Naruto´s sacrifice
Edit 13-5-16.
Hello all :D
It has been a while since I made this hasn't it? My English has gotten a lot better since 2012 and I am going to see how I can improve this one-shot. Because I see some mistakes I did not see back then. And I changed Momo to Kurama and Kurama is male, just like in the manga and anime. And this is more on an platonic/brotherly level then before. They have been with each other a while after all.
I hope you all enjoy the rewritten version!
Madara has been killed moments before this takes place and this is a different take on what happened with Pain who destroyed Konoha but it has some resembelance to it but this fic can be seen as something that is an 'what if' because it an senario that never happened.
'bla bla'= thinking
"bla bla" = talking
Warning: Major Character's death.
"But I can still do something for Konoha and everyone!" Naruto. He slowly got on his feet and began to walk towards Kurama. He was still groggy from Madara's attack. Naruto walked over to him and sat down. Kurama was the nine tailed fox, and Naruto was his jinchuriki. Nobody who was not close enough could hear them. Kurama had manifested himself outside of Naruto's body this time but in an humanoid form. He looked more like a young man around his twenties now then a gigantic demon fox. But he still had his fox ears and nine tails. He had long blood red hair, wiskers like Naruto did and he had a simple shirt and pants on, with red and black coloured pieces.
"Kurama?" The blond asked. The fox took a bit to respond. "Yes Naruto?" Naruro bit his lip. He did not want to say this but he had to. "Go home. You have to go home while you stil can." He said. Kurama was going to protest either way. "Aboslutely not!" Naruto sighed. "Please. go home." He said again. "I know that I will die when you leave, nut I just want you to be free and you can return to your family. I have my own to return to. You probably know who I mean..." He trailed of a bit. He smiled at the fox in a kind of brotherly way. "While you return home, don't try to destroy anything, alright?"He tried to joke a bit.
Kurmama could only nod. He had grown on the kid and he did not want to leave him, knowing his container would die but if he stayed he would die as well and he did not want that either. Then Naruto's sacrifice would have been in vain. But he did not want that yet. Naruto was slowly dying but if they did not seperate their souls, wich were conected due the seal still intact, they still both could die.
Naruro untied his headband with some difficulty. "To remember me by." The blind ninja said, voice gone a bit hoarse. Kurama accepted the gift, what else could it be? And just held it in his hands. Kurama wanted to get Naruto to the hospital but the demon fox knew it would be too late. He opted to stroke Naruto's hair instead. "Shall I break the seal for you?" He offered, knowing Naruto would be too tired to do it himself. Naruto just gave a small nod and lifted up his shirt, his seal visable for everyone to see, not that many were nearby to begin with.
Kurama got chakra on his fingertips and placed them on the seal, turning his hand clockwise omce, like opening a door. Naruro vissabiibly flinched and let out a small groan, it hurt like a inferno had erupted inside of him. But Kurama could feel the link they had shared the last 19 years dissapear like snow dissapeared before the sun. And his chacra was returning to the fox demon as well. Still not many humans were around, them being in a disolate corner of the battlefield. The battlefield that used to be the Konoha Village in the land of Fire. Madara had destroyed much of it, more then Kurama had done with the attack that night 19 years ago.
And as an last effort to kill Madara and save the vilage, what could be safed at least, Naruro released Kurama from himself, knowing he would die by doing so. But Kurama knew the Uchiha, meaning Sasuke, was heading towards them. After all the trouble of getting that annoying brat back to the leaf village, Sasuke had beem reluctant at first to change his ways but Naruto managed to do so. Naruto had wanted to become Hokage first, training hard to become one while Sasuke became an AMBU. But then this whole mess with Madara happened and here we are, Kurama with an dying Naruto and a village destroyed to the point the had to restart completely.
"Kurama?" The soft quiestioning voice of Naruto Uzumaki pulled Kurama out of his thoughts and back to the present. "Where is Sasuke?" Last the blond had known, Sasuke had been nearby. "He is coming to where we are, kid. Don't worry about it." Kurama said, not in the mood to say a lot, not when a lot could be said anymore. Kurama had all his chakra back by now and trying to make it as comfortable for his former host as he could.
"I will miss you." The blond wispered, breath sometimes catching his in throat. Kumama hummed at what the blond said. "For beings like me it should not matter if you say those words to me or not but I am going to miss you too." The powwrful fox demon said, sensing Sasuke would arive in less then two minutes. Kurama petted Naruto more. Sasuke arrived in less then two minutes, just like Kurama knew he would. But Naruto was not breating anymore. He was gone. Kurama got up, picking up Naruto. He turned to the Uchiha. "You're late." He said. giving Sasuke the blond. "Make sure he will rest well." The raven haired AMBU stared at the Kyuubi, speeshless and not knowing what to say, holding Naruto closer. "Give him the honour he deserves, will you?" The Fox demon requested. The other could only nod.
Kurmama nodded once and turned on his feet, starting to walk away, but with Naruto's headband in his claws. That was the last trinklet he would keep for a long time to come, in rerembrance of a grat hero.
And here we have the rewritten chapter. I am a lot happier with this one then what it was before. I hope you still liked this fanfic. :D