when i wrote this i was thinking of the color of death. in my opinion i think it's white. so that's how this poem was created. i don't kh but i own my version of the characters and storyline and this poem. number IX i really don't like his name in game it makes him sound like an idiot no offense but it does. this poem is third person i believe. basically what he's doing is explaining about namine.
this is a very subtle poem i don't know really know why i wrote this being bored is part of the reason and the fact that i had to get this out my head before it contimated me. i got other ideas that seem like it's going to be quite bothersome. anyways i'll stop complaining or doing whatever i was just doing. review or don't review i really don't care. one last thing if you are going to review don't ask questions about this poem because i won't answer and you can say how bad this poem was it doesn't really matter.
Dreaming of Death
But not enduring it
Wanting to die peacefully
But seeing no end to pain
Slit a wrist Choke to death
Either way Death won't come
White is the color
Of her room
She may appear innocent
But deep down inside she cries
Every day and Every night
Hear those attempts of death
White is the color
Of her dress
She may look pure
But deep down inside her purity has been washed away
Touched by a man
All of its been taken
Her pain and sadness
Will never stop
Nor would she ever
Feel Redemption
this is a very subtle poem i don't know really know why i wrote this being bored is part of the reason and the fact that i had to get this out my head before it contimated me. i got other ideas that seem like it's going to be quite bothersome. anyways i'll stop complaining or doing whatever i was just doing. review or don't review i really don't care. one last thing if you are going to review don't ask questions about this poem because i won't answer and you can say how bad this poem was it doesn't really matter.
