Something New
My first fan-fiction, it really needs work,also it will most likely be a one-shot,because I am only posting for feedback on my strengths and what I need to fix.
"Uhh.. Navi?",Link gasped out between breaths."Where are we?"The glowing ball of ball of light responded with a low groan which would make a gibdo proud."LINK! For the last freaking time, my name is Tatl!You gilded piece of goron crap!" With a forced grin, Link then whipped around and noticed something very different about Termina Field ...but he couldn't put his finger on usually went forest, volcano, ocean, then this time it was forest, volcano,gaping maw leading to the center of the earth, ocean, then Link pondered this,Tatl quickly assessed the pros and cons of her situation."Hmm...suicide...or hanging out with Neutron over here."she then with extreme disgust, she came to the decision of sticking through she had to wait for Link to scroll through his "inventory" for his ocarina so that they could call Epona until he realized he had already set it to the as if by some strange coincidence, they both thought "What's a c-stick?"As they majestically stared off into the distance above them,a large tube-like object fell from the sky, then suddenly out popped a paper prompting them with a mission .In plain Helvetica, your quest is to go to the large hole in the ground, and go ruin some poor race's the shock of such an occurence left them so distraught they could only stand there with the large tube looming over peered inside the hole with the lens of truth. It appeared to have enemies that held little to no semblance to the rest of the creatures strewn across for the chu-chu , you have to keep those the several minutes of browsing the enemies,Link suddenly exclaimed "Well Tatl I know what we're not doing today!".Then with a wing raised for slapping action, she yelled at Link "Don't you want to save the world form evil again?" "No, why would I want to do something that I do on a daily basis? "retorted Link with a scowl. "Well, we might as well do something for the next 48 to 60 hours."sighed Tatl. "Awwwww do we have to?" "Yes, Link, you wouldn't want me to get out the hot glue gun and the bomb mask again would you?" With that final remark from Tatl , he then walked forward and fell right into the hole luckily he didn't fall that hard, only his legs were broken in eight different Tatl floated down into the tunnel after him , shaking her head, while pulling out a potion to heal his mangled limbs."Well, Navi we made it , and in record time too! This was a deep hole."yelled Link."Shhhhh Link, we don't know what is down here, or if it might kill us."Then at that precise moment, the walls started shifting opening up a path to an even darker tunnel."Well that seems inviting."So then Link wanders in to the dark tunnel, then after walking several hundred steps, he realized something."It's really dark in here, Navi. So it must be night."Then he drifted asleep, completely unaware that after Tatl gave him the Magic Potion, he trapped her inside ."Link!Link!Hello!I swear when I get done with him, he's going to make the Moon wish it could turn around."