OKAY EVERYONE, IF YOU DO NOT READ THIS I WILL HAUNT YOU AND TORTURE YOU TILL YOU DO SO YOU BETTER READ THE BOLDED ITALIC WORDS OR ELSE!!!!!!!
Okay, I know everyone probably hates me for not updating any of my stories, buts lets put it this way. You're forced to stay home and study for exams, and then you have about three hours to do whatever, but you're exhausted even though you don't move around too much, would you really want to spend a lot of time writing a story when all you want to do is rest????? Well I sure don't.
Okay, I'm thinking about, even though I haven't them for very long, I have this new obsession of an idea of what I think is a really good story, and it's nagging me. You can read this first chapter, but if you think it sucks, then tell me, and I won't write it, but you have to read it first, because if you review and say, "IT Sucks!!!!" or something of that sort with no explanation, I will continue the story, assuming you didn't take the time to actually read my preview that i took so long to type and plan out.
This story is based off various Korean and Chinese dramas, and yes I'm chinese so I understand them, and I'm incorportating some things I believe will make this Maximum Ride story more interesting. Here goes! This chapter is somewhat I prologue/preview kinda thing. It will be rather long, I hope. I'll be introducing the characters. First off I'll be writing a summary, and then the characters, which are pretty many, you'll have to get used to them, and finally, I'll write a short preview of the actual prologue. Hope you'll enjoy it!!!
First though, I need to say my disclaimer!
Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride, James Patterson does. I do not own any of the Korean or Chinese drama ideas, they aren't mine. The only things that are mine are the characters I make up, which pretty much are the ones other than the Flock, Dr. Martinez, Ella, Ari, Lissa, Brigid, and Jeb.
NO WINGS!!!!!!!!!! Ordinary people, and don't worry I'm not changing the Flock into Asians, that be weird, I'm just using some ideas from the dramas, my story isn't at all like them, just some events reminded me of more Fax!!!!!!
And yes, this story is somewhat sad, but does have a happy ending, tons of FAX later on!!!! Some Niggy!
Okay, Enjoy! I'm blabbing, which I usually don't do, oops, I'm eating too much cookies!
Enjoy!!!
TaylorSwiftTwilightFan75
JK I'M NOT GOING TO HAUNT YOU, BUT IF YOU DON'T READ THE STUFF BEFORE THIS I WILL NOT LIKE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Summary:
Living an ordinary life, Maximum Ride has finally made the decision to follow her dream, become an actress. Though Max has a very stubborn personality, her mother forced her to learn many skills: dancing, singing, martial arts, running, swimming. To achieve her goal, Max encounters many hardships, but she has her friends that she has known for about all her life. Fang, Max's best friend, also seeks a career in acting, but as things come along, Max and Fang both realize that life isn't meaning for what they want, life is hard, life is unfair, life is made of decisions, responsiblity, and one thing that puts together the meaning of life, and their lives become too complicated to example. This story is filled with heart-filled love, and passion, but there is something more to it, it's about the meaning of life.
I know that was a horrible summary, but long story short. Max wants to be an actress, Fang wants to be an actor. they're best friends in the beginning, but they realize their love for each other, and the meaning of life, and that you can't act in life. Life is real, it's a one way road, you have to keep following it and you can't take a wrong turn, or you may find yourself somewhere you don't want to be.
I hope this summary isn't too shallow too you for your liking, but please remember to review just so I know if I should continue this story! Thanks!
Here are the characters!!!! Reminder: This is not just a Fax story! It's about problems in life, and how hard it is, so don't go begging me for tons of Fax, 'cause, to tell you the truth, I get all sappy when I write it!
Characters:
MAIN CHARACTERS:
Just an explanation, Max, Iggy, Gazzy, and Angel are siblings, along with Ella, but Ella is a half-sister, and Max doesn't take after Jeb, just because she hates him, and she named her last name as Ride.
Maximum Ride(Max):
An ordinary girl(not really, she's magical and so are the people really close to her), whose family is rich, and wealthy, a house everyone wants, but Max doesn't like living this kind of life. She feels like she's being trapped in a jail for all her life, and so she sneaks out one night to seek the future she wants control of.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: beautiful(as most people call her Princess), dirty-blone hair, hazel eyes that can turn shades of blue according to her mood, skinny but strong, tall
Character Traits: Headstrong, tomboy, hates girlie clothes, loyal, sensitive to little kids, especially her siblings, athletic, any traits I can't think of now that can be concluded from the books
Soulmate: Isn't obvious, definitely fang, but she doesn't know that yet!
