So here's the first chapter of my story, please tell me what you think of it, if I should post more.
Btw, I don't own twilight
I opened my eyes, everything was so clear. I sat up, much faster then I expected, it startled me. I looked around, then I saw Jacob standing between the trees with a horrified expression on his face, then I remembered what had happened..
I was standing on the edge of the cliff, ready to jump, when I heard a voice 'Now now Bella, you're not really going to jump off that cliff, are you?' I turned around and saw Victoria standing with a victorious grin on her face. I couldn't respond, my voice didn't work anymore, I just stand there. Frozen. She took a step forward me 'so your guard dogs failed, as you can see' I still couldn't say anything.
'Lost your tongue?' she sneered
'I-I-I..' I didn't know what to say
'I-I-I' she repeated me sarcastic 'aaaah, no Edward here to save you, what sad' His name was like a torpedo of fire in my body.
'So I guess it's up to me then, huh?' she said and before I knew it I felt something sharp in my neck.
There was fire, everywhere in my body, I cringed screamed. I heard a familiar voice 'no no no no, I could this happen' he was crying. I wanted to reach out to Jacob, but I couldn't move anything, there was only pain, a fire racing through my body.
The fire was getting closer to my heart, my heart was trying to fight it, but it wasn't strong enough. My heart stuttered and then stopped, the fire was gone too. I felt numb, I didn't dare to open my eyes.
'Bella?' I heard Jacob, he was farther away now.
I looked at Jacob, his eyes were sad, I didn't know what to say. 'Jacob' I whispered, my voice sounded weird, like ringing bells. Then my throat started to burn, like someone had a iron shoved down it. Thirst. I grabbed my throat, I needed blood, now.
'Bella I'm so sorry, I didn't know you were out there' I heard Jacob, but I didn't really payed attention to him. I set of into the woods, trying to find some animals. I crossed a sweet scent, such a delicious sent, I wanted it. I turned and sprinted towards the scent, it was somewhere south. I heard voices, two humans, male. I crouched ready to jump, when two arms held me back 'BELLA NO!' I tried to get out of the arms and succeeded, but then in front of me where two giants wolves standing. I turned around, but there also where two giant wolves. Then I realized what was about to do, I felt embarrassed, I buried my hands in my face and knelled to the floor. 'oh my god'
Jacob put his arm around me 'It's alright Bella, it's alright'.
No it wasn't, it wasn't alright at all.
Alice POV
'Come on Jazz, let's go hunt' I begged, Jasper wasn't really himself, but I guess that was due the fact the depression radiating of Edward was really too much for Jasper.
I grabbed his arm and pulled him outside 'It's not your fault that Edward his behaving this way'
Jasper was blaming himself for what had happened at Bella's birthday, and that Edward left her. Nothing was the same after that, Edward was the whole sulking in his room, Jasper didn't felt any better, and Rosalie and Emmett took off on their own, they couldn't take this situation any longer. Emmett didn't want to leave, he felt like he needed to be there for Edward, but Rosalie was getting angrier by the day so he gave her her way, as always. Everyone missed Bella, but we couldn't speak of her or think of her, because Edward was getting worse every time someone mentioned or thought her name.
'I know, I know, I just can't help it' Jasper sighed. I rubbed his arms to comfort him, try to make him feel better. I thought about all our happy moments together and Jasper soon picked up the love that radiated of me.
We were midden in the hunt of a bear when I saw it. Jasper turned around 'what Alice, what did you saw?'
I just shook my head, this couldn't be, this couldn't be true. I saw it happening, I saw victoria attacking Bella, but that was all I saw. What had happened, was Bella dead, or was she also a vampire now, why couldn't I see more.
'Alice, what had happened?' Jasper asked worried, he noticed my horror
'Bella' I breathed
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