Hey everyone! This is my first fanfiction..so yah!!! Well, just pleaz
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3 lilygirl
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Lily was running up and down the corridor train, searching for Remus Lupin. "REMUS?!!!!" "Excuse me," Lily said popping her head into a compartment door, "has anyone in here seen Remus Lupin?" "Yes, actually I saw Black and Potter at the end of the corridor, last compartment I think" replied Amos Diggory, a cute Ravenclaw in 6th year like Lily. "Thanks Amos" Lily said smiling sweetly while thinking 'Can get any cuter? He gets even better looking every year!' she thought while walking to Remus's compartment.
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*Lily was known for being the one of the nicest, caring, smartest, and prettiest girls of Hogwarts. She had dark red hair down to her shoulders, and emerald green almond-shaped eyes that gave many guys the chills.(good chills, not bad chills). Her studies were very important to her, but she wasn't a bookworm. Many of the slytherin guys probably would have tried to hook up with her, if she hadn't been a muggle born. Lily didn't think that she was really popular, she was a modest and sincere person, which were more qualities that attracted people to her.
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Finally Lily reached the last compartment and knew that she had found the right one. She heard tiny explosions, and roars of laughter, having no doubt that Remus was inside with the rest of the marauders. She knocked and heard a voice she loathed say "come in.". Lily walked in, seeing James, Sirius, and Peter playing a game of exploding snap, while Remus was reading a book. "Evans!" James exclaimed happily, trying to sound like she was of no real importance of him, but obviously failing. Lily said nothing back to him, not wanting to provoke a conversation. "Remus, we have to go up front for prefect business." Lily said while seeing James out of the corner of her eye put his hand through his hair, messing it up, and pulling a snitch out of his robes. "Okay, I'll see you guys later then." Remus said trying not to notice James starting at Lily, making a fool out of himself. "Bye Lily" said James, putting his hand though his hair again. Lily pursed her lips, and turned to leave the compartment and rolling her eyes while saying "Remus, we'd better hurry, the meeting already started when they sent me to find you." Remus just nodded, and collected his things, trying not to laugh at Lily's reaction to Jame's behavior. "Bye Moony! We'll save you a seat at the Great Hall" Sirius spoke for the first time. When they got into the corridor, Lily sighed a sigh of relief. "So Lils, how was your summer?" questioned Remus. "Fine, thanks, and yours?" Lily replied while looking a lot more relaxed than in the compartment. "Good, but it's been difficult during the full moons of course" Remus said lowering his voice and receiving a sympathetic look from Lily.
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Although Lily and James weren't what you could call friends, strangely enough Lily and Remus were really good friends. She was one of the only three others to know about Remus being a werewolf. She even knew about James, Sirius, and Peter being animagus', though none of the three had any clue that she knew. The night that she confronted Remus on her suspicion of him being a werewolf, he spilled everything to her, including the marauders map.
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While Lily and Remus walked the rest of the way, they made small about their summers. When they finally reached the prefect compartment, Severus Snape walked pass them, almost looking apprehensive about walking so close to them. When he passed them, Lily said in a low voice, "Even though its Snivellus , I feel so sorry for him.it's awful how some people treat him" obviously referring to James and Sirius. They walked into the compartment while the Head Boy Harrison Le, was talking about their plans for the upcoming year. "A, Lupin, Evans, you're here, great! Now we can really get down to business..."
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Meanwhile, back in the boy's compartment, Sirius and Peter were snickering at James, as he was still dreamily staring at the place where Lily had been standing. "Oy, Prongs..EARTH TO PRONGS!!" Sirius said while Peter and him were waving their hands in front of James's face. After a couple minutes, James had awoken from their dreamland with a "What? Huh? Did I miss something?" "Nah prongs, nothing important" replied Sirius , smiling and shaking his head at how bad his best friend had it for Lily.