Family: Siblings: Iggy, Gazzy, Angel, Ella
Parents: Jeb(she hates), (loves her)
Friends: Fang, Nudge, Krissy(Krystal), Sarah, Lissa(I know this sounds displeasing, but think about it, we already criticize her for flirting with Fang, but we actually don't really know her that well), Sera(based off Seraphina611572), Pebble( a nickname, based off STARszx), Kyle, Georgie(George), Will(William), Michael
Nicholas Wright(Fang):
A mysterious boy, whose family is living decently. He doesn't like talking, but he likes to act, probably because he's good at hiding emotions! Everyone calls him Fang for a reason, but he doesn't like to talk about it.(Chapter 2 or 3 says this little secret, just for a little joke chapter)
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Dark-black hair(darker than black, and yes I know it's weird), Dark blue-green eyes when he's happy, Olive-toned skin, tall, and strong, but most would say muscular
Character Traits: Silent, Likes Writing, Loyal, Caring, and other traits from the book
Soulmate: Hmmm, I have NOOO idea, hmmm... Max!
Family: Siblings: Nudge, Georgie
Parents: Mrs. Wright(Single)
Friends: Max, Iggy, Gazzy, Angel, Ella, Krissy, Kyle, Sera, Pebble, Will, Michael
Jeffrey Ride(Iggy):
A blind boy whose eye-sight never functioned well. He is Max's twin brother, but they don't like it. Iggy supports Max in anyway possible,and he helps Max run off. Iggy is a nickname that only Max, and Iggy himself know why that is his name.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Strawberry-blonde hair, blue eyes, tall, blind
Character Traits: Funny, loves cracking jokes, and you'd be surprised that he can be serious when he knows he has to be. He loves making bombs!!!!!!!!!!!!
Soulmate: Ummm, I'm actually not too sure, maybe Nudge, IDK
Family: Siblings: Max, Gazzy, Angel, Ella
Parents: Jeb, Dr. Martinez
Friends: Fang, Nudge, Georgie, Kyle, Sera, Pebble, Krissy, Will, Michael
Monique Wright(Nudge):
Motor-talking human. She loves shopping and clothes. she wants to become a fashion designer when she grows up. Loves her brother Fang very much, goes to acting school as well. Fang's little sister. She can talk for a mile probably.
Age: 15, high school freshmen
Physical Traits: Brown hair, eyes, and skin, Skinny, Pretty(but not beautiful)
Character Traits: Loves shopping, talkative, loyal, friendly, gullible
Soulmate: I don't know, I'll probably make it Iggy.
Family: Siblings: Fang, Georgie
Parents: Mrs. Wright(Single)
Friends: Max, Iggy, Gazzy, Angel, Ella, Krissy, Sarah, Sera, Pebble, Remy, Will, Michael
Matthew Ride(Gazzy):
Helps Iggy around the house, loves his siblings. Even though he's young, he's very protective.
Age: 13, middle school 8th grade
Physical Traits: Rather shortish,
Character Traits: Sweet, loving, protective
Family: Siblings: Max, Iggy, Angel, Ella
Parents: Jeb, Dr. Martinez
Friends: Fang, Nudge, Kyle, Georgie, Will, Michael, he doesn't really like too many girls!
Angel Ride:
Has a way of reading other's mind. Cute, innocent looking, but very mature. Max's littlest sibling and sister, looks up to Max like a mother.
Age: 11, supposed to be in elementary school, but she's in middle school 6th grade
Physical Traits: Just like Max, expect she has some curls
Character Traits: Sympathetic, Mature, Responsibly, Reliable
Family: Siblings: Max, Iggy, Gazzy, Ella
Parents: Jeb, Dr. Martinez
Friends: Fang, Nudge, Georgie, Krissy, Sarah, Sera, Pebble, Kyle, Will, Michael
Ella Martinez:
Max's half-sister, could be considered a follower. She follows Max's every word, and does everything anyone wants her to do. Good or bad? You decide. Ella is sweet and caring for her family. She tries her best to cheer everyone up when they are down in the dumps.
Age: A year younger than Max, which 16, high school sophomore
Physical Traits: Short, dirty-blonde hair, tall, skinny, rather a weakling, but wants to become like Max.
Character Traits: Caring, careful, precise, gullible
Soulmate: Doesn't have a soulmate yet, but she has a thing for Kyle, which isn't good!
