HEllo! this Is my fisrst story and im really excited. this chapp is dedecated to my bestie Lisa. You rox. her story is here: .net/s/6400717/1/Requiem_of_Brotherhood
Discalmer: I dont own Eragon, but I wish I did because they are all so hawt
Kira stumbled forward as she was pushed ontop the platform by the Ra'zac, her long blond hair gettiung in her eyes. she glared over her shoulder at the ra'zac and shoved him slightly. the ra'zac growled and tossed her onto the platforn. once the platform was full of slaves of various age the lethrblaka it was tied to lifted off into the air.
Kira had been a slave for as long as she could remember. her mother was captured by the evil Galbatorix while she was pregnant and Kira was born into slavery. Kira had no idea who her father was as her mother had died from the cruel ra'zac after being raped by them for ours. Kira was 6 at the time and had been forced to watch it. she was forever scared. the platform sailed through the air. it was a new form of transport that Galbotorix had come up with to transport the slaves as quickly as possible. Kira was lucky because she hadnt been raped by the ra'zac, the other slaves alaways made sure to protect her. Kira forced herself to her feets and walked to the edge of the platfdorm. she sat down and swung her legs over the side. she looked out into the distance and was surprised. there was a blue object moving toward them and looking down she could see a swarm of brown racing towards them from below. Kira looked around. none of the othere slaves had noticed the blobs and where just standing.
Eragon raced towards the transport platform. he ad to save the slaves. he could not klet them down like he did his bother. Saphira let out a blast of fire towards the platformn singing the ra'zac on teh platform but not the prisoners. the warriors below him started firing upwards ton the platform. Eragon couldnt make4 out who was who but could clearly identify Arya amongst the crowd. Eragon sighed and leaned down over saphiras neck to get a better look at her.
Meanwhile, Kira ducked at the beam of fire and started at the dragon. it was blue with white streaks and was obviously a girl. Kira watched then sent it a mental message.
"Please help me"
Saphira answered immediatly
"Of coarse child"
Eragon was oblivious to the exchange and called for saphira ton attack. Saphira attacked the Lethrblaka and took them out instantly but the platformn shooke and Kira fell off.
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