Hi everyone! Lord Burger is here! (yea yea i know my name is burntburger99, whatever.) but any way i decided NOT to do ketchum espousle (i think thats how you spell it my laptop has no spell-check. :P) right now. i mean it seams that no one liked it. only 7 comments heck one of them was mine! and i think 1 favorite and maby (if im lucky) .5 follows. so i decided to write a NEW story, i was inspired by dvast's "My lone hero" it was a great story you should read it, mabey a little salty language but hey we all like a little salt. so i also decided to post very in-frequently but with longish chapters. so without further ado... MY GREAT STORY! (i still neeed a name.) note: I own pokemon because im super rich and i killed everyone at nintendo then i stole the compony. (just kidding. i dont own pokemon.)
Ash slogged down the drenched street to his home. "Frick i hate this place. its always raining here." (NOTE FROM AN EPIC PERSON: i will use words like crap, frick, ash hole :P just kidding.) as he continued down the cracked path he heard a series of sceams, not the kind that you might here form a supprised person or a happy one, but a scream of pure terror. in an act of pure reflex he started running torwerd the noise. As he passed an old abandon tower the screams reached their peak of pitch and loudness. he dashed to the door only to find it locked. jusmping through a shattered window, ash got up, dusted himself of, inspected his injuries, and looked for the sorce of the screams. ash raced up some steps and suddenly, silence. a sign of either the screamer fainted or... "please dont be that." he pleaded. he ran up a couple more flights of steps and he say the problem and almost just turned around, but his morales that he learned from dune (yes i will have him in most stories.) prevented that.
Woo! ok how did you guys like that SUPER long chapter? yep thats it! yep. ok. you can leave now...man you want me to write more. sadburger99. you dont think that was long enough? fine you ungrateful little...im not gonna finish that. alwrite (:D) lets get it over with. though just because your so whiny i might not tell you who was screaming. im so evil.
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Jessie and james were standing over,ung he hated just THINKING her name."a fool like james with a knife could be very dangerous for both me and ung." ash thought. but for the readers sake may maple. he knew he had to do something, they had tied her up, which must of been easy since she had fainted, and it was to horrible to think of what they planned on doing to her all he knew is it didnt include james' pants. "ok thats just sick." he said. they both whirled around to face the raven-haired intruder. he quickly landed a good kick james's AIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! james was screaming so loud that ash couldent even hear himself think of the squishy part. also he was to busy round-house kicking jessie to care. both of the two team rocket fools diabled ash quickly scooped up the unconcious severly bruised and cut may and proceeded to take her out of the building. "fun fun," he thought "15 miles to mays house."
nearly five hours and 17 breaks later ash arrived and the maples house. it was at 10 at night on a school night. "of course, not awake." he carefully laid down may and tried the door. nada. blushing madly he reached in mays poket for a key. "thank the good god in heven shes not awake." finally finding the key he tried the door again. nada. WHAT THE F- ash quickly put a hand to his mouth when he heard a russleing in the house. ash look around and found that mays purse was locked. "oh funny. REAL funny. so now i have a seriously injured 13 year old girl lcoked outside of her house at 10:00 wiht the thermomiter reading 44. DANDY!" ash cursed under his breath. ash looked at may. "of course! you had to wear a mini skirt didnt you?" ash asked the uncontious girl, "well i dont care if it was 60 earlier. what? oh yea you had to impress gary? HES NOT EVEN HERE!" ash looked at himself at his reflection in the glass door, "your talking to your uncontious enemy. i dont care if i hate her! no one deserves that! no not eve- no you stop talking! no! nope! no! no! no! shut up!" ash quietly turned from the maples galss front door to make sure may was fine. ash froze as the light on the porch turned on. with a squeek the door opened to show a very upset norman. his face sofened to see it was just may. except lying down, barly breathing, with cut and bruises, and her new clothes torn. "CARIOLINE!" normans voice boomed, "COME DOWN HERE!" his calls were rewarded with mays mother quickly coming down the steps still putting her bathrobe on. "whats wron-" carioline stopped instantly when she saw norman with may in his arms. "who did this?" "i dont know, i just found her. and whoever did this is gonna die." ash stood quietly in the bushes beside the porch listening to mays parents conversation till they had gone and they had shut the door. he nervously rolled out of the bushes and started walking away. the he heard a voice, dripping with mallace. "i saw you take her up the steps and just leave her there. what kind of a friend are you?" "kid," ash replied, "i didnt leave her, you parents would have killed me." "well i might just tell them that you beat her up and brought her here." max replied. "how bout i just beat you up instead of your crappy lie?" "my parents will believe me. dont worry." ash turned around to give the brat a good punch to the jaw but there was no one there. he walked down the street to his house, 15 miles away.
max trotted inside. "MOMMY DADDY! I SAW SOMEONE OUT SIDE!" norman came to his sons side. "who was it son?" a chesier (you know that creepy cat from alice in wonderland?) grin falshed acros max's face. "it was ash ketchum."
ok that is the real ending. so yes i am going to have max bad at the start. DOOM right? yea any way i might NOT include real pokemon in here but there will be references to them. this fact poses a problem, what will norman do for a living? i might put up apoll for that, but if i dont revoew you answer. so if you dont care what the frick norman will do just reveiw any way. anyway i might do a pov chapter later on but i need some feed back!