This is my first fan fiction story so I hope you like it (:
I wanted to be dead. I waited in the road to die. It was cold, though there was so much pain that I was surprised it bothered me. It started to snow, and I wondered why I wasn't dying. I was impatient for death to come, to end the pain. It was taking too long…
That was when I realised I was being carried. It took a while for my eyes to a just. Even though it was still dark, I could see the beautiful man as he carried me like I was as light as a feather. Two other people were with this man, a stunning woman and a very attractive young man. I was quite upset at how all of them were more beautiful then I was.
The speed of how fast this man ran made me feel like I was dead. It was horrifying that the pain didn't stop.
I was placed in a warm, bright room. I felt myself starting to slip away and I was quite relived that the pain began to dull. Suddenly something as sharp as a steel blade started cutting me in my throat, wrist and my ankles. I screamed in shock and pain. He brought me here to hurt me more? That was when the burning started. It was painful. I begged him to kill me.
"I am truly sorry. My name is Carlisle, and I am here to help to keep you alive. My wife Esme and her Brother Edward and I are not what we seem. We are vampires," he began to say. I didn't really pay much attention to what he was saying; I was in too much pain to care. But one word he said made me flinch, vampire…
I didn't know how long it had been since the burning had begun. Whenever someone entered the room, I begged them to kill me.
"What were you thinking, Carlisle?' Edward had said when he heard me scream as he entered the room. "Rosalie Hale?" I really didn't like the way he said my name. And he was starting to get on my nerves…
"I just couldn't let her die. I was too much-too horrible, too much to waste." Carlisle whispered.
"People die all the time. Don't you think she will be just a little recognizable? The Kings will put up a huge search party." Edward said this in a hard voice.
The pain started to fade now, away from my fingers and toes. My heart thumped hard and fast against my chest and I thought it was going to explode out. Faster and faster until it stopped.
My eyes opened in a flash. I could see everything, every fine detail. The small scratches carved into the walls. The little fluff particles that floated around in the air. Something caught my eye, an eight coloured rainbow on the edge of the celling light. I didn't have a name for this colour yet, but I would work on it. I looked down at my body. My skin was as white as snow and it was flawless. I had some beautiful clothes on but I don't recall remembering wearing these. I tried to remeber what had happened the night i left my friends house. But it was all black, a dull memory that i couldn't rememeber.
"Rosalie?" a voice called my name and it sounded just beautiful. Carlisle stood in the doorway, very cautious as he moved quite slowly towards me. He was ever so handsome and had skin the same shade as I did. A little hiss excaped my throat as I quite quickly got off the bench and into a crouch. I strood there, amazed and shocked. Did I just hiss at someone? That was when I realised my throat burned. I grasped onto it but I didn't know what I wanted. I was thirsty, but not for water.
"Rosalie, it's okay. I, we are here to help you through this," In just a second Edward and Esme were by Carlisle side. I gasped in amazement. They were all gorgeous. Edward was rather handsome. The fine lines of his body just stood out, the brown hair that framed his face and his glorious hazel/yellow eyes. A smug smile came on his face, as if he heard what I was thinking. But it disappeared in the same second. He looked very cautious, and ready to pounce on me as if I was the bad person.
"Calm Edward, she is just scared. Rosalie are you feeling okay?"
I eyed him for a moment and then stood up in one quick, sharp movement.
"I'm just thirsty." My voice sounded so different. smooth, calm and quite pretty. I took a breath of air although it felt like I didn't need it. Esme stepped forwards, her hand streched out as if she wanted me to take it. I liked Esme. I moved to her quite quickly and then stopped about one metre away from her. I was fast. Something caught my eye in the reflection of the window. A beautiful young woman with long blonde hair. Her skin white, her body just perfect, dark eyes. Blood red eye... I gasped.
"Rosalie, would you like to see what you look like?" Esme kindly asked.
"She already has seen her reflection," Edward told her. How did he know? Does he know what I am thinking?
"Yes," Edward said like he was answering a question. Edward left the room for 3 seconds and was back with a mirror. That woman I saw in the window, was me? I was beautiful! The only thing I quite didn't like was my eyes. The colour of dark blood. That was when i remembered something Carlisle had told me. Just then one word came to my mind;
vapire...
So… Do you like it so far? Some things in here are from Stephanie Meyers book, Eclipse. But as you read on, it will begin to make Rosalie's life as a vampire. My version.
Please review it. What do I need to add, take away? Anything that will help me write this story.