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The meeting for the prefects had ended and Lily and Remus had just finished their rounds up and down the train (making sure no trouble broke out anywhere). "Well , we have about forty-five minutes until we got to Hogwarts, do you want to visit Brynna and Embry with me? I haven't talked with them at all the whole trip! Lily said. "Sure" Remus replied with a subtle grin. Since the beginning of their 5th year, Remus had had a crush on Embry . "Come on then," Lily said, pulling his arm and dragging him to the compartment of Brynna and Embry . Embry had developed a crush on Remus during 5th year also and it was Lily's goal to set them up. "Hey Girls!" Lily said when getting into their compartment. "Hey Lils" said Brynna and Embry, not looking up from their game of chess, giving Remus a moment to study Embry. "Remus and I have just gotten back from our meeting." Lily said, hoping Embry would look up at the mention on Remus's name. As Lily predicted, Embry looked up, and was surprised to see Remus standing there looking at her. She a bit flushed at the sight of him, and he was intently staring at her and grinning. Brynna took this chance to get up and drag Lily out the door saying to the others " We've got to go to the bathroom, we'll be right back!" They walked around the corridor, having no intention on going to the bathroom. "I'm so happy we finally decided to get them together, their going to be the cutest couple! Then, when we've gotten them sorted out, we can work on you and Amos! At the mention of Amos, Lily blushed a little but said "Who says I like Amos?" Brynna put a look her face that clearly said 'don't even try it.' "Lils, I've known you for ages, you do know that I can read you like an open book?!" Rolling her eyes, Lily started walking toward the compartment. Embry and Remus were both snuggled up to each other, asleep in each other's arms. "Aww.how sweet!" Brynna said excitedly. "C'mon Bry, lets find somewhere else to sit, we only have a half an hour till we're at school." That was all the encouragement Brynna needed, and she flashed a very familiar michevious smile. Lily, recognizing the smile, started "Oh no, Bry what are you-" but was cut off by Brynna dragging her down the corridor in front of Amos's compartment and pushed her in. 'She is so going to get it later' Lily thought as she was removing herself form someone's lap "oh sorry!" Lily said, then looked up into two very sparkling light blue eyes. Just then Brynna walked in, looking very calm and saying "Lily, what have you done now? Sorry everyone, I keep telling her not to run off-she causes havoc everywhere she goes!" The compartment full of Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw boys chuckled, then a few continued doing what they were doing before they were interrupted. Others were still looking at Brynna and Lily, checking them out. Lily found herself still staring into those dreamy blue eyes and stood up and apologized again. "It's no problem," replied Amos, looking as taken with Lily, as Lily did with him. Brynna smiled at Amos and Lily talking thinking 'boy, im on a roll! Now..my turn.' and walked toward the guys still staring at her and struck up a conversation. They carried on that way for the next half an hour, until a speaker boomed "We have arrived at Hogwarts, please leave your luggage on the train it will be taken to the school separately." After hearing the announcement, Amos asked "Would you girls care to sit in a carriage with us?" "Yes!!!" said both girls in unison. Amos stood up and offered his hand to Lily, who instantly took it. 'I feel so comfortable around him-maybe me and him will work out!' Lily thought happily. Still holding hands, her and Amos were waiting for a carriage when Lily saw James, Sirius, and Peter walking toward them 'oh great,' Lily thought, 'I should have known this was working out too well.' James who looked as if he was going to say something rude to Amos, was cut off before he could even start by the look on Lily's face. Figuring her normal look of distaste would do nothing to help the situation, she gave a cute smile and gave puppy dog eyes at the same time. James, caught off guard by her look, smiled his most charming smile and did his signature hand through the hair. 'God didn't he get it?' She thought 'Didn't I blow up at him after O.W.L.'s last year about messing with his hair and that stupid snitch? I bet he's about to take it out any second.' And sure enough, James took out his snitch and started playing with it. Sirius rolled his eyes and muttered something not audible. Knowing James had a thing for Lily, Amos started to look apprehensive and led her away into a carriage with Brynna and a Ravenclaw boy. The Ravenclaw, whose name was Michael Davies, started talking to Amos about Quidditch , as both were players for their house's team. Lily, wondering where Embry and Remus were, suddenly gasped. The boys, engrossed in their conversation, didn't hear her, but Brynna looked over with a questioning look. 'Brynna-do you think Remus and Embry slept through the speaker announcement?" Brynna's eyes widened in worry, they weren't sure about Remus, but they knew Embry could pretty mush sleep through anything. "If we don't see them at the dinner, we'll let a teacher know" Lily consented, though still looking worried. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *~ Okay, well that was it! Lemme know what you think (review!) give me suggestions, flamers, anything! By the way, check out Emerald Tears and As Good As it Gets, their by two of my buds..i know that they haven't updated in awhile, but maybe sum reviews will encourage them ?( hint hint..) PLEAZ REVIEW!! 3 lilygirl
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Lily was running up and down the corridor train, searching for Remus Lupin. "REMUS?!!!!" "Excuse me," Lily said popping her head into a compartment door, "has anyone in here seen Remus Lupin?" "Yes, actually I saw Black and Potter at the end of the corridor, last compartment I think" replied Amos Diggory, a cute Ravenclaw in 6th year like Lily. "Thanks Amos" Lily said smiling sweetly while thinking 'Can get any cuter? He gets even better looking every year!' she thought while walking to Remus's compartment.
