It was a beutiful night in konoha. I was training on my water technick(?) with out a care in the world. Because I was really just goofen off. As I dance on the water, I looked up at the moon and the stars they are truly beautiful. I was geting tired and it was around midnight so I decided that was enough training and started heading back.
The street's were deserted as expected. I all ways liked it better when it was quiet, It gave me time to think of the past few years. I had become a chunin. My team and I had grown alot closer each other. I had let my hair grow out, and over some time a couple of boy's started following me arond though I'm not sure why so I decided to ignore them. Naruto had come back about a year ago. And my crush on him that he never knew 'bout went away abut six months ago, but were still friends. Sasuke hasn't come back yet so he's still depressed.
*CRASH*
I was brought out of my thought's by a trash can falling over. 'It must of been a cat,' i thought to myself. As I started walking again I was stoped by an arm wraping around me, and another one going over my mouth. "You've grown hinata" that was the last thing I heard before I blacked out.
my name is line_
(Kidnappeder's pov)
As soon as she passed out, she fell on to me. I removed my hand from her mouth and put the cloth in my pocket. She had trully become beautiful over the year's, heck even more then I expected. Now holding her bridal style I left the villige wanting to get as far away as possible. I brought her to a cave in a place no one knew of. Seeing as it was our special place. I layed her down and tide her up, I didn't want her getting away from me now did I. After that I started a fire, then went to a dark gloomy corner and fell asleep
me: so what ya think good bad tell me this is my first story so give me some tip's also if you have any idea on what i shold put in the next chapter it relly help and flames are needed just try not to put them in rude ways. Im friken 11 for crying out loud
and i do not own naruto
and if you could excusemy grammer thank's
bye bye for now R&R