Disclaimer: not my, all hail joss :bows:
AN: the revised version of chapter one, now betaed by the amazing :drumrole: KarmaWiccan! she's wonderful people, sorted through all my mess of bad grammer and miss spelled words to present you this!
It's coming! It's coming! Running faster, faster, faster.
Run catch; run catch; the lamb is caught in the blackberry patch.
Watch out
little lamb: the tiger comes-- eyes like needles... Run! Run!
The
Strong Girl sits like a queen on a pile of hearts. No more
now, not my
William, too.
No more biting. Snap. Snap. Mean
old solider came; now my Spike can't play
with the other puppies.
But don't worry, my Spike. Little toy soldiers all
in a row. Mummy
will take care of it, and make it all better.
Daddy screams.
I'll open the cage, and we'll be family again. The little
light
flies away. No more trees to save it now-- all gone.
Grandmother
fell. Ashes all over; no more coming back; ashes falling on my
new
dress.
The tea and honey are spoiled. No more parties. Not
yet.
Shhh, Miss Edith, Daddy will be home soon. Shhhh. The
tiger comes with eyes
like needles. Shhhh. Daddy will be home
soon, and we'll get you a new dress
for the party. You like
parties don't you, Miss Edith? We'll have some soon.
Don't cry. Daddy's coming and it will all be better soon.
Shhhhhhhhhhh
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