This is a new story of mine, An Icecube in Hell. The Prologue is going to be confusing, sure, but the rest will come in soon. It'll be clearer then this, but still off, trust me, I think you'll like it.
A white wall.
A white wall. Strong Pine Sol.
A white wall. Strong Pine Sol. A hard chair and floor.
A white wall. Strong Pine Sol. A hard chair and floor. Nothing, dry.
A white wall. Strong Pine Sol. A hard chair and floor. Nothing, dry. "Talk."
Sight.
Sight. Smell.
Sight. Smell. Feel.
Sight. Smell. Feel. Taste.
Sight... Smell... Feel... Taste...
Hear...
No, I do not deserve
to hear...
Help...
No, I do not deserve
help me
No.
"Talk."
No, I do not deserve
to talk
"Talk, Daniel."
No. I am not
I have no
Stop...
Daniel
Voice
Stop.
Danny
Speak
Stop!
You know
You want to
STOP!
Come out
to play
STOP, PLEASE!
a tear...
crying...
no...
A white wall...
No, your face. Your face.
Your face.
Your face. Your aftershave.
Your face. Your aftershave. Your rough hand.
Your face. Your aftershave. Your rough hand. You.
Your face. Your aftershave. Your rough hand. You. Laughter.
Your laughter.
Help.
Stop... Please...
Help! Please, someone! Please!
He is hurting... me...
"Danny, please."
A soft face...
Not yours...
Help me, solf face.
I'm broken,
I'm crying,
I'm bleeding
and dying
I'm sorry.
I must have...
Hurt someone, right? To hurt like this...
To be hurt like this...
You. I taste you. I taste...
You.
I see
You
I smell
You
I feel
You (in me)
I taste
You
I hear
You
I.
Hate.
You.
Help me! Someone! Help me!
"Danny! Answer me! It's me! It's S—"
Help me, then! If you are here—
"Wake up!"
"Danny, wake up."
I'm not asleep, though. I can't wake up.
He's
in
side
...
me...
"HELP ME, SAM!"
Broken
"I'm here. Danny! I'm here!" She nuzzles my ear. "I'll always be here, I'll always love you..."
"Help me, Sam... He's in me..."
"No he's not, not anymore. You've been to hell and back, but now your back."
No, Sam... I'm still not back. Not all of me...
Whadaya think? I like it. THe chapters will be longer than this, trust me. This was like a teaser... a... very confusing teaser...
Review, please. I really want you guys' opinions. I want to know what you think he's thinking about, talking about. Where do you think he is? Physically, because mentally, it's obvious he's not all there.