I was reading breaking dawn last night after my internet went off, and
I decided to write a human version/alternative ending/completely
different story. I don't really know. If it is
rubbish or good, it was just for fun.
Missing The Present.
The last conversation I recall having with any member of my family,
consisted of 23 words and a dial tone.
That was a conversation the old Bella would have. Not the new.
Chapter 1: crystal clear
BPOV
"Mummy, where are we going?" my boy asked as we were exiting our
plane. I had decided that it was time to return home. Forks is where
I belonged. When I left 4 years ago to the day, I left with half a
heart. I knew my heart would only be complete in Forks. My life has
revolved around Forks, I was born there, I went to school there, I met
the love of my
life there, and the love of my life me there. But most importantly my
dad and sister were there. I had to return to them. I know they know I
am alive because they can access my bank account and see that a steady
flow of money it entering and leaving it. I have no idea what Rosalie
has told them about my last words, but considering they have never
attempted to contact me, I don't think they know about
my babies.
"we are going to a very special place baby, where allot of important
people live. Now be a good boy and sit nicely like your sister." I
replied to my son, I kissed him on the forehead and ruffled his hair.
He softly said ok then stud down his seat and looked out of the taxi
window. We drove slowly through the streets of forks, until we
entered a familiar road.
Outside of the white wooden house was Charlie's old cruiser, Alice's
Porsche and my old truck. The taxi slowed to a halt. I quickly passed
the driver the money and grabbed my bags. I put them on the floor
beside the road the opened the back door to the taxi. I helped my
twins out them watched as the taxi drove away into the distance. I
took my children's hands and walked them up to the doorway. They jumped
behind me and gripped onto my coat tail. I softly knocked on my old
door and waited. The door swung open and I was greeted by my fathers
jaw hitting the floor and my normally loud sister speechless.
"Bella.." she breathed. she opened her arms wide and hugged me tight.
"Alice.. I've missed you." I said just as breathlessly. She nodded and
rested her head on my shoulder. Alice made a loud gasp as she looked
into the crystal clear orbs, that were my children's eyes. "oh Bella.
You have some heavy explaining to do before Dad returns!!!" She
snapped. I turned around just intimae to see my fathers cruiser
speeding out of the drive.
Here comes the hard part.
APOV
When my eyes locked with the Childs eyes. A overwhelming sense of anger
boiled inside of me. Bella's eyes were a dark chocolate brown. These
eyes, that were locked with mine, were a crystal clear blue shade.
Only one gene in Forks could contain that colour. That was the McCarty
gene.
I have decided to write this story in a style that each chapter is in
one or two POVs but in the same time and place. The next chapter will
start with a different POV, at a different time... confused as I am?
it should make sense soon.
What you think of my first chapter? sorry if it is rubbish, but it was
written at 10:30, in the dark, on a iPod touch. xx