Family: Siblings: Max, Iggy, Gazzy, Angel
Parents: Jeb, Dr. Martinez
Friends: Fang, Nudge, Georgie, Kyle, Krissy, Sarah, Sera, Pebble, Will, Michael
Dr. Martinez:
A very kind woman who takes care of Max, Iggy, Angel, Gazzy, and Ella like they were princes and princesses. She make really good desserts, especially cookies!
Age: Saying that would just be awkward, and I don't know how old she should be
Physical Traits: Caramel-colored hair, hazel-brown eyes, strong, tall.
Character Traits: Nice, hardworking, optimistic
Jeb Batcheler:
You think he's good, but then you think he's bad. What type of person is he?????
Age: Same like Dr. Martinez, IDK.
Physical Traits: I actually never thought about it
Character Traits: IDK, he's too weird.
George Wright(Georgie):
Fang's little brother, and he doesn't have a weird name, or nickname. He cares a lot about hie brother, and sees Fang as a role model. He looks out for Max like a brother to a younger sister.
Age: 16, high school sophomore
Physical Traits: Unlike Fang, he has ordinary brownish black hair, white skin, skinny, but strong.
Character Traits: Loves reading, athletic, intelligent, shy, but not as silent as Fang
Soulmate: Hasn't found his yet, you never know, life's a mystery.
Family: Siblings: Fang, Georgie
Parents: Mrs. Wright(Single)
Friends: Max, Iggy, Gazzy, Angel, Ella, Kyle, Krissy, Sarah, Sera, Pebble, Will, Michael
Brigid Reilly:
Hmm, I don't have much to say about her, what do you think she???? Of course, a freakin' whore!
Age: 18, high school junior
Physical Traits: Blondie, Skinny, weakling, any ordinary person could probably beat her up.
Character Traits: She is on the cheerleading team, yet she's soo weak, she's only allowed on the team because of her Mouth!!!
Soulmate: Hmmm, I wonder. SHe doesn't have one, but she believes Fang is it, and blames Max for getting in the way.
Family: Siblings: Lissa
Parents: Jordan Reilly, Megan Reilly
Friends: Lynn(Leanne), Jessi(Jessica), Remy, Heather, Sam(Samuel)
Lissa Reilly:
You're going to have to feel bad for her some time. Lissa's sister, Brigid is the total influence. Lissa grew up through Brigid's preppy girl life, since she was little. Lissa isn't a WHORE, it's just her sister's influence. She ends up running away from home, and accidently meets Krissy and Max in a store, all alone, and what do they do?? Take her of course, they arent meanies.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Red-head, ummm, SKINNY, but not a weakling, not really tall
Character Traits: she's actually really nice deep down, and outgoing
Soulmate: She knows she doesn't have one, though she does wish it was Fang.
Family:Siblings: Lissa
Parents: Jordan Reilly, Megan Reilly
Friends: Lynn(Leanne), Jessi(Jessica), Remy, Heather, Sam(Samuel)
Max's BEST Girl friends:
They're all loyal to Max. Nerds, Geeks, you can put it that way, but they aren't. The five girls stick out for one another. They all end up going to the Acting School for Talents. Sarah isn't really part of their group, but you can consider it!
Krystal Lenning(Krissy):
You know she's smart, and you know she's loyal, but did you know she keeps the best secrets hidden, and gives the best advice ever. Max's number one friend adviser
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Black-hair, dark brown eyes that look like black, they turn blue when she's extremely happy, skinny, strong
Character Traits: Loves swimming, reliable, loyal, caring, optimistic, plays piano
Soulmate: Hmm, let's put it this way, Will was her ex, now she treats him like a overly close brother/sister relation, but her so called soulmate is Kyle
Family: Siblings: Sarah
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Lenning
Friends: Max, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, Angel, Ella, Sera, Pebble, Kyle, Will, Michael(Ehhh, not really), Georgie
Serena Lenning:
An overly protective sister, who acts like a mother to all of the younger ones.
Age: 18, high school senior!!!!
Physical Traits: Long, black hair, brown eyes, skinny, and strong
Character Traits: Loves to swim, plays piano, does martial arts with Max, loving, caring, childish
Soulmate: Surprisingly, she doesn't have one.
Family: Siblings: Krissy
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Lenning
Friends: Max, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, Angel, Ella, Sera, Pebble, Georgie
Seraphina Windbrook(Sera):
Quiet, content Sera is always up for challenges!!!! Loyal to Max, she still gets jealous of her, rarely though!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Brown hair, blue eyes, Skinny, medium height!
