My second Fanfiction is out please good and bad adivce to improve the story in any way is needed.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.
Thank you for reading.
Naruko lay on the bed, sleeping soundly, her chest slowly moving up and down while her breaths were hard to hear. The room was painted in bright orange and the floor a sandy beach color. Paint brushes, pencils, rulers in a variety of colors were scattered across the room; some pictures hung on the wall while others lay in the conner unpainted. Her eyes slowly opened revealing them to be a beautiful ocean blue color that made her look even more stunning with her golden blond shoulder length hair. She sat up after debating if she should sleep some more or get dressed before Hoki came by to check on her again, she went with the latter. As she finshed putting on her blue t-shirt and dark orange pants, the door opened, a man with light brown hair walked in. He had on a gray jumpsuit, zipped open to reveal a black under shirt with few gray stripes on it.
"Hey Naru" He sat on the bed letting out a sigh as he did so.
"Hoki is there something wrong?" He looked at her with an emotion in his eyes that she couldn't make out, so she just smiled brightly at him.
"I was told that you wanted to train today, so they said I could take you to the training area. Seru-kun and the others told me to say hi too and what else?" His happy carefree expression suddenly turned into a serious one."They want to know if you had any dreams yet." Naruko frowned at the last sentence and looked out the window.
"No." Hoki knew she wouldn't tell him what it was about. He felt bad that she was kidnapped at birth and didn't even know who her parents were.
"You know they aren't going to keep waiting." Naruko whipped her head around so fast she could have gotten whiplash that very instant.
"I hate them all."
"Naru what did you see?" She bit her bottom while her eyes darted to a painting turned upside down against the wall, she walked over to the painting deep in thought, she turned around to face him. He said nothing knowing she would most likely destroy it before the council could see it.
"It's a picture of a boy I saw in my dreams." The eight year old finally answered then ran out the room ready to train. At the training field Hoki made her warm up first then told her to make at least 3 shadow clones. She made at least 10 and jumped in the air with a yell of joy.
"Good now time for target practice." Hoki set up a handful of straw dummies, then gave her some kunai to aim with. "Aim for the center."
She did as she was told only to stop midway when a deep voice rang out.
"NARUKO!" She froze in place then spun around to face a tall dark haired man, he had a permenent frown plastered on his face.
"Yes?" Her eyes flickered to the side trying to find any possible way to escape.
"Bring us your new painting."
"I don't have one." The man narrowed his eyes to thin slits, while letting out a strong killing intent.
"What?" Naruko winced at his voice then told him she didn't see anything.
"You expect me to believe that. Tomorrow morning I want a painting or else." The man left with a poof of smoke.
"What am I going to do?" She quietly whispered this to herself then looked at Hoki, he combed through his hair with his hand.
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