Demoness:
I"M BACK!!!! It's going to take a lot more than school to kill me...I
finally revised and I am very pleased with chapter one... and I have to give
thanks and credit to my beta reader *Black Raven of Death (formerly Crash),
a.k.a. broken_angel* Well since I revised it I would
like to know what you people think of it now. I tried to stay with as much of
what I wrote in the first go around, but those plans sort of flew out the
window when I started writing...so Just press the review button and say what's
on your mind, like it hate it, whatever...Enjoy!
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters of Inuyasha, but I do own
Chitenshi, Kayla, and Julie. As well as any other characters that are in my story , but not in the series. Haily/Inochiki belongs to
Sesshoumaru's Mistress who is also a friend of mine.
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Chapter One: Dream Interrupted
~ She soared above the shoreline, her
heartbeat racing in anticipation, knowing he would be there. He would always
wait for her and her for him. The stars would connect them each night, letting
the moon keep watch. She saw the clearing in the distance and increased her
speed. She silently set down and took in his appearance. He stood regally at
the edge of the cliff, looking out into the vast ocean before him. He knew she
was there, but waited for her to take her place beside him. She quietly walked
towards him and stood beside him in comfortable silence basking in the light of
the moon. He soon stepped behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist,
nuzzling her neck.
He quietly whispered in her ear. "Maybe tonight the unknown force that
keeps your face hidden from me will be lifted, my Tenshi."
She turned around in his embrace and placed her palms on his chest, keeping her
head tilted down. "I hope in my heart that I will finally see the man who
has stolen my heart under this moon as he has so many times before," she
quietly responded, slowly lifting her gaze to meet his.
The fog that hid his features from her was clouding her vision, trying to stop
her from seeing. She felt the pull on her mind and knew she was fading away
from him. Before the link they shared was severed she was allowed to see a part
of him that would show his true self. She saw his eyes, full of depth and
colored a mesmerizing gold.~
*Ring*
Chitenshi's eyes snapped open at the sound of the intruding ring of the last
bell of the day. The shock of the last picture in her mind had all of her
senses in over drive. She saw his eyes! Chitenshi finally saw a piece of the
man who holds her heart.
"His eyes were so intense in color and emotion. They hold a depth that I have
never known in another." Chitenshi pulled herself out of her thoughts and
looked down at her watch. "How long was I asleep?"
"Let's see. You were asleep at the beginning of Mr. Felice's
speech about the Russian Czars and continued on through the end of the day
announcements and prayers. So I'd say that you were dead to the world for about
30 minuets. I hope you had a nice rest and by the way, what were you dreaming
about?" Haily walked up to her friend and placed a hand on her shoulder.
"Speak of the devil." Chitenshi rolled her eyes while trying to
gather her books together. "What gave you the impression that I was
dreaming?"
Haily stood back and placed her hand over her heart in mock hurt. "You
know I can't be the devil, you've already claimed that position for yourself.
And do you honestly think I'd believe you weren't dreaming when I saw the look
on you face and heard you muttering words under breath about eyes." Haily
raised an eyebrow waiting for an answer.
Chitenshi half-heartedly glared at her friend knowing that there was no way to
escape the question. 'Maybe I can give her a simplified version,' she thought.
"Alright I'll tell you, but you can't say anything to the other two,
okay?"
Haily nodded so Chitenshi could continue. "For the past few months I've
been having dreams about this person, but I've never been able to see what he
looks like and just now I saw his eyes, but his eyes tell me who he really is
inside. Other than that, I don't know who he is or if he is even real."
Chitenshi sighed and stared up at her friend from her seat.
"Well that's certainly unusual, but whoever said that you were
usual." Haily flashed a suspicious smile. "Beside we're young women.
We're supposed to dream about men and other such things..."
"How did I know that you would not be able to keep your head out of the
gutter for more than five minuets? One of these days you are going to be the
death of me and then I'm going to come back and haunt you. Now if I stay in
this chair anymore I'm going to become it. So let's go find the others and
leave."
Chitenshi grabbed her bag and the two friends left the class room. The hallway
was full of students trying to get home to officially start the weekend. They
all rushed about, barely taking notice of the people around them, other wise
they would have seen the subtle differences in the people they called their
friends.
Most people would never know that demons and humans went to the same school,
worked in the same offices, and were the best of friends. Most demons could
tell if the people around them were of demon blood or human, but there were the
select few who hid their auras from everyone. Those were the demons that could
cause the most damage. The humans would never know unless they had special
training to detect a demon's aura, which was rare and far between. The lack of
knowledge in the majority of the population is what allowed Chitenshi to walk
freely through the halls and hold a high standing in the school.
Others could sense a certain power from her that either drew them towards her
or push them away. Chitenshi masked her aura and put a seal on her power so
they would never find out who and what she truly was.
To reveal herself would condemn her to a life of running and fighting that
would one day lead to her death.
She was a breed of demon that had long since been erased from existence because
of the threat they had posed to the other races of demons and humans. Her race
possessed enormous power and knowledge. Those who truly knew what they were
like found them to be respectful and generous to others, but ignorance took
hold in the minds of the weak who craved power. The other demon populations and
the stronger human clans attacked and enslaved her kind for their own use. They
wanted their power and knowledge to become stronger and for the chance to rule
over all. By doing this they sealed their fate and forfeited their lives trying
to fulfill this unattainable goal.
