though, which his attitude I like and makes him fun. Mike worked wonders here, he looks like a natural Al Bhed, with blond hair and green eyes.
Lin is a good friend, and in the time between when she was 5 to 13, her personality changed pretty much everywhere. She is usually mature, not that shy, and, the only thing that hasn't changed, nice, but hotheaded, and gets angry easy. She is asian, Japanese like me, and a good looking girl, but… well, you'll find out later.
Me, I play way too much video games, Mike tailing at 2nd. Basically, there isn't a game that I can't beat, unless it's broken. Final Fantasy has been a great favorite of mine. I'm kinda shy, but to friends I don't have much of a care in the world. I'm asian too and… I've been talking about fluff too long huh? I'll continue where I left off of.
Lin's parents were out of town. My dad passed away and my mom is working a lot. And out of town. We decided to throw the small party at Mike's (just to tick him off). We decided that it would be best if we celebrated on that day, Mike had kendo (sp?), and Lin had volleyball the day after that. Before we left though, Lin said she got a new game. Final Fantasy X. My favorite one, beat it forwards, back, and all the challenges.
"Hey Lin, you like games too?" I asked.
"Not really, but I play a few. My parents wanted to show my little cousin my play station, so you mind if I come early to play it there Mike? You also could help me, I'm kinda lost in the dark on how to play." Lin asked to him.
"Sure, but I have no clue where to start on it." Mike said
"I DO!" I shouted at the top of my lungs. Man I wanted to play that game, at the start and beat it in record time. Well, close to record, I can't beat my last one. "Mike, you mind if I come over too?"
"Why not just start the party early then?" he said, slightly laughing while saying it.
Just in a vain attempt and a want to see him face fault, we both said in unison "OK!". He face faulted.
Later on, about at 4:30, Lin and I walked over to his house. We left at the same time, I know cause we live right next door to each other. When we got there we did what the lunatic did to us every time he comes to one of our house. Rapidly ring the door bell until he someone answered, which if we were busy, drove us nuts. He didn't mind though, cause he does this all the time. His mom would be home late, so we were alone. We ran downstairs to his basement and Lin opened her case.
"Woah! That's cool! You have special looking one?" I shouted as soon as it opened.
With a small giggle she said "Yeah, I don't know where it came from really, the movers found it in the moving van and thought it was ours."
As she popped it in Mike popped open a can of sprite, I grabbed a controller, and we sat down on Mike's 3 beanbag chairs. For fun I decided to bring a Blitz Ball I got on the internet. It was surprisingly sturdy.
The tune of "To Zanarkand" started to play. I hummed it as it went. I memorized that and so much more of this game. I pressed start half way through, and was greeted to a cool title. The title was weird, it had only a "New Game" in the center, and it's background was different, but still cool looking!
"Pirated game. Still wanna play?" I asked.
"Meh, pirated or not, it would have been free anyway!" Mike said "Just start!"
"Ok, then, kad nayto vun V V Q!"
"Wha?"
"It means "Get ready for FFX!""
"You play this too much man!"
"I know!" as I pressed X. The game frizzled and started going haywire.
"Meh, I bet the pirated game's busted, guess your Final Fan- Oh hey here it comes back!"
We should have just turned it off, we had enough time. We thought something was wrong with it. There was something wrong alright, can't imagine a worse malfunction. The start was normal, but it still seemed strange, especially the end fading into white too early... As the screen turned white, it made a bright flash so bright, that we thought that we fainted from it.
We didn't know the half of it…
Like it? Please review, even if it's a "I read this" and that's it, I still count it as a review to me! Basicly I wanna know if I should continue this. Oh, and this is my First Fan Fic by the way, so any advice could help.
EDIT: Ok, so the first few chapters arn't as good, but the other ones after are better.
