Hi everyone im a new writer and i am just getting into writing so i still need alot of help and any advise you give will be taken into consideration. I hope everyone likes my work and tell me what you think and be honest please but not too harsh i know i need work on characterizing and spelling so don't just talk about my spelling tell me somthing i dont know.
Disclaimer i dont own ranma or the characters in this story if i creat any new characters i will let you know
Deep in the jungle of china sat a young red headed girl with a pigtail and a pair of worn read and black Chinese clothes. This was no ordinary girl this was Ranma Satome or at this moment Ranko Satome. She was one of the best marshal artists in the world and right now was thinking how the hell did her pops get her into these dammed situations. First there was that dammed cursed spring her dad knocked her into that turns him into a girl and now there is a dammed Amazon trying to a kill me. All because he had to steal that fucking prize. Why did I have to win that competition to save his ass? Man sometimes i wish he would just take responsibility for his own mistakes and not go dragging me into them. Just as that thought crossed her mind she was forced to flip out of the way of a young amazon's attack that was men't to slice her head clean off of her shoulders. But being a satome, she wasn't going to let any amizon kill him over any trible law so she did the only thing she could think of at the time. She dodged a few atacks from her would be executionar and in the confusion she ran as if her life depended on it, Which in this case it actuall did. She made it to a river a few miles away from the Amazon village where genma told him to go if anything went wrong in the village and they got seperated. They always ended up making these meeting places, because genma always seemed to get them into trouble. So it became a ritual befor heading into any new town or village to set up a place too meet when his dad got them into trouble, which of course was all the time. This time it was a large tree about two miles down the river from the amazon village. Bye the time he got there genma was already sitting under the tree. He yelled at ranma what took you so long you ungratful , "GIRL". What did i tell you about calling me girl Pop's! . and for your information the reason it took me so long to get here is a nuts blue haird amozon is trying to kill me. Lets see how fast you get anywhere when you are trying to loose some crazy amazon who wants your head pops. owe or would you have rather had me stay and be killed! Hey boy you liston to me its not my fault, this times its all you and o yeah that crazy amazon is going to find us soon so we better be getting out of here soon. \
With that they took off down the river and crossed into the the lower parts of the guangxi regin but they could never seem to escape her she just kept coming the only time they ever got any peace was when they changed back into there original forms but still she seemed to know were they were, it was just baffling the two men how the hell did she keep finding them no matter what they did, Ranma I think its time for us to leave china and fast cause i dont know how see keeps finding us, i have a freind in japan that we can stay at for a while, but first will send him a letter telling him were comming.
End CH 1
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