Ok here we go again. This is an attempt to make things right. Hope y'all like it and you can understand her better. Thanks for sticking with me! Please review and share your thoughts.
Chapter 1: Introducing Joey
October 16, 1859 is when the Civil War started. My name is Joey Ann Creed and right now I'm in the middle of a battle field. Yes, I am a girl, but not now. I must dress like a man to stay with my good for nothing brothers.
I am 5'4, natural tan with few freckles on my face, short wild hair that's a mix between bronze and silver, and my left eye is mint green and my right eye is a pale blue. Here's the thing I am a Mutant. My ability gave me the name Mutt over the years by my brothers and it just stuck.
I can shift into a large dog that has fluffy Silver fur all over, with bronze ears, eyebrows, tail, and the small spots on my face. I some times get confused with a wolf but my ears are large and stick straight up like a German shepherd and the markings and fur of a Australian Shepherd. I am the size of a Great Dane and can grow to the size of an adult grizzly bear.
Currently, I am in my smaller dog form being pursued. Rifle-Muskets are firing and bullets are shattering on trees and wiz zing by my head. Ducking and swiftly moving through brush and dodging trees, I attack my enemy who gets in my way tackling them to the ground and going for the throat. I continue running, my paws are bleeding and bodies are scattered everywhere and blood is staining my fur. The smell of death and blood is everywhere. All I can think of is finding my brothers. 'Jimmy, Victor where are y'all?' I whine.
It takes me some time to find the two. We made a deal that if I was in dog form I could not talk at all and as a 'boy' I couldn't talk either. So basically I'm suppose to be mute and Victor gets a kick out of it. I bark in greeting and set to helping them with the soldiers attacking. "About time Mutt, been wondering where you were. Thought you died somewhere" Victor grins down at me while he shoots at a man close by him. I growl at him and narrow my eyes and clamp my jaws on a mans arm and drag him down, tearing at his skin. 'We can't die Victor, you know that'.
Ever since we got on that train when we ran away from home that night. Its been nothing but running, fighting, and me dressing like a boy to find work. I could hang if I'm found out. Jimmy and Victor have done a good job helping me hide who I am. But right now during this time, I wish I wasn't what I was. Whatever I was. Nothing but a killing machine, a monster, a... animal.
In the middle of this carnage, bullets, and blasts of cannons. The three siblings look like wild animals. Faces angry, painted with soot and clothes stained with blood and dirt. Joeys fur shining in the moon as she lunges at her target snarling. All wounds healed but bullets still lodged deep into flesh. By morning it will all start again and it will be all in a nights work for the Creed siblings.
So...is this any better? Hope so, please review. I will do time jumps from the different wars ok. I don't feel like doing the whole X-men thing, takes to long.