Hundreds of years later, most had thought them to be wiped out by their
ancestors, but one remained in spite of all their efforts to eradicate them
from existence. One little girl had been spared by fate so that one day she
would be able to rebuild her race and clear their name. Chitenshi was a blood
demoness of royal heritage, a queen who would decide the fate of the world and
the lives of everyone she holds dear.
Left here by her mother and father, Chitenshi knew nothing of her past and
heritage except for what she had learned from her foster parents and the
stories people told. She learned to be who she is from the teachings of her
foster mother and her own will. She lived her life the way she wanted, but was
always mindful of the results her actions would have. This was the reason she
hid her true self from everyone including her closest friend Haily. She was
like a sister to Chitenshi, but the decision to not disclose the information to
her brought her great sorrow, but it kept both of them safe and alive.
Chitenshi and Haily noticed the stares from the others as they walked down the
hall, some in complete awe and others in fear. They knew their standing in the
school and Chitenshi smirked in knowing it. The two reveled in the attention
when they were together and always thought it fun to show off when they could.
Chitenshi had the deepest crimson hair that fell to the middle of her back. Her
skin was a flawless pale ivory that held a perfect contrast with her hair and
eyes. Looking into her eyes compared to looking into the purest emerald gem.
Her body was filled out in all the right places and lean and toned from years
of training. All of her features expelled something of an
other worldly darkness and mysteriousness which often led people to
misjudge her personality. Chitenshi had a kind and respectful nature. She
always gave her time to help her friends if they were having problems while
ignoring her own. She just wanted to be understood and not judged because of
her appearance.
Where Chitenshi had an air of mystery about her, Haily was the opposite in
almost everyway. Haily stood shorter than Chitenshi and had shoulder length
brown hair with blonde highlights throughout. Her skin held a perfect light
tan, never fading even in winter. Her milk chocolate eyes always seemed to
dance in the light giving off a joyful radiance and mischief. Haily was the
light where Chitenshi was the dark.
Though people feared both girls in their own respective right, most admired and
respected them for the things they did both in and out of school. Chitenshi was
a highly promising ballet dancer and Haily was close to becoming a professional
equestrian rider. Both had tight schedules, but always seemed to make time to help
out with special programs in the school. They had countless friends who they
could always rely on, but the enemies they had acquired over the years ran
deep. They all sensed a difference in Chitenshi and they wanted her for it.
As the pair neared their lockers, many eyes followed their movements,
especially a pair that wanted them both for himself. Chitenshi being observant
of her surroundings noticed the prying stare and nudged Haily.
"Haily, look over your left shoulder and about ten feet back. You will
notice that our ever persistent shadow is following us again," Chitenshi
whispered as she pretended not to notice him.
"When will Travis learn that I will never, and I mean never, go out with
him. The very thought of him repulses me. He's starting to really freak me out
when he does that," Haily said, nodding her head in his direction.
Travis was staring at them with an odd gleam dancing in his eyes. Upon noticing
this Chitenshi increased their pace down the hall.
"I suggest that we get to our lockers, locate the others, and then leave
as soon as possible so we don't have to deal with him today." Haily walked
a little closer to her friend as the continued their hurried pace away from
Travis.
Chitenshi breathed a sigh of relief when they saw the two familiar faces
waiting at their lockers of the ones who would be joining them that evening.
"What took you guys so long? We've been waiting here close to five minuets
already," Julie nearly yelled as her friends approached.
"Calm down, Julie! We'll be leaving soon, so don't worry. We were talking
then ran into a bit of trouble in the hall," Haily snapped, getting
annoyed at the questions from her friend.
"Was Travis giving you trouble again? The guy is really starting to act
weird and it's got me worried for you," Kay said quietly to keep it hidden
from the remaining people around them in the hall.
Seeing Haily pause momentarily while putting her books away, Chitenshi decide
to answer for her. "The Travis situation is getting worse. He always seems
to be following Haily now, especially after I said no to him months ago. He has
little regard for the restraining order I had placed against him and this
hellhole of a school could care less about enforcing it for our safety."
Haily closed her locker and turned around holding a binder in her arms.
"Something isn't right with him. The look in his eyes scares me. I don't
know what he is capable of anymore." She held the binder closer to chest
and looked down finding the floor very interesting at the moment.
Tension and worry set in on the group, and Chitenshi wouldn't stand for it any
longer. "Alright," she practically yelled, gaining the groups
attention. "Tonight we are going to forget about everything and that
includes psychotic assholes, weird dreams, and anything else that is bugging
us. My dad is out of town on business and we have run of the house."
Chitenshi stood a little straighter preparing for her next comment. "Now
if I'm right, which I always am, we look pretty stupid standing in the middle
of an empty hallway, so let's get in our cars and go!"
Smiles plastered to the other girls faces as they cheered their agreement. All
their worries were going to be left behind tonight, but in their eagerness to
start the night, they didn't notice the being shadowing their every movement,
just waiting for them to be alone…
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Demoness: Ok that's the revised chapter one...I sort of lied when I said there
would be no major changes...oops...BEFORE I POST THE NEXT CHAPTER I ATLEAST
WANT 5 GOOD REVIEWS PLEASE…Tell me what you think of it so far...
Sesshoumaru: I demand to know when do I'll come in?
Demoness: Soon maybe next chapter or two…why?
Sesshoumaru: No reason…just wanted to know. What am I going to do till then?
Demoness: I don't know….Go raid the refrigerator or something.
Sesshoumaru: good idea *walks to the kitchen*
Demoness: Did he just go into the kitchen? Uh oh…
