Hey everyone. Here I am with an edited version of Dave I Blew Up Theodore. There will be a few things changed in this version, like having Theodore's growth being similar to that of Alvin's in Dave I Blew Up Alvin so I hope you like it and don't forget those reviews and suggestions especially to those who have not read my stories before. Also, my stories are kind of weird to those who haven't read mine yet.
Chapter 1: Theodore's Been Hit
Simon, a chipmunk in a blue turtleneck was working in his lab to pass the time. He was in the mood to tackle a project very big a few weeks ago so he began on a growth ray. He knew that it would be very unlikely that it would actually work but he figured he might as well do it. He added a few more wires and wiped away some sweat.
"Finally done. I hope." Simon said. He ran into the kitchen to grab something simple like an orange. He ran back down into his lab and placed the orange right in front of rays firing line. He flipped several switches and a loud roaring began to emit from the machine. He stood behind the machine and pressed the trigger just as Theodore barged into the lab.
"Hey Simon. What is.." he was cut off by Simon's growth ray hitting him. When Theodore barged in, it startled Simon enough to knock the growth ray that hit a mirror and reflected right at Theodore.
"Oh no." Simon said seeing his younger brother in a daze. He quickly got to Theodore to check him out. "Theodore are you okay?!" Theodore got up and shook his head.
"I think so."
"Good. I guess it didn't work then." Simon said staring at his machine.
"What didn't work?" Theodore was confused.
"What I accidentally hit you with was a growth ray, I didn't have very high hopes for it though." Simon explained.
"Was that what was making that loud noise. That's why I came down here."
"I guess. It was pretty loud wasn't it." Simon ran down to the machine and turned it off and went back to the living room with Theodore to watch some TV.
About 2 hours later, Dave came back with Alvin from Alvin's soccer game. Alvin was dribbling the ball as he was talking and bragging at Dave for how well he did.
"Hi Simon and Theodore." Dave said walking into the living room. "How was your day?"
"Fine." Both of them said. Simon and Theodore thought it was best that they don't talk about Theodore getting hit by Simon's ray since nothing really happened.
"That's good. Well I'm going to start on dinner." Dave left for the kitchen and began preparing dinner. By this time, Alvin had come back from upstairs changed into street clothes and sat on the couch next to Theodore.
"What are you guys watching?"
"Nothing. We're just channel surfing." Simon answered. Theodore meanwhile was adjusting his turtleneck's collar as it felt a little tight around his neck.
Well there it was. I hope you enjoyed this new version of Dave I Blew Up Theodore. I will probably do this with the rest of my stories eventually and just rewrite that whole thing so we'll see. Hope to get a lot of reviews and suggestions so see you next chapter.