Okay this is my first fanfic so bear wiv me

Right anyway this is pre Harry sooooo lily's handwriting or thoughts is this and James's is this Sirius's is like this Remus's is like this and like a scene is this

Chapter 1

Dear diary

Back at hogwarts for my sixth year, really hope potter failed don't think I could stand it if he was still in my year. Sorry you don't know who I'm talking about his name's James potter but I call him potter cause he's the most annoying jerk in the world, oh hold on he's just come In the compartment gotta jet see ya

Lily

Lily closed her diary sharply and locked it with a spell so obviously, immediately Sirius tried to grab it but lily and her friends Abigail Scott and Madison sanders (abby and maddy) tugged it out of his grasp.

"Ok ok calm down only seeing who you're writing about," Sirius gasped.

"Well that's for lily to know and you NOT to find out," maddy said her cheeks growing hot.

Note to self: try to help with maddys crush on Sirius instead of trying to crush it like last year.

Hmm wonder if I could get sanders hooked up with Sirius and then I could get a date with Evans worth a try.

"I think the word get out would help here," abby announced.

"Right right we're going we only can in to say hello," James said turning away and beginning to walk away.

"Well you doing a foul job of it" lily shouted before the door closed

Diary it's me

Anyway went to say hello to Evans and co. to cut a long story short well lets just say it didn't go to well did I say how fab Evans is I just can't believe she doesn't want to go out with me whyyyyyy oh well.

James

Just as James potter closed his diary the train pulled into the station another year at hogwarts had begun.

What do you think? please review

Oh you should all know who Evans is or you really shouldn't be reading this fanfic

Gotta go

Bye