Hi it's me I have had this idea in my head for along time and would like to get it out. Please Critique but refrain from having a Bonfire of flames. Give suggestion I would be glad to hear it, but if it is a private idea please PM me.
Once there was a man, he was called the Rikudou Sennin. When he separated the jubi he made nine separate entities known as The Biju, nine incredibly powerful beings of chakra, however the soul and the body could not be destroyed. To fix this problem the sage sealed them both into the body's of his two younger twin brothers. The Chakra corrupted one, and the soul purified the other, as without a counter balance for the brother the world would be sent into chaos. The Sage seeing his brothers strife with each other and the world's imbalance sealed them away in separate locations along with the Jubi. This is the start of this tale.
On a humid night of October, Naruto Uzumaki was born, unfortunately as a birthday present, someone sent him a giant demon fox, otherwise known as the kyuubi, The Yondaime Hokage had to seal it in little Naruto. Also unfortunately his parents died on the same night, leaving him an orphan. Now normally he would be just a regular kid, but word got out that he was the fox reincarnated, so he was used as a way of payback for the hurt and pain the fox caused. Not physically,no even they had bounds, so one day they all just ignored him.
Eight Years Later
Our young hero was running away from a few of the fiercer people who had decided on his birthday, to chase him around. Some how he managed to get into the forest with the civilians still chasing him. You can imagine his surprise when he fell down into a hollow tree. In his shock he was silent, which was good as the hunters (what they call themselves) soon passed the tree in which he was in. Looking around the tree he saw the wood to be covered in strange shapes, swirls,circles,and what looked like letters that had been remade. They all seemed to go in one direction, this was the center or rather a laid down body. Naruto knowing no better poked the body with his foot, and kept poking it.
Suddenly his foot was grabbed and he was hanging upside down. There was a loud growl and as Naruto looked up, he found him self looking into silver eyes that showed much irritation.
Keep in mind that this is more of a prologue than a chapter of the story, I would appreciate some critique on it and expect a up date in a week or two.