Greetings! This is my second story I have ever posted on so
I hope that you like it! Inuyasha is the best! Ok, so here are some things I must
Tell you:
1) Sesshoumaru is a little out of character. Just a little+
2) Rin is around Sesshoumaru's age! Yes I know, he is at least over 50, but in this
Story, he is only about 20 years old. I'm also sorry to say that he is not a demon.
3) Rin's family is all alive, and Sesshoumaru's is the same as it is now, all dead
except for Inuyasha.
4) I do NOT own any Inuyasha characters. Though I wish I did... wipes away a tear
OK, that is it. ON WITH THE STORY!
"Where could she have gone?" A middle-aged woman asked. "She went to
get water from the lake, but she hasn't come back yet." The woman was pacing
around the area in front of her home. A man, around the same age as the woman,
came out from inside their hut and put his hand on her shoulder. "Don't worry, she
does this all the time. She is probably just day-dreaming beside the lake." He assured
her. The woman sighed, "You're probably right. But I can't help but worry, I mean, there
are many goblins and imps that wander around those areas. The lake IS right next to the
'Black Forest!'" The man looked at his wife and told her not to worry. The woman seemed to give In but with one last look toward the direction of the lake, she went inside.
At the lake:
A young girl lay on her stomach, playing around with a flower. She had long brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She was the average height and under weight. Her name was Rin. Rin day-dreamed a lot and most of the time, it got her into trouble. She day-dreamed mostly about Dragons. She was told many stories of them and told that they were the most beautiful creatures on earth. Rin wished so badly to see one, touch one, and maybe, even ride one. She sighed and closed her eyes sadly. The only ones that may ride Dragons are Dragon riders and the ones they knew.
Rin sighed and rolled over onto her stomach and looked at the sky. She gasped as she saw the sun on the far side of the sky. She was supposed to be back two hours ago! Rin jumped up and got the two water jugs and ran toward her village. After about several minutes of running, she burst through the door and set the water down. After taking off her shoes, her mother ran into the room and embraced her. "You left us so worried! You were expected two and a half hours ago!" Rin stood there not hugging her mother back. "I can take care of myself mother." She muttered. Her mother nodded and stood up, hands still on her daughter's shoulders. "I know that. But goblins and ogres wander that area. I don't want to lose you." Her mother let go of her shoulders and walked back into their kitchen. Rin shrugged it off and went to her room to sleep.
That night, Rin had a strange dream, She was running away from some black figure behind her. She looked behind her and stumbled on some sort of tree root and fell to the hard earth. She closed her eyes, expecting to some sort of blow, but when nothing came, she looked up. She gasped as she saw the thing on the ground, dead. She looked around for her savior when she saw white hair…. "W-who are you?" She croaked out.
Just when it was going to answer…
Rin jolted up. She looked around franticly then sighed when she saw nothing. "Ah, just a dream" She got out of bed to see that it was pretty early and the sun was just barely rising. Not wanting to go back to sleep, she changed out of her nightclothes into some white baggy pants, a white long dress-like shirt, and a white cloak with green silk sewn into the sides. She grabbed a water jug and a green beaded bracelet and necklace and put them on. She walked outside and toward the lake. It took her about fifteen minutes to walk there. She filled the jug and decided not to make her mother worry about her, and started to leave.
After about two steps, Rin heard a noise. She looked around and took another two steps when she heard it again. She turned around to see a goblin running toward her. Not knowing what to do, She threw the water jug at it. It screeched and clawed at its eyes. She knew that she wouldn't be able to out-run it, but she still ran. But, in the direction of the Black Forest. After about 15 minutes she looked behind her to see the goblin gaining on her. She looked ahead and ran as fast as her legs would take her. Soon, she looked behind her to see if it was still chasing her, when she tripped. She closed her eyes, waiting for a blow. When nothing came, she opened her eyes to see the goblin on the ground, dead. She looked around for whom was responsible, when she caught a glimpse of hair.
White hair.
So? What do you think? Is it good? Please review. REVIEW AND I'LL LOVE YOU! That kind of rhymed didn't it? Ok, so I'm my spell checker hates me and I hate it. But the rules are rules. becomes blind from the red lines Ok ill accept flames because they are just telling me how I could make my story better. But, please, no swearing or verbal abuse to me or my story. hugs story I don't want it to hear bad things. Ok. Well, I hope you have a wonderful day/evening/morning or what not. I hope its not too short for you! I'll try to make it longer! Well that being said, ill take my leave.
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