Alright, I know I've tried to right fanfictions MANY times. I really hope I got something remotely good this time like, at all. I'm practicing and I think I'm getting better. (At least I'm majorly hoping I am) I've worked on this for probably an hour as nothing but a drabble and I'm proud to see what I've come up with within that hour with a weird idea of Lewa and Onua wanting children but not being able to have them.
Attention all readers. I have a small request for you all if you can fill it out. I'd love it if any of you could critique me on this. Critique is NOT flaming so don't try that and calling it a critique, I'm not stupid. Critiques are in fact appreciated by me. I personally would like it in order to become a better writer.
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Prologue
I am Toa-hero Lewa. A Toa Nuva. Toa-her of the Air. And the hear-lover of my fellow Toa-hero Onua Nuva, Toa-hero of Earth.
We've been together for a long-while now. And I don't mean just couple-lover together or going steady. No, we're married. And we both really heart-wanted to have kids of our own. You know? Have a family. We really did. I heart-swear you that on my pride as a Toa-hero. But fat chances THAT was ever going to occur-happen to us...
No, I'm not unfertile and my partner sure as the heck isn't either. So why don't we just have sex and produce-make a baby? We've had sex plenty enough times, but too bad it's not that easy...
We're both guys. And last I observe-checked, guys couldn't get pregnant. But I sure wish it wasn't so now...
End Prologue
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Do you SEE how amazingly inspiring our own GD (Green Devil) is!? This is kind of for you! Not entirely but what the hay! You're the one that inspired me to write this. And I lurve your fics DON'T EVER STOP! And if you do, I'll hunt you down in Texas (You know I kid, I love ya ;D )
Anyways, remember I love constructive critiques and flames shall be used for my heater. It saves heater bills anyways.
R&R please.