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*Lily was known for being the one of the nicest, caring, smartest, and prettiest girls of Hogwarts. She had dark red hair down to her shoulders, and emerald green almond-shaped eyes that gave many guys the chills.(good chills, not bad chills). Her studies were very important to her, but she wasn't a bookworm. Many of the slytherin guys probably would have tried to hook up with her, if she hadn't been a muggle born. Lily didn't think that she was really popular, she was a modest and sincere person, which were more qualities that attracted people to her.
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Finally Lily reached the last compartment and knew that she had found the right one. She heard tiny explosions, and roars of laughter, having no doubt that Remus was inside with the rest of the marauders. She knocked and heard a voice she loathed say "come in.". Lily walked in, seeing James, Sirius, and Peter playing a game of exploding snap, while Remus was reading a book. "Evans!" James exclaimed happily, trying to sound like she was of no real importance of him, but obviously failing. Lily said nothing back to him, not wanting to provoke a conversation. "Remus, we have to go up front for prefect business." Lily said while seeing James out of the corner of her eye put his hand through his hair, messing it up, and pulling a snitch out of his robes. "Okay, I'll see you guys later then." Remus said trying not to notice James starting at Lily, making a fool out of himself. "Bye Lily" said James, putting his hand though his hair again. Lily pursed her lips, and turned to leave the compartment and rolling her eyes while saying "Remus, we'd better hurry, the meeting already started when they sent me to find you." Remus just nodded, and collected his things, trying not to laugh at Lily's reaction to Jame's behavior. "Bye Moony! We'll save you a seat at the Great Hall" Sirius spoke for the first time. When they got into the corridor, Lily sighed a sigh of relief. "So Lils, how was your summer?" questioned Remus. "Fine, thanks, and yours?" Lily replied while looking a lot more relaxed than in the compartment. "Good, but it's been difficult during the full moons of course" Remus said lowering his voice and receiving a sympathetic look from Lily.
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Although Lily and James weren't what you could call friends, strangely enough Lily and Remus were really good friends. She was one of the only three others to know about Remus being a werewolf. She even knew about James, Sirius, and Peter being animagus', though none of the three had any clue that she knew. The night that she confronted Remus on her suspicion of him being a werewolf, he spilled everything to her, including the marauders map.
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While Lily and Remus walked the rest of the way, they made small about their summers. When they finally reached the prefect compartment, Severus Snape walked pass them, almost looking apprehensive about walking so close to them. When he passed them, Lily said in a low voice, "Even though its Snivellus , I feel so sorry for him.it's awful how some people treat him" obviously referring to James and Sirius. They walked into the compartment while the Head Boy Harrison Le, was talking about their plans for the upcoming year. "A, Lupin, Evans, you're here, great! Now we can really get down to business..."
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Meanwhile, back in the boy's compartment, Sirius and Peter were snickering at James, as he was still dreamily staring at the place where Lily had been standing. "Oy, Prongs..EARTH TO PRONGS!!" Sirius said while Peter and him were waving their hands in front of James's face. After a couple minutes, James had awoken from their dreamland with a "What? Huh? Did I miss something?" "Nah prongs, nothing important" replied Sirius , smiling and shaking his head at how bad his best friend had it for Lily.