Character Traits: Sweet, honest, caring, loving
Soulmate: Ummm, IDK, Sera you are so going to tell me about someone you wish was your soulmate!!!!
Family: Siblings: Pebble(Pebble was adopted, but she kept her old last name)
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Windbrook
Friends: Pebble(best friend), Krissy, Max, Fang, Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, Angel, Ella, Kyle, Michael, Will, Georgie
Persephone Twinsbrook(Pebble):
Loves to write stories, and whenever she doesn't understand something, or she finds something extremely useful or something well to remember, she writes a song, poem, or story to represent it.
Age: 17 high school junior
Physical Traits: Uhhh, brownish-blonde hair, aqua-green eyes, tall, pretty skinny
Character Traits: Talkative, persistant, creative
Soulmate: You also need to tell me, and I'll this character into the story!
Family: Siblings: Sera
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Windsbrook
Friends: Sera, Max, Fang, Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, Angel, Ella, Kyle, Krissy, Michael, Will, Georgie
The BAD Girls(Along with Brigid and Lissa, but Lissa was forced to join):
These girls are considered the highest in popularity in highschool. They're cheerleaders. Snuck-up ******* as Max would put it. Each one of them is chasing a certain good guy, but they might have been taken!
Julie Earnings(Lynn):
Julie, loves the name Lynn(everyone calls her Lynn), before Krissy was Will's girlfriend, was Will's ex-girlfriend, but because she was too pushy, Will broke up with Lynn, and started dating Krissy, so, Lynn hates Krissy
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Black, short hair, rather short, skinny though
Character Traits: Snobby, protective, very stressed
Soulmate: She believed it was Will, and still believes it
Family: Siblings: None, she's a spoiled-brat!
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Earning
Friends: Brigid, Lissa, Jessi, Erin, Remy, Sam, Devin, Kevin, Asher
Jessica Maidling(Jessi):
Jessi, the best cheerleader for the juniors. She, even though Brigid doesn't admit it, is the most popular kid in school, and believes she can get everything, and everyone to be hers, including Fang.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: brown hair, skinny, but strong, rather short, brown eyes
Character Traits: Laughs at any mistake(hers, or anyone elses), born Leader, good actor
Soulmate: Obviously, every girl thinks it's Fang
Family: siblings: None
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Maidling
Friends: Brigid, Lissa, Erin, Remy, Sam, Devin, Kevin, Asher, Lynn
Erin Brooks:
She's not as mean as you think, but then again she can be!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Smooth light brown hair, blue eyes, rather tall
Character Traits: Rather nice, smart, insecure
Soulmate: She wants Kyle to be it
Family: Siblings: None
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Brooks
Friends: Remy, Lissa, Brigid, Jessi, Sam, Devin, Kevin, Asher, Lynn
Remy Hills:
One of the nicest girls around, but she got swarmed into the world of evilness, and now she can't get out of it, but she tries!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Blonde hair, blue eyes, skinny, tall
Character Traits: Kind, gullible, intelligent
Soulmate: She's chasing Michael, but he isn't interested
Family: Siblings: a younger brother who doesn't really play a role in the story
Parents: Mr. Hills, no mom : (
Friends: Brigid, Lissa, Lynn, Jessi, Erin, Sam, Devin, kevin, Asher, Kyle, Michael
Erica Kempler(pronounced AIR-ri-ca):
Hmmm, most people call her nice, but if you know her bad side, then you wouldn't say that.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Long, straight, dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, tall, skinny
Character Traits: social, popular, loves singing, intelligent
Soulmate: She likes Iggy, but what do you know? He's not interested!
Family: Siblings: None!
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Kempler(she's adopted though)
Friends: Brigid, Lissa, lynn, Jessi, Remy, Erin, Sam, Devin, Adam, Asher
The Good Boys(Along with Fang, Iggy, and Georgie):
All these boys are who you consider the most popular boys around. Even though Max is pretty and all, she's not popular, but these guys don't care, they like who she is for who she is.
Kyle Clemingon:
Kyle, a sweet charming boy, is on the high school track team. Kyle used to like Erin, but since she turned hime down on homecoming, he hasn't felt that way anymore. Then he met Krissy in his history class, and they instantly became like best friends. Soon, Kyle started dating her, and now Erin hates Krissy for it.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Blonde hair, blue eyes, skinny, tall
Character Traits: Sweet, charming, friendly, honest, funny
Soulmate: Pretty much Krissy!!!
