Author's notes
This is the first story I've submitted here, but don't hold back on your reviews. I'm really only submitting this because I want to become a better writer, so constructive criticism is encouraged. That being said, I think the narrative I've come up with will end up being an enjoyable read with quite a few surprises, but I understand that I'm not going to be able to reach the stars on my first submission.
My hope is that this fan story of mine will evolve as I write it, and I want to look back on the first few chapters when I'm finished and really see growth in myself as a writer. Perhaps I'll even re-write the whole thing when I'm done.
Now, about the prologue: If you read it, just let me tell you that it really is a prologue in the strictest sense. Nothing really happens at all in it, but it sets the groundwork for story. If you want fast-paced intros that hook you from the start, then skip to chapter one, decide if you like what you're reading, then read the prologue, or stop reading the story.
Lastly, I don't plan on writing any more notes before or after the chapters. I want to try and keep the pace going, and not break the mood with "Reality-Check" intermissions. If you want to know just why this chapter is so short, or don't understand something in that chapter, just let me know in the reviews, and I'll answer you as soon as I can,.
Please try to enjoy this bit of fan fiction (even if you have to try harder than I did writing it…)