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Ch 1: Act 1 Intro
Cirque City, the city of wondrous lights, bustling people, and lately the home of a new criminal. Twice in the past week, maniacal laughter was heard shortly followed by rushing sirens. Tonight, the Ringleader would strike again.
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A muffled explosion reverberated throughout the building. The bank next door was filled with noises of movements and crime. A distinct boot step could be picked out from the other heavy footsteps. Police cars began to surge towards the bank, stopping only feet from the broken windows. The officers drew their pistols and that famous line was spoken over the loud speaker.
"The building is surrounded. Come out with your hands up!"Boot steps quickened. Bags of money jewels, and precious gems were piling into a truck. The stolen goods were ready to go. "This is your last chance!"
Step step step
A female figure appeared in the doorway of the bank. Hands tightened on their lethal weapons. A top hat, red tailed coat (the kind of coat you would find in a circus), knee-high shiny boots, purple pinstriped pants and a devilish smile all fitted to a slender figure whose lovely eyes showed green and delight. Though the girl was not that tall she held a commanding presence.
"Hello boys, welcome to my show," she said in a velvety voice. "Just wanted you to know I'm the Ringleader round here. HAHA""Stop rii.."
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
This succession of noise was soon followed by debris towards the street. The blast had sent police sprawling. As the dust settled a vehicle was heard screeching out from the building next door. The slim female figure had disappeared, but her laughter could be heard ringing through the streets. The Ringleader had gotten away.