Family: Siblings: None
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Clemingon
Friends: Fang, Iggy, Georgie, Will, Michael, Max, Angel, Nudge, Ella, Sera, Pebble
William Mellings(Will):
Used to date Lynn, but because of her sluttyness, he dumped her, and started dating Krissy, but eventually, they figured they were fit more to be friends, but now they act like really close brother and sisters, so Kyle gets jealous sometimes, but still considers Will his friend!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Blonde, bushy hair, blue eyes, tall, skinny
Character Traits: athletic, kind, caring
Soulmate: Um, no one just yet
Family: siblings: one older sister, but isn't in this story really
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Mellings
Friends: Krissy, Max, Fang, Iggy, Gazzy, nudge, Angel, Ella, Sera, Sarah, Pebble, Remy, Michael, Georgie
Michael Tuskin:
Like Kyle, he is on the high school track team. Michael near Krissy in elementary school, but they didn't go to the same middle school, so things between them are rather awkward! One thing pretty weird about him is that even at this age, he's never felt any lust for someone, and he's still not interested in any girls!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: Tall, skinny, strong, blonde-short hair, brown eyes
Character Traits: Funny, kind, intelligent
Soulmate: Doesn't have one yet!
Family: Siblings: None
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Tuskin
Friends: Max, Fang, Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, Angel, Ella, Sera, Pebble, Krissy, Georgie, Will, Kyle
THE BAD BOYS:
These boys would be considered the hottest boys around. They're freaks, and all they want to do is have love, if you know what I mean. EW!!!!!!!!!!!
Samuel Fields (Sam):
Some idiot who's obsessed with Max, and tries to get her heart, but obviously her heart is for Fang, not Sam!!!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: brown hair, golden eyes, tall, strong
Character Traits: Stupid, persistent, stubborn
Soulmate: Wants Max, but nope!
Family: Siblings: NONE
Parents: Mr. and Mrs. Fields
Friends: Brigid, Lissa, Lynn, Jessi, Erin, Remy, Devin, Kevin, Asher
Devin Larn:
Has a twin brother names Adam, but they are total opposites. One nice, one mean, can you guess who's who? Well, Devin is a freak, and Adam well, isn't as bad.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: dark-brown hair, brown eyes, short
Character Traits: Hmmm, I haven't thought through about this one, you'll figure it out in the story though!
Soulmate: Do I have to Max down? Well I am, sorry!
Family: Siblings: Adam
Parents: Mr. Larn(no mom)
Friends: Brigid, Lissa, Sam, Asher, Lynn, Jessi, Erin, Erica, Remy
Adam Larn:
One of the nicest mean boys around that you could find. He's got a weak spot for love, and he's really sensitive too even though he tries to put on a tough face! He seems really social, but actually he only trusts three people, Sam, Devin, and Asher, oh and Krissy, but she doesn't really talk to him that much!
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: brown soft hair, brown eyes, shortish
Character Traits: friendly, funny, intelligent, nice
Soulmate: Wishes he could have Krissy!
Family: Siblings: Devin
Parents: Mr. Larn(no mom)
Friends: Sam, Asher
Asher Finn:
He loves sports, and he's really cool, only if he wasn't a freak like all of the other boys here. He's someone who clings onto you and never lets go, just like leeches.
Age: 17, high school junior
Physical Traits: black hair, brown eyes, tall
Character Traits: athletic, weird, clingy
Soulmate: Guess??? Well, it's... Ella!!!!
Family: Siblings: None
parents: Mr. and Mrs. Finn
Friends: Adam, Sam, Devin, Brigid, Lissa, Lynn, Jessy, Erin, Erica, Remy
Now, that I have finished talking about the characters, I have a little more information about them that makes them not normal. Most all of the good people have some sort of power of an element, and they don't know about it just yet, but as they continue acting school they learn to control it. Also, everyone expect parents will be going to the Acting school of Talent! Here are the good people's powers! They're sorted by element, not name!
Water: Krissy
Earth: Sera
Fire: Iggy
Air: Max
Light/Lightning: Nudge
Dark: Fang
Physic: Angel
Ice: Kyle
Lava: Gazzy
Storm: Pebble
You'll learn about what powers they have along the way in the story. Oh, I just thought of an idea, I'll make side stories talking about l ittle adventures they took in their unique lives, hope you'll like those!
I know the characters are going to make you confused, but please try to remember them. I'm sure you'll get used to them!
And, I would put up the prologue, but I believe this chapter is best as it is! Please review to tell me how you think the story is goin to be!
Thanks!
I'm flying out!
~TaylorSwiftTwilightFan75