Musings of a not-quite Master
Hello everyone! For those of you who already know me, welcome back! For those of you who've just found me, congratulations! Just a quick note, just because I haven't been very active on FF doesn't mean I haven't been writing elsewhere. I still intend to keep that promise on the first chapter of my first story. Infact, I've gotten to chapter 483 on worldsofallkinds. blogspot. com. I don't have much else to say besides, welcome to the first chapter!
Darkside: take 1
Pre battle
I've gotta be dreaming, but something tells me this is more than just a dream. I mean, those the claws of those things really hurt. I'm on another platform and this one has a picture of a woman in a yellow dress.
"The closer you get to the light, the greater your shadow becomes." There's that weird voice I've been following because I don't know what else to do. I look at my shadow, and notice something odd about it. Then it starts rising... I have a feeling I'm in trouble. I start to back away.
"Don't be afriad." Easy for it to say, my shadow is begining to mutate and it's just a voice! "And don't forget..." I don't care at this point and try to run back down the mini-platforms, only to find they're missing. I bearly stop myself from falling and turn to my now unrecognizable shadow. Looks like the only thing I can do is fight and hope I survie. So I pull out my sword and start attacking.
Post battle
I've almost killed it! I jump back to take one final assult, when my sword vanishes! I get out of the way just before one of my shadow's fists would have crushed me, but I fall on my butt. It is staring at me with those glowing yellow eyes and I feel myself sinking into a pool of black something.
"-But don't be afraid." Where was it when I needed it?! Maybe it can tell me how to get out of this mess. "You hold the mightiest weapon of all." What weapon?! I can't call my sword back! I try to drag myself out of the pool, but it's no use. "So don't forget:" Just then I'm finally covered in the black stuff. "You are the one who will open the door."
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