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The meeting for the prefects had ended and Lily and Remus had just finished their rounds up and down the train (making sure no trouble broke out anywhere). "Well , we have about forty-five minutes until we got to Hogwarts, do you want to visit Brynna and Embry with me? I haven't talked with them at all the whole trip! Lily said. "Sure" Remus replied with a subtle grin. Since the beginning of their 5th year, Remus had had a crush on Embry . "Come on then," Lily said, pulling his arm and dragging him to the compartment of Brynna and Embry . Embry had developed a crush on Remus during 5th year also and it was Lily's goal to set them up. "Hey Girls!" Lily said when getting into their compartment. "Hey Lils" said Brynna and Embry, not looking up from their game of chess, giving Remus a moment to study Embry. "Remus and I have just gotten back from our meeting." Lily said, hoping Embry would look up at the mention on Remus's name. As Lily predicted, Embry looked up, and was surprised to see Remus standing there looking at her. She a bit flushed at the sight of him, and he was intently staring at her and grinning. Brynna took this chance to get up and drag Lily out the door saying to the others " We've got to go to the bathroom, we'll be right back!" They walked around the corridor, having no intention on going to the bathroom. "I'm so happy we finally decided to get them together, their going to be the cutest couple! Then, when we've gotten them sorted out, we can work on you and Amos! At the mention of Amos, Lily blushed a little but said "Who says I like Amos?" Brynna put a look her face that clearly said 'don't even try it.' "Lils, I've known you for ages, you do know that I can read you like an open book?!" Rolling her eyes, Lily started walking toward the compartment. Embry and Remus were both snuggled up to each other, asleep in each other's arms. "Aww.how sweet!" Brynna said excitedly. "C'mon Bry, lets find somewhere else to sit, we only have a half an hour till we're at school." That was all the encouragement Brynna needed, and she flashed a very familiar michevious smile. Lily, recognizing the smile, started "Oh no, Bry what are you-" but was cut off by Brynna dragging her down the corridor in front of Amos's compartment and pushed her in. 'She is so going to get it later' Lily thought as she was removing herself form someone's lap "oh sorry!" Lily said, then looked up into two very sparkling light blue eyes. Just then Brynna walked in, looking very calm and saying "Lily, what have you done now? Sorry everyone, I keep telling her not to run off-she causes havoc everywhere she goes!" The compartment full of Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw boys chuckled, then a few continued doing what they were doing before they were interrupted. Others were still looking at Brynna and Lily, checking them out. Lily found herself still staring into those dreamy blue eyes and stood up and apologized again. "It's no problem," replied Amos, looking as taken with Lily, as Lily did with him. Brynna smiled at Amos and Lily talking thinking 'boy, im on a roll! Now..my turn.' and walked toward the guys still staring at her and struck up a conversation. They carried on that way for the next half an hour, until a speaker boomed "We have arrived at Hogwarts, please leave your luggage on the train it will be taken to the school separately." After hearing the announcement, Amos asked "Would you girls care to sit in a carriage with us?" "Yes!!!" said both girls in unison. Amos stood up and offered his hand to Lily, who instantly took it. 'I feel so comfortable around him-maybe me and him will work out!' Lily thought happily. Still holding hands, her and Amos were waiting for a carriage when Lily saw James, Sirius, and Peter walking toward them 'oh great,' Lily thought, 'I should have known this was working out too well.' James who looked as if he was going to say something rude to Amos, was cut off before he could even start by the look on Lily's face. Figuring her normal look of distaste would do nothing to help the situation, she gave a cute smile and gave puppy dog eyes at the same time. James, caught off guard by her look, smiled his most charming smile and did his signature hand through the hair. 'God didn't he get it?' She thought 'Didn't I blow up at him after O.W.L.'s last year about messing with his hair and that stupid snitch? I bet he's about to take it out any second.' And sure enough, James took out his snitch and started playing with it. Sirius rolled his eyes and muttered something not audible. Knowing James had a thing for Lily, Amos started to look apprehensive and led her away into a carriage with Brynna and a Ravenclaw boy. The Ravenclaw, whose name was Michael Davies, started talking to Amos about Quidditch , as both were players for their house's team. Lily, wondering where Embry and Remus were, suddenly gasped. The boys, engrossed in their conversation, didn't hear her, but Brynna looked over with a questioning look. 'Brynna-do you think Remus and Embry slept through the speaker announcement?" Brynna's eyes widened in worry, they weren't sure about Remus, but they knew Embry could pretty mush sleep through anything. "If we don't see them at the dinner, we'll let a teacher know" Lily consented, though still looking worried. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *~ Okay, well that was it! Lemme know what you think (review!) give me suggestions, flamers, anything! By the way, check out Emerald Tears and As Good As it Gets, their by two of my buds..i know that they haven't updated in awhile, but maybe sum reviews will encourage them ?( hint hint..) PLEAZ REVIEW!! 3